Text Hawkie's stories: Wooden Star ( Ven, Terra and Aqua in different story )

[Lu Xun 2,069]

_{Cool chapter!}

 

_{Keep going on, hawk!}

[Hunter Hawk 392]

Just wondering... do you want this story to continue?

 

Or are you too obssesed with others ( like Power of Nature, Fallen Angel or Kingdom Hearts 3 )?

 

Anyaway, say that loud and clear cuz I wanna know what others think about my very first story, I mean KH fanfiction.

[stardust902 8]

definetly continue,love ur story man been dying to read new chapters. would be a shame to leave it on a cliff hanger ya know xxx

[stardust902 8]

like both "the wooden star" and "ven fallen angel", they are the only 2 i read cause they r tht gd

[starlol9 39]

Loving it!!

[Hunter Hawk 392]

After such a long time… I finally decided to write the next chapter! Sorry for keep you waiting.

 

For the ones who haven’t read all previous chapters (there are twenty of them!) I made a short summary.

This is Ven, Aqua and Terra fan fiction, where all three are related. Story begins when their home is destroyed by mysterious creatures called Pure Ones and they got separated, because of it. But when they finally find each other, a lot of creepy things starts happening ( Ven is cursed, Aqua is captured… ). Terra manage to bring Ven to the KCW ( Keyblade Crystal Wielders ) who cure him from the curse, by turning him into one of them. They also found out about Painer who’s in charge of the Pure Ones and seem to be looking for one unique object – Ven! He even captures Aqua who’s now a prisoner and Ven and Terra need to save her…

 

Chapter Twenty-one: Shadow Eyes

 

“And now just catch it!” Ness said to Ven.

 

Ven already learned all sorts of new powers. His ability of the sky was incredible. Controlling a flying Keyblade, making small tornados or wind blasts, cutting the air… Now he was learning how to make a boomerang effect. It was kinda funny thing, because no matter how far he threw it, it always came back.

 

“I got it!”

“Well, that’s good and I must say I’m impressed. I haven’t seen many KCW who learned all those powers in one day.”

“Did I learn all of them?”

“Not yet. I saved the most powerful for the end.”

“And that is…”

 

Ness started glowing before Ven even finished. He turned into a hawk with shining light feathers, similar to his hair.

 

“Wow, how did you do that?”

 

Hawk flew around him and landed on the rock.

 

“This is one of the main powerful abilities. A transformation into your sky or land form. The shape of the sky or land power, with speed, power or magic, shows your true form. In a body of hawk or wolf. You and I have both sky and speed, a perfect balance, so you won’t have trouble with it.”

“You mean I can actually do that?”

“Yes, but you need to be extra careful while doing it.”

“How can I do that then?”

“Transformation into your true form is activated by certain thought, memory or will. First just close your eyes and think what is in your head that matters the most. And remember, your power is in the crystal.”

 

Ven sat on the ground and closed his eyes. His green crystal was still in the pocket, right next to the Wayfinder. He didn’t know where’s Xyle’s is, but he some sorta felt its presence.

While he was thinking, a white shape appeared in front of him.

 

“How do you feel?” Xyle asked.

“Strange… there’s nothing here, just my will.” Ven replied.

“That’s true, but do you know what matters the most?”

“I don’t know… there so many things… by the way what did you have?”

“Me? I had land and magic. As for the transformation… I had the memory about me and Ky.”

“Right, I have to find that too.”

“Good luck then… oh, and don’t forget the first promise.”

“I won’t, but I feel like someone is watching me all the time.”

“Then tell that to Lenne only. Believe me, he can keep a secret.”

“Ok.”

 

His will was focused on the one memory, the one with Terra and Aqua. Light appeared around him as he felt pulsing crystal in his pocket. For a second he thought that might be it, but he was soon disappointed. Light was just for a show, there was no magic. That really made Ven sad, but it didn’t make a big deal to Ness. He only smiled.

 

“It’s alright if you don’t know how to transform on the first try. Believe me, I managed to do so for no more than a month.”

“But what if I can’t.”

“As long as you believe, you can.”

 

Ven was about to say something when whistle was heard. Ness’s face became serious as some of the Crystal Wielders passed by.

 

“We need to get back.” he said to blonde.

“Why so sudden?”

“Looks like something happened.”

 

Boy was a bit confused, but he trusted Ness and followed him back.

At least fifty Crystal Wielders were gathered around three a bit older wielders. All of them were talking as they were showing different pictures. Terra was there too, memorizing every picture he saw. As he noticed Ven he went closer to him.

 

“What happened?” blonde asked confusedly.

“That guy from before, Xeno done some spying with another one. They both managed to see all the underground’s corridor, but while returning back someone spotted them. Some Pure Ones appeared and found out that we’re spying on them.”

“How do you know all this? And why is everyone making so big fuzz about it?”

“Lenne explained most of the things to me. Now those creeps know we’re preparing rescue mission. That’s why they called everyone. To execute it as soon as possible.”

“Does that mean we’re going to rescue Aqua right now?”

“I don’t’ know. Those head guys need to discuss some things.”

“Like what?”

“After Xeno and his companion were spotted, they managed to save some very young Keyblade Wielders. That guy, Zige then didn’t manage to save himself. Kids are now with Zyra, both of them are injured.”

“I’ll go help.”

“Ven, wait.”

 

Younger brother quickly ran towards the Zyra’s house. Ven went to another room where very young boy was taken care of by Loona and her brother. Terra soon came after him, looking at the blindfolded girl who was leaning forward at the bed. On it was little girl who was hardly breathing. She had many cuts on her arms and when Terra looked at her brown hair he realized who she was.

“Lily!” brown haired shouted as girl looked weakly at him.

“Te… rr..a…” she only managed to say.

“Lily! What happened to you?”

 

There was no reply from a girl who just lay. Zyra put her arm on Lily’s chest to connect herself with her heart. After some seconds, she removed it, turning her head back to Terra’s. Even thought she was blind, brown haired clearly saw she was serious.

 

“That girl… you know her, right?” she said to him.

“Yeah, she’s Kyran’s daughter, man who helped me and my sis once.”

“I meet her too once… when she was just three years old… “

“You know Kyran?”

“Yes, he’s a Keyblade Crystal chosen. But he isn’t her father. He just pretended to be one, for erasing her painful memories of the past.”

“Why he did that?”

“I can’t allow having such young Keyblade Wielders here. That’s why I told him to raise her and three other kids outside this world. But now… looks like Painer got him to.”

 

Brown haired girl stated trembling as she heard Painer’s name. Terra gently stroked her hair to calm her down.

 

“What is wrong with her? Will she be alright?”

“I won’t lie to you… she won’t.”

 

Terra shockingly drew a breath. When he asked that question, people usually answered by yes or just say it need more time or at least gave a slight chance of hope. Not such clearly no.

 

“What are you saying? There’s gotta be a chance of healing her!”

 

Zyra only silently removed Lily’s shirt. Under it was her pale chest, with a symbol that seemed like a keyblade and pieces around it. It was clearly black.

 

“Don’t tell me that’s…”

“Yeah, it’s a mark of a Sleeping Blade. The final color of it before killing person is black which means… Lily is virtually dead. Her heart has no longer control of her body and spirit. It was destroyed by Sleeping blade.”

“But… but… she t –talked to be before…”

“Bodies with ruined heart usually hang on their past memories. Soon.. she’ll fade away.”

 

Terra stood still, looking at the innocent girl whose heart was destroyed. He remembered how she was waving her goodbye to him and Aqua. Now she was gone, just like that. For a second his look was changed with another. He saw sleeping Ven again, with a same symbol. Death could take him just like it took Lily now. Thinking about it brought more sadness. Now he had one more reason to defeat Painer.

While his thinking Zyra took white apron and covered Lily by it. Her lifeless eyes soon disappeared under it. Blindfolded girl then took little body outside.

After some time, Terra went to another room where twins and Ven looked over the boy whose eyes were fluorescently purple. Boy didn’t seem very well duo to his bruisers and lifeless staring.

 

“What’s wrong with him?” Terra asked after realizing that’s one of the twins that lived along with Lily.

“I saw this kind of thing once… it’s a rare spell Shadow Eyes.” Loona answered.

“Beside changing eyes, it also mess up with memories and heart itself.”

“Will he be alright?” Ven asked.

“Things like that usually take a lot of time. He’ll need to rest for a weeks for his memories to return.” Lenne said “Speaking of which, you seem like you know him. Do you know his name?”

“I’m not sure if he’s Mateo or Takeo. They’re keyblade chosen twin brothers that met some time ago.”

“Then we must hurry if we wanna save others before they end up like this.”

“Did the head guys decided when to go?” Ven asked.

“Yeah, we’ll go tonight.” Loona said. “Zyra has just told me other kid didn’t survive.”

 

 

…

 

 

In some world, were two ugly creatures dragging small female figure. They were told to bring her in a room where a long table was. Figure soon realized that and started struggling. But it was useless. Her hands were tied up as corridor was too big and too long to escape.

Aqua soon found herself in a room with another creep, no other than Painer. His body was covered in a black coat with several tapes around each arm. He stroked his dirty brown hair as he took a better look at Aqua. She just stood still there duo to her tied hands and now also ankles. Painer now looked directly in her eyes.

 

“Those blueness in your eyes… it’s not the only one on this world. There’s someone else who also has them, right?” Painer grinned as he was fussing around her.

 

Blue haired stayed quiet. She knew he was talking about Ven.

 

“Where is your little brother? Did he survive a little curse I put on him?”

 

Now she knew. Guy who cursed Ven was right in front of her. With all her strength she leaped straight at him.

 

“You bastard! Why did you do that to him?”

 

Painer only smiled at her.

 

“When you found something you can kept it right? Well I found him so it means I could do anything with him.”

“You didn’t find him! You forcibly kidnapped him and now he’s dying because of you!”

“Now, now… is that how you talk to a man?”

“You aren’t a man, but a monster! You burned our village along with tons of others! Why the hell are you doing all of this!”

 

Man now got closer to her face, whispering her words.

 

“You see there are certain scrolls I’d like to have, but unfortunately are now lost. I wouldn’t destroy all those villages if I had them. Number 15 sure has a lot of connection with it. ”

“Why are you telling be all this? And what is that having to do with Ven?”

“Because… they’re hiding… in your little brother. From the start of your escape they were always there, hiding in a small place right next to his heart.”

“No, Ven doesn’t hide anything.”

“But he does and that’s why you’re here. We can make a deal.”

“I won’t tell you where Ven is!”

“Kinda hoped you’d say that, but maybe my offer will do nicely. For just one tiny answer I’ll stop my search. You see every village where I don’t find him turns to ash and its Keyblade wielders are taken here. Just say that tiny answer and I’ll release all prisoners and stop destroying villagers. It’s for just one answer.”

 

Aqua burrowed in her thoughts. He can’t betray her own brother, no way she can. But what about all those villages and people in jail? She clasped with her fist for an answer.

 

“You won’t tell, will you? Well, no big deal. But I still think you’ll be use to me…” suddenly blue liquid appeared around her body. She was soon wrapped by disgusting, unable to move. It soon raised her up, right on the part where chandelier supposed to be. “I’m giving you one more chance, will you tell me?” Aqua angrily shook with her head for an answer. “Well, too bad.”

 

Painer clenched with his fingers and liquid covered her entire body including face. Now it was slowly turning into crystal. It hanged on the ceiling as it was just a decoration.

 

Aqua’s body was frozen, just like her heart was. She was captured in crystal prison.

[replika13 455]

NOOO AQUA!!!

[KHLegendIII 709]

Wow that was funny.

[Lu Xun 2,069]

Nice job, hawk!

 

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