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HI! im just trying to write something.

so here it is.please comment if you like.

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CHAPTER 1

STRANGER WITH NO MEMORIES

 

 

It was hot day in ocean breeze town.

two boys and one girl runned to the ice cream seller.

older boy was Yoru and younger was Dan.

the girl with them was Luna.

"Aww...Its melting all ready!"Dan moaned.

"I told you to not chose creamy ones!"Said Yoru.

"Dont be sad ,Dan.There is always lemonade to cool you."Luna said and tried to comfort Dan.

"Huh?"Dan stopped.

"Whats now?your freezing already?"

"Whos that?"Dan asked and pointed a man that standed under the tree and he was bleeding blood on his left cheek.

"He is hurting!"Dan yelled and runned to the man.

He stopped near the man,when he sawed a sword in his hand.

"Are you hurting?"Dan asked.

"W-ho ar-e you...?"Man asked painfully voice.

"I dont think we know each other,but im Dan..."Dan introduced.

"Cute..."Said womans voice.

Behind them,big clowing hole opened.

Inside it a woman,with strange looking dress walked to them slowly.

"Was that fight too much for you to handle,Ian?"Woman asked without moving her mouth.It was like voi ce surrounded them.

"You!"Ian said and rised his sword and pushed Dan cruely into ground.

"So you still remember...Maybe i didnt erase your mind too much!"Woman lauched.

"SHUT UP YOU HEARTLESS WITCH!!!"Ian screamed and begined to run toward the woman.

Woman smiled and her eyes begin glowing red light.

She sweeped her hand and darkness hitted Ian into face.

Ian felled on his knees.

Woman walked to the Ian,crabbed his neck and begined to kiss him.

Ians eyes becamed red and empty and Dan yelled.

"NOOO!"

Dan didnt actually do anything...

a Sword appeared to his hand and he hitted a woman with it.

Woman felled to ground,without no wound.

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I think you should try to describe actions and emotions a little more.

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CHAPTER TWO

DISSAPPEARENCE.

 

Woman standed up and looked at Dan very angrily.

"Pathetic children!Dont bother me,when im erasing mind of this man!"She screamed.

"Im not sure what you mean by that!But im not gonna let you kill anyone!"Dan yelled back.

"Kill...?"Woman said and laugted gloomy.

"When you said that,i could kill YOU!"

Woman snapped her fingers and summoned a monster from nothing.

"Dan!"Yoru yelled and pushed woman again to the ground.

Monster tried to slam Dan,but he jumped away from its giant hand.

"What i supposed to do with this?"Dan yelled and tried to swung his sword to monsters feet,but didnt get any close.

Woman tried to sweep darkness on Yoru,but Yoru runned behind the tree that was soon cutted by womans powers.

"Whoa!"

"Dont piss me off kiddo!"Woman yelled and and chased Yoru around and tried to hit him with dark spheres.

"STOP!"Luna yelled.

Ian standed up and rised his sword.

He cutted monster from the middle.

"Thanks..."Dan said tiredly.

"Now where was we...?"Ian said and turned around to the woman.

Woman let Yoru alone and laughted.

"Youre pathetic!How many times you want me to finish you?"Woman asked.

"So many times until you finally die!"Ian yelled and swunged his sword.

"I dont have time for this...First crazy sword hugger and then these kids..."Woman sigh.

She opened another portal and summoned huge storm upon the town.

"AAAAH!"Luna screamed,when woman caught her and jumped to the portal.

"Nooo!"Yoru jumped after them and portal closed.

Wind was too powerful.

Ian and Dan both flied to the air.

"Okay...Whats going on?"Dan asked.

"Nothing to worry about.Its one of my normal days..."Ian said.

"Normal?I dont wanna know whats those special days of yours holds in..."

Another portal opened and Ian and Dan flied to it.

"Well...Nows its a bit special..."Ian mutters.

"Usually i can save me myself..."

 

 

 

They appeared to wooden room,which was cooler than town they was.

"Shenda?Was that you?"Ian asked from the house.

"Of course it was!Who else could help you?Youre father???"

Throught the door appeared a woman,Shenda.

She looked a bit like native american.

"I sensed you was in trouble..."Shenda said and stopped stair to Dan.

"Who is this?"

"Dan...This boy helped me so i can still remember a bit..."Ian said.

"And think..."Shenda completed the sentence.

"Who was that woman?"Dan asked.

"We,or anyone dont know her real name...Were just call her a Woman..."Shenda said.

"We gotta tell him some things..."Ian said and standed up.

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CHAPTER THREE

DARK PROMISE

 

"Let me go!"Luna cried.

Woman didnt answer or care shes shaking girls hand so much its hurting her...Woman wanted to revenge those childs that disturbed her mission to make Ian completely mindless and harmless and also she wanted to revenge for killing her beloved monster.

They walked to huge black door and Woman kicked it open.

They continue walking and Luna heard doors slam against the wall.

"Master!"Woman yelled.

"What is it my beautiful and evil girl?"Man answered.

"Ian escaped!"She said.

"Calm down or i have to whip you for it."Master said.

Woman taked deep,slow breath and continued.

"Ian escaped..."

"Is that so?Bad thing for you..."

"But i didnt fail much!"Woman said quickly.

"I did erase lots of his memories...I almost had the deep ones in my lips,but his idiotic girlfriend attacked me and sended Ian to somewhere else!"Woman said and her eyes turned to bright red and looked like they were in fire.

"What you do after that?"Master asked.

"I killed that girl and captured her soul with others..."Woman tapped her necklace.

"I followed Ian and almost had him,but these childrens disturbed me and i haf to escape!"

Master looked from Woman to the Luna.

"Whos that?"

"I kidnapped her so i can had my revenge to those kids..."

"Youre going to kill her?"Master asked.

"No...I have something better in my mind..."

 

 

 

"And why are you after that Woman?"Dan asked.

"Non of youre business!"Ian speaked sharply.

"Actually,Woman and Ian are both after each others.But i dont think they have same reasons..."Shenda said.

"I haf to go now..."Ian said and standed up.

"But...why?"Shenda stuttered.

"I have to go looking for Arian..."

"Whos that?"Dan asked.

"His girlfriend."Shenda sighed.

"She is not!Arias is just good friend!"Ian roared.

"Then why are you so worried about her,when you haf to protect and prepare this boy?"Shenda said.

"I...I thought..."

"That im going to do that for him? You should know i have other things to do!"Shenda yelled.

Ian looked at her angrily.

"Excuse me,but what for you have to prepare me?"Dan asked carefully.

"That Woman is so twisted of vengions. I think you and youre friends are in serious danger..."Shenda said.

"Danger?You mean,she is going to kill me,Yoru and Luna?"Dan said and thinked his friends,those are now with Woman.

"No...She can do a lot of worse than kill..."Ian said quietly.

"Can you fight?"Shenda asked from Dan.

"Yes. I and Yoru have practiced many times,but i never havent fight for real monsters."

"I can teach you to use some magic..."Shenda said and taked Dan with her to other room.

Ian watched them.

"a Boy and Shenda...They are in my way to kill Woman and keep my promise to him..."He thinked.

"Everything is going to be ruined because of them..."

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CHAPTER FOUR

THREE ENERGIES

 

Four days later Dan has learned some fighting and using of magic.

Shenda still dont let him go outside and she said Dan should stay only in department and practicing gym so he cant go in basement or forbidden rooms.

Shenda also takes care of Ian and makes sure he dont ran away to find Woman or more troubles.

"Lady tyrant..."Ian mutters.

"You arent full recovered yet!"Shenda yelled.

Ian and Shenda fighted many times in hour and Dan was sick of it and is also bored for small dapartment and practice gym...

Dan decided to open one of doors that leads to forbidden rooms.

He closed door and walked throught dark corridor and used flameball-magic to seeing.

After few minutes,Dan camed into big room.

It was like laboratory.

Walls was filled with machines,generators and computers.

Opposite from the door was two huge glasspipes and inside the left one was dark purple liquid and right one was light green liquid.

Between them was small glasspipe that connected huge ones to each others.

Liquid streamed from both classpipes and in middle of small pipe,liquids was fighting for which liquid could take over both pipes.

In middle of small,connecting pipe,liquids fusioned to blue liquid.

Dan went closer to see better them.

When he stepped near the dark purple liquid,it tried to attack on him throught the class.

Dan putted his hand on class,but it wasnt class...it was water that has been enchanted to look like class.

Dan felled throught the water and dark purple liquid attacked.

It streamed into his mouth to his body and Dan feeled like he is gonna be drowned.

He tried to scream help,but liquid disabled his voice.

He also tried to escape throught waterwall,but it feeled like class in that side.

In the second he thought,he is gonna die,someone crabbed his hand and pulled him out of the waterpipe.

That someone pushed him to other waterpipe and in liquid of light green he felt pretty good and dark liquid dissappeared around him...

Then someone take him out of there and Dan see a man,whos looking like scientist.

"Boy,what were you doing there?Its not safe to jump to swimming into energy of night."Man said.

"Sorry...I...I was just..."Dan tried to explain.

"Its okay. The point is i saved you in time..."Man said and turned for looking the pipes.

"What are those?"Dan asked.

"These here are the most balanced form of energy..."Man said and pointed the dark purple liquid.

"This is "Nightlyrs"energy."He pointed to light green liquid.

"This here instead is "Dreamope"."Then he pointed to connection of these energies.

"This is more rareful than other twos that can made it up..."the balancion"!"Man said like he would kiss it.

"What are they for?"Dan asked.

"For using their powers,it can do many things...Like Woman is consumed by nightlyr,she is getting really evil and powerful and if she dont watch out,she turns to monster in the second."

"WOW!Turning to monster?Can i try?"Dan asked with enthusiasm in his eyes.

"Absolutely NO!!! Its dangerous and painful process...just look at Ian..."Man putted his hand in his mouth.

"What?"

"Nothing!Nothing!Go back to upstairs immediatly!"Man screamed and pushed him out of the room.

Dan walked up on stairs.

"Ian...is consumed by nightlyr? Consumed by evil?"

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CHAPTER FIVE

TRAVEL BEGINS

 

Dan didnt tell anything about his knowings of Ian consumed by monstrous power of nightlyr.

Man in basement was Ians stepfather called Lenseye.

He was researcing something for Shenda,but as usual,they kept answers away from Dan.

Dan hated being treated like a kid (That he is).

Dan becamed to afraid Ian.He scared that power inside him and scared also,Ian turns to monster.

 

"We should start searching for clues..."Shenda said.

"...about Woman?"Ian asked.

"No,you obsessed stalker! Aranol!"

"Damn...not him!"Ian squeak and kicked the wall.

"You know,he would give us some answers about hmm..."the thing we tried to rebuild"."Shenda said carefully.

"I just wont care about your business! Its stupid okay! I want revenge and find my girlfrie...friend."Ian said and becamed to sulk.

Shenda sighed,opened a portal,beckoned Dan to enter it and captured Ians hand and throwed him throught the portal.

"Arent you coming?"She asked from lenseye.

"No.I just wait here and try to find any information of anything..."Leneye said.

"Fine."Shenda sighed and entered the portal.

Portal dissappeared and Lenseye sighed by relief.

 

 

Shenda,Ian and Dan appeared into laboratory area called town and everything there was,was big buildings and their roofs was filled by satelites and machines.

"Is Aranol scientist...?"Dan asked.

"How did you quess..."Ian asked sarcasticly.

"Umm...nothing..."Dan said carefully.

"Lets be careful.They dont like visitors."Shenda said.

"Fine by me...I hate these guys."Ian said and waved his hands tiredly.

They walked inside the biggest building and Dan was suprised the corridors was empty from the machines.

After few minutes,monsters appeared from side door.

"Great!They are small and ugly..."Ian said and summoned his sword.

Shenda taked out her whip "Scalpper" and Dan summoned his sword.

Shenda attacked quickly and sweeped one of the monsters.

Ian destroyed one with single hit in its chest.

"Dan!Use magic and help.!"Shenda yelled and tried to strangle her monster.

"Rock wave!"Dan spelled and sweeped his arm and stones appeared into air and cutted monster from its center.

"Good.It seems like you have learned something."Shenda said and smiled.

"Lets go!These were too easy y know!"Ian said and they continues walking.

 

 

Few minutes later Shenda opens the door of Aranols office.

"Mr.Aranol?"She called.

"Im busy...Oh,its you."Aranol said and turned to them.

"Is it ready?"Shenda asked.

"Yes!Of course!Here!"Aranol said and throwed a small machine to Shenda.

"And now...what are you researcing?Where are the others?"Shenda asked angrily.

"I dont know what are you talking about..."

"Now i get it!"Ian said.

"Those monsters were experiments of yours!You turned your workmates to monsters!"

"What?"Dan asked and thinked thats not true.

Aranol looked a bit upsetted,but smiled.

"Its a small sacrifice for research...After all they are in pure form of humanity now..."

"Pure form?"Shenda said quietly.

"You mean you have been exposed them to nightlyr?"Ian asked.

"Why yes.You know that better than anyone...heehee!"Aranol laughed and Dan begined to afraid him a bit.

"Dont say that!Nightlyr in me isnt my fault!"Ian yelled.

"Yes...But youre pure,except you havent been taken youre true form yet...like youre father..."

"Hey listen nerd...my father?What you know abot him?!"Ian roared.

"Id like to answer to youre laughable question,but im a bit in hurry to somewhere else..."Aranol said and becamed walk to the door.

"Your not going anywhere!"Ian said and tried to block his way.

Aranol snapped his finger and summoned Deep grave (Name of rare monster created by Aranol) and runned throught the door while Deep grave blocked Ians way.

"I hate your friend more and more..."Ian said to Shenda.

"He is not my friend!"Shenda yelled.

"Anyway,should we destroy this monster before it ates us?"Dan asked.

Deep grave roared and hitted Ian who flied throught the air and crushed to bookcase.

"Oww...that was more powerful than the others."Ian said and standed up.

Deep grave roared again and smashed Aranols work table to the peaces.

Shenda jumped and whipped it to hand.

Ian runned behind Deep grave and slashed it to its back.

Dan didnt have the courage to go closer the monster so he tried to stay away from it.

"Thunderlake!"Shenda said and summoned huge lightning ray to the Deep grave and Ian finished it by piercing its stomach and Deep grave dissappeared.

"Why didnt you help us!"Ian yelled to Dan.

"I...i...i..."Dan stuttered.

"WHY!!!"

"Ian!Dont yell to him!Dan is just a child..."Shenda said and walked between them.

"Child that says he can fight and then freezes like old man in bus stop!You haf to admit he is useless!"

Shenda slapped him to cheek.

"Shut up! Maybe he isnt strong,but at least he isnt such a jerk like you!"Shenda said.

Dan begin to shed tears.

"Lets get going...we have work to do..."Shenda said and opened portal.