Final Hearts 69 12 Posted April 18, 2011 I was pursuaded to start early, so here it is. if you are wanting to join please sign up in the sign up thread. For me, the bright blue is the thoughts that Aden/Dexan has and the purple is what he is doing or the dialog. My role play pointers -The black color on my posts will be narrations, if the rp calls for it; my rp for my character will be in purple and blue (if you feel like you need a narration, please do so on your post in black…and chose another color for your characters rp)- -Have your character start out at their home world first then tell us how they got to ‘the world that never was’ -Please put pronunciations in parentheses if you feel like or know that they are needed…some of us may have a hard time pronouncing something that you made up at the top of your head…that why when its repeated you don’t need to worry about the pronunciation. -Again, respect the rules for kh13…and the rules I’ve listed in the sign-up thread. -Yes, you can use worlds from any KH games or make up your own…it’s your choice. .................................................... It now has been 20 years since Sora and his friends had gone into the war of the keyblades…and for twenty years, there has been peace in all the worlds. Except one, the world was called ‘the world that never was’ so named, because the people who use to live there didn’t know what else to call it and they never really felt like they should exist at all. However, our story doesn’t start here it starts on a peaceful…and most quiet world named Kirapdel (kir-ap-dell) with a guy no older than sixteen and goes by the name of Aden… Aden ran out of the Army’s branch doors with his thoughts all jumbled up: Why does Kirapdel need a militia anyways? There hasn’t been a war for over 20 years…so why do they need it? They were recruiting sixteen year olds then? Why not now? Should he run away or should he stay? If he stays his mother may not want him…like she had for years, though she hated the fact of giving him up for adoption or abortion…so she just neglected him excepted when he did something wrong. He had been through all of his education and been to underage military school. So why can’t he join up for the military? They had told him it was because he was simply too young. He ran over to a ship yard and discovered a ship being prepared to launch to explore other worlds. When they were done for the day, they closed it up and locked it. But Aden was smart…he knew how to do things that other kids feared to do. So when the lights went out, Aden moved from his spot and went over to the gate. Someone was still there, so he slunk back in the shadows which were close to the gate. He moved just a little bit and crunched a leaf. “Who goes there?” the person called as they stopped and looked around. Aden remained silent. As more people came over to him. Damn…stupid leaf, why did you have to be there?Aden thought to himself as he looked down at the leaf that gave away his position. Then he looked back up at the people.Alright, if I could just get around them without making another sound I should alright…if not then…I’ll have to use my disability. What he meant by that was this weird thing he could do to throw people off. When his mother had found this out she took him over the hospital and the doctors called it a disability, because they had no idea that he was a special kind of summoner…a very rare summoner at that. Aden stayed in the shadows as he made his way over to the gate. Once he got there, he was like a sore thumb. “Oy, you…you’re not supposed to be here!” the man that yelled out earlier had yelled again, as he spotted him. Crap…what should I do? I know… Aden quickly closed his eyes and made himself look as if heat was rising off a very cool street, which looked like he was some kind of mirage. This mirage had made everyone there to retreat and continue with what they were doing before he had showed himself. It worked!! It worked, I can’t believe it…I’ll have do that the next time I get caught like that. Two years after this incident, Aden found himself ‘on the world that never was’. He was now eighteen and currently exploring this world, of which the last hitchhike he took had left him on. He soon came to a castle that looked abandoned and empty, after passing a skyscraper with a small group flat screens hanging close to the top and looked like that they had been used for advertisement. The castle was huge and pure white…with some black markings here and there. He found the path to the castle, and there was a sea-blue path way leading up to it…however before he got close enough to go up the a swarm of heartless attacked him from behind. Before he knew it he was fighting with his sword…actually it was a sword that he had stolen from the Kirapdel army. Finally some action…I’ve been trying to get some for three years. Now look what it turns up being. But what are these things? I’ve never seen them before. Then without warning, a creature of off-white with burgundy coloring came out of nowhere and defeated the black ones. But it wasn’t quick enough…Aden had gotten attacked from behind again and…the next thing he knew he woke up in a pure white room, with the creature mending his wounds. “What are you?” Aden asked the creature. It didn’t reply, when it was done with what it was doing; it left and Aden had the room to himself. He got up and looked around, then he left his room and went exploring. He found a room that looked like it had once belonged to a scientist and went in, examining anything that might help him out what the creature was. With no luck, he left the room and went to another…this one that he went into looked like it belonged to someone of high importance. There he found a cleaned desk, he went to it. He then started rummaging through it and found some papers. The first one read: Kingdom Hearts is in a shape of a heart and looks like a moon, however it is made up of hearts and it grows every time someone loses their heart or a creature that we fight is killed and releases a heart. The creature of which I am talking about is called a heartless; this is the first kind of being that is known and varies in shape and size plus could be found just about everywhere. The second one reads: The second kind of being has two different kinds and is known as nobodies…however what is a Nobody? Well, a Nobody a being who doesn’t truly exist and is created when someone with strength in their hearts loses that heart and becomes a heartless, every so often a second version of them comes into being. These ‘Nobodies’ have no hearts to feel with; only memories of their human past and what it was like to feel. The other kind of Nobody is created when a person who has a weak will ‘to be’ this kind of Nobody then have no will of its own this group of nobodies are under the control of Organization 13. This kind of nobody is known as a ‘lesser Nobody’…and only ten known creatures of this kind have been known to exist…there may be other’s out there, that we aren’t aware of. But we can’t be certain. And the rest of them were reports of which the author was talking about the day and what had happened. Aden continued reading until he got to the last page and found that there was information missing. So this happened before…which means…that I may not be the only one out there like this…but am I what the person calls a Nobody? How do I know if I am? ...is that what that creature is called a lesser nobody? ...but…it says here a lesser Nobody has no will of its own…the one that helped me had a will of its own…or…was it doing what the previous master left for it to do? Aden then left the area, leaving the papers on the desk, and found the bedroom in the joint room. He found the bed rather quickly and went to lay down for a nap. 1 axel19 reacted to this Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Stardustblade358 806 Posted April 18, 2011 Normal black for narration. Dark blue for her thoughts. This purple for her dialogs. This for other people's dialogs that don't belong to anyone. (Random citizen,random people,random man,etc.) This for other people's character's dialogs. This for memories and/or dreams. -------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Neku walked around with her brothers on their way home. It was pretty late,so they did their best to hurry the pace to get as fast as they could. The streets of Hollow Bastion were as empty as ever. "(Why do I always have to be by their side?I can take care of myself.)"Neku thinks. Neku looked up. "Leth,remind me again why do you always have to come with me EVERYWHERE I go?"Neku asks. Leth looked at her and rubbed her head messing her hair. "You're our lil sis,so you're stuck with us until you have enough age. Like us. Isn't that right Len?"Leth asks. Len nods. "Yup,sorry sis."Len says. Neku growled in annoyence. Suddenly,shadows of darkness appeared around them. They has yellow eyes and they were all looking at them as they crept closer and closer. The three of them were back to back,scared and not knowing what was going on. "Brothers,what are these things?!"Neku asks scared. "We...have no idea.."Leth says confused. A creature jumped towards them. Len then punched the creature away. The three of them got ready to fight,but Neku's brothers did not liked the idea of their sister fighting. "No,stay still and leave the fighting to us."Leth says. Neku was about to protect when leth punched a creature from behind her. Her brothers fought as they made sure she was out of the conflict. Neku just stared scared as she stood in a corner waiting for her brother's orders. Not seen by anyone,a dark puddle moved across the floor. It got behind Neku and rose up. It had eyes,antennas,and claws. It rose higher than Neku. Neku saw the shadow of something bigger than her. She turned in horror. "Brothers!"Neku says. Her brthers turn. "NEKU!"They yell. But it was to late as they saw a claw go right through her. At the end of the claw was a blue shpere. Neku's vision blured. "(What's going to happen to me...?)"Neku thinks. The creature took its hand back. Neku was standing and then slowly started to fall to the side as she started to fade. Her brothers ranned over to her. Time seemed to be slow. Neku's vision blurred,then darkenned as she closed her eyes. Before her body could hit the floor. She dissapeared into nothing. Into aura that soon faded away. Her brothers stared in horror. They got furious. Especially Leth. "Neku..."Both of them say as tears fell down their faces. Neku was gone. For good. ~Later that night~ A strong wind came by the strange world of The World That Never Was. It started to go towards one direction. It took color,blue. Then slowly shape,until it became a figure of aura. Then the aura faded away to show a girl,laying down. She had long hair that reached to her shoulders and chocolate brown eyes,she wore glasses and was wearing a long sleeved dark blue lacy dress that reached just above her knees,she wore blue and white boots. It was Neku's Nobody,sadly,she could not have an memory of what happened at all. She slowly woke up to find herself sleeping on the floor. She slowl satted up and looked around her. Not knowing anything...her mind at blank. "...where...am I?"The girl asks. She slowly stood up and looked around. She was confused and wonderous. She started to walk,hoping to get somewhere,or to even find someone. "...anyone...here?"The girl asks as the streets were silent and empty. She walked around. It was a huge city,but there were no inhabitants appearently. The sighns glew neon colors. It seemed like if it had rained earlier,for there were water puddles everywhere. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
roxaskeybladeart55 72 Posted April 18, 2011 red for other people's dialog Green for My character's thoughts Black for normal narration Blue for my character's dialogs Saren sighed walking out of his bedroom, it was about 8:00 Pm. He was in his father's home, it was aboout time to leave to his mothers home. (thye have joint custody over him) His father was in the kitchen, he looked to Saren. " You heading to your mother's?" He asked, Saren nodded. "Alright, better get going." HE said, Saren nodded and walked out. He walked into the streets, he thought to himself. "I better get there soon, Mom's gonna throw a fit." HE kept walking, five minutes later he stopped and heard a large noise, the a large alarm was playing all around town, he put his hands to his ears. "Wait... that's a... Heartless alarm!" Saren said, he saw people screaming and running for cover, he saw a group of shadows walk through the streets, Saren started to run. "I need to get out of here, or I'm done for." He thought to himself. he occasionally turned to se them getting closer, he kept going as fast as he could when suddenly a heartless got onto him, he smacked it off, but it was enough to slow him down because another jumped on, then another. his vision became fuzzled and black... when he woke up he felt... different. he was no longer int he streets of twilight town, but infront of a large mansion, his head throbbed. Where am I... What happened? he thought to himself, he slowly enterred the mansion, he walked through then when he passed hte gate, it closed behind him, he looked at it and then looked to the door. "Can't go back, might as well go forward..." He thought to himself, he enterred the building, the mansion seemed a bit run down but homey, there wer epictures on the walls... family portraits, he scoffed at them. "Won't last long..." He said outloud, he walked up one of the flights of stairs, he enterred a white room. there were pictures all over the room that seemed about the same boy. He looked at all of them. they wer emade with crayons. He looked around and then walekd out, he enterred the other room, instead of white, ihe looked to see a library, he walked forward, asnd then waved his arms out almost fallign in, he stopped, he then looked down, there were steps that led down, he walked down them. "What the hell is this place?" Saren asked, he looked and saw a door completely blocked off with wires, then another one, it was barred down with wood, he looked at thm then touched one, suddenly one moved to the right, he fell back, then looked at his hands. "Am I losing it, or something?" He thought to himself. he sighed and touched the other ones, they imediately fell down, he looked and saw holes in the wood where nails use to be, they were now scattered around on the floor. he shrugged and walked into the room, there was a computer there which seemed very old, there was dust everywhere, eh touched it and suddenly it started on, he looked to the right and saw a beam of light bulge out of the machine. He slowly touched it, sudfdenly everything went bright, he then re-appeared int he same room. however one differnce, all the dust was gone and the computer was smashed, he looked at it strangely, then looekd to the right. there was another doorway, he walked through it. he was now in a larger room, there was a strange light emitting from a green portal, Saren got closer, suddenly it got brighter, he dissipeared from the room. "What... is happening to me?" Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Stardustblade358 806 Posted April 18, 2011 The girl walked around confused. She tried to remember how she even got there...nothing came to mind. "(My memory is in total blank...I cannot...remember anything.)"The girl thinks. She walked around the city. It was enormous. Each building seemed to be lighted up with sighns and such. But there was no one else walking around the streets. The girl wondered that maybe it was just to late or that no one lived here at all. The girl stopped as she saw a huge skyscraper. She looked at it. As she followed the sight up to the top of it,she saw a heart shaped moon. She tilted her head and then just kept walking. "(What a pretty moon...)"The girl thinks. Then she keeps walking as the sky started to get covered with rain and thunder clouds. Thunder rumbeled. But The girl didn't payed attention to any of it. She then tries to remember anything. Nothing again. She sighs as she keeps walking around. She got to a dead-end. She then turned to go around another path when black creatures appeared around her. She stared at them. She had no idea what were they,or what should she do. She tooks a few steps back and stared at them. "Who are you?What are your names?"The girl asks not knowing how to even respond. The creatures crept closer and closer. She got chills down her spine as this felt familiar. But she was not so sure of it. She felt her back hit against a building wall and stared at the creatures as they got closer. "(What can I do?)"She thinks. Then she moves her hands to her pockets since she felt a bit cold. Then she felt something in them. She pulled out two metal handles. But there was no sword or anything. What were they from? Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Final Hearts 69 12 Posted April 18, 2011 Aden woke up shortly, with a crazy idea in his head.He then got up and went over to the desk and took out a piece of paper. then he started writing. Aden... what could i do with my name? this person that i had read the work of had added an 'x'...Say that's it. i need to find a name with the letter 'x' in it. he then started to jot down names as he thought of them.Xaden,Daxen,Nexad,Xedan,Dexan he looked at the last name that he had written down and decided that Dexan should be his new name. then from outside, he heard some commotion comming from outside. so he went out to investigate. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Stardustblade358 806 Posted April 18, 2011 The girl looked at the creatures. They all crept closer. One of them jumped over to her. She freaked and moved her hands. Suddenly from the handles,aura flew from them and mades aura-whips. The girl quickly without questioning used a whip and whiped the creature in half. It died. The creatures glared at her. The girl looked down at the whips. She then got ready. The creatures attacked. The girl did her best to keep up. She was not used to any of this. She didn't even knew where she was. She whiped and dodged. She struggled. Then a creature got her from the back and knocked her down. The handles were out of her reach. The creatures crept in. The girl took cover hoping for a miracle as she tought that she would now die. Then everything went silent as the girl heard some clashing of blades. She looked up slowly,to see the creatures gone,but two huge white creature standing infront of her. The girl backed away but the white creatures grabbed her and helped her stand up. One of them got the handles and hand them over to her. She took them and the aura dissapeared. She looked at the creatures. "Um...thanks?"The girl says,confused of what were these creatures that helped her. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Final Hearts 69 12 Posted April 18, 2011 Dexan had managed to find the source of the commotion and the creatures moved aside as they returned the weapons that the person has used. he looked around and then found a young lady in the arms of two of his sorcerers, he nodded at them and they left. "Your welcome." Dexan answered. then he took into account of the situation that had happened then looked at the girl. "hi, there...I'm A--Dexan...What are you doing here all alone with next to nothing to back you?" Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Stardustblade358 806 Posted April 18, 2011 The girl looked at him. "I...I don't know myself...I just woke up on the floor a few streets away from here. I walked around and got attacked by these things and so...then I got these weapons,then those creatures helped me out."The girl explains a bit. She looked down a bit. "I have been trying to remember how I got here...but everything in my mind is in a total blank. I don't know how I got here,heck,I don't even know my own name...I think..."The girl says trying to remember anything at all. She looked at the boy. "What is this place?Where am I really?"The girl asks looking around. She heard thunder roar. She looks at the clouds. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Final Hearts 69 12 Posted April 18, 2011 Dexan then copied her move and looked up at the clouds. "Come on, it's going to rain soon. We better get inside."Dexan told her. but she didn't move, she stood still and looked at him weird. "Come on, i have a place not far from here...and it gets kind of lonely when i'm there by myself...which these creatures." Dexan asnwered the looked warmly. "I'll tell you more when we get to the castle. but for now, let's get into the castle before it starts down pouring...i don't want to see you get sick becuase of how poorly your dressed for the weather." Dexan then took her by the wrist gentley, and had her follow him until they had gotten to the castle. As soon as they stepped through the doors it started to down pour. he then gave her a tour of the castle and showed her where she was to be staying for the time being. "now if you have any trouble with anything or remembered something from your past. come and find me...this place is a maze, so it's easy to lose each other...but it could also be fun; becuase you may never know what could be around the corner." Dexan smiled lightly. "So if you like you could go and explore or stay in your room...it's up to you." Dexan then walked away. he made it back to his room, without much difficutly. that's one today...i wonder if there any other's out there. that are like her and i. I guess i'll find out soon enough. soon after he finished the thought he went over to his bed and laid down to relax. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Stardustblade358 806 Posted April 18, 2011 The girl looked at him as he walked away. She then entered the room and closed the door. She walked over to the bed and satted down. The bed was very soft and cool. She took off her boots and got her feet up on the bed. She then looked out the window and saw the rain come down. She also saw the heart shaped moon. She would keep thinking that it was very pretty,especially because of the shape. Butt whenever she thought of that shape,she felt a bit hollow for some reason. She needed to figure out why did she felt like that later. She then layed down on the bed and rested her head on the pillow. She closedher eyes and a few minutes later she was asleep. She then started to question herself. "(Who am I?Where did I came from?What's my name?)"The girl thinks. As she falls into a deeper sleep,those thoughts started to move around her mind over and over. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
roxaskeybladeart55 72 Posted April 18, 2011 Saren then reappeared in a dark street, it was raininf, he looked around. "What is this place?" He asked. he sighed and kept going, suddenly he was surrounded by heartless, he looked at them all. They stared at him, he jumpepd back, suddenly in his hands, two guns appeared, he looked at them. "What?" He asked, he looked to the heartless and took his chances, he fired on them, they got hit and vanished by the purple spikes being shot out. After a minute they were all gone, he looked oput and saw a castle in the distance, he slowly made his way to it. "Maybe here, I can find some answers..." He thought to himself. He walked over a bridge and enterred the caslte complex. "Hello, anyone home?" He asked out. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Stardustblade358 806 Posted April 18, 2011 Green Italic for my character's dreams and/or memories. ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- The girl slept,but as her questions kept running around her mind. She was starting to remember somthing. "(What is going on?Hold on a second...what...what is...faint...voices?What are they saying?Hold on,what are you guys saying?I can't hear you. Wait,don't go yet...wait...what...)"The girl thinks. Then a single memory struck. "NEKU!" A lighting fell and a loud thunder chrackled. The girl woke up and satted up instantly. She looked around. Only a drea...or was it? "Ne...ku?Neku...Neku,why does it sound familiar...those voices sounded familiar...wait,maybe...maybe that's my name. Yes. Neku. That's my name,and those voice were...I...have no idea..."The girl says. She then heard someone's voice echo around the castle. She stood up and got her boots on. She peeked outside of her door and walked outside to the hallway. She looked from side to side. "Is that voice Dexan's...?...It dosn't sound like him though..."The girl says. Letting curiosity guide her around. She started to walk around the castle. Dexan was right. This place was like a maze. "(It will take me a while to memorize the whole place...)"The girl thinks as she walks around. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
zexion/ienzo 52 Posted April 18, 2011 ((Normal Text=Purple Thoughts=Light Pink Visons/Telepathic Thoughts That Aren't Her Own=Sky Blue)) Allie took a deep intake of breath, eyes fluttered shut as a small smile graced her lips. The sky was splashed with soft hues of ecru, orange and the most delicate of pinks due to the sunset just over the horizon and a soft breeze tickled her fair skin playfully. Her blond hair swirled slightly with the breeze and from next to her he date chuckled. Peeking a crystalline eye open, Allie eyed a 17 year old Daniel Grayne from her side view, a lopsided grin evident on his face. His ashy black hair was windswept and hiding his hazel eyes but not his evident grin. She knew that grin well, despite moving to Twilight Town just a year ago. It was his grin of amusement. "What?" She asked, leaning back against the solid brick of the town's signature train station clocktower. Daniel shook his head, still giving that upward twitch of his lips. "Nothing, it's just, you looked ready to jump off into the sky or something--being all peaceful like that." Rolling her eyes, Allie punched his shoulder playfully, pretending to tackle him. "Then would you rather I was violent?" She shot back, clambering on top of him, both of their laughter echoing throughout the skies. Daniel winked at her as she caught her breath, pinning his wrists. Usually it irked him to have a girl stronger than him but this girl was different. This girl was his best friend (who were with their parents Miss Olette and Mr Pence at the moment) and also his love for the summer to come. "Oh? Are we doing this already? It is just the first date~" Daniel teased, watching as Allie's face blew up with tomato blush, heating her cheeks all the way to her ears. It was obvious as to what position she was in on top of him and she quickly pushed of him, sitting cross legged again with a huff. "Oh hush up you--!" "Th-They're everywhere! Dark creatures--" "Wh-what is thi--No!" Allie flinched, her head ringing painfully with those thoughts of terror that she didn't recognize. What on Earth was going on? Daniel noticed her flinch, her face crumpled in concern and put a gentle hand on her shoulder. "Allie..?" The blond shook her head, giving a reassuring smile at the raven haired teen. "I'm fine, don't worry about....it." She trailed off as something near the edge of the clocktower caught her eye and she focused on it, biting her lip. It was a black blob like shape with two yellow orbs for eyes. And...there were more coming up the side of the tower. Daniel's back pressed fearfully against the wall. "What...are those things?" "Dad told me about them." He whispered, eyes widening. "When he was a kid...they came around once..." He gulped. "Heartless." Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Stardustblade358 806 Posted April 18, 2011 The girl walked around. The castle was simply huge,she was starting to get lost,or was already lost. She walked down some stairs and then through some hallways. She looked outside. It was still raining and thunder falling down. "(I think I got lost...)"The girl thinks. She walked around from one place to another and then started to memorize the place...at very small part of it at the very least. She then started to walk around some hallways that were balcony like yet that they were inside the building. She got to a wide area with a few tables and bunch of sofas. It was like a small living room. The girl then saw that it had huge windows and a view outside that would be nice if it wasn't that cloudy. The girl then walked back and around for a good while. "OK...I think I am getting this place taped into my memory...or atleast a part of it."The girl says. Then she got to a huge space. There was a blacony upstairs and so. She stared. "Er,Dexan?Anyone?Um,if you can hear me,give me a sighn?I think I remembered something from my past. I think I have a name now."The girl says as she walked foward. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
zexion/ienzo 52 Posted April 18, 2011 Allie blinked, tilting her head gently. She could fathom how such a small thing could strike such a fear filled reaction into Daniel. Cautiously she reached a hand forward, leaning closer to the ledge in hopes of getting closer to the dawdling creatures. Daniel's hazel eyes widened and he reached to pull Allie back by her waist, shouting a panicked "No!" but it was too late. As he skimmed his arm around her waist, the creatures lunged, and he was forced to make a decision once he hear the sound of scrabbling on bricks above his head and on the left of him. They were surrounding the clocktower. Allie gave a small screech, propelling backwards and hitting her head against the wall with a resounding crack. She whimpered but shook her head regardless, ignoring the throbbing pain that was building in the back of her cranium. What the hell was happening? "D-Daniel?!" The blond struggled to get to her feet, using the wall for support as she glanced around. The creatures had her surrounded, nipping at the heels of her feet. But Daniel was watching horrified from the exit of the clocktower. Their eyes met and he whispered a horrified "I'm so sorry." before taking off. Tears spilled from Allie's lids but she had no time for regrets as the Heartless pounced, making her scream in terror. They knotted into her hair and scratched her exposed flesh making her cry out as she struggled, stumbling every which way to get them off of her. "Help! Help me--!" Her plea was cut off as the back of her ankle hit something hard and she tumbled backwards, the creatures still swarming over her frantically. The air whipped around her as she plummeted to the ground, her tears flying off her flesh like raindrops in a storm. A sudden piercing pain in her chest snapped her thoughts back to reality as she screamed, looking down. A bright pink glow temporarily blinded her before she realized one of the creatures was holding a heart. Her heart. And then, she hit the ground softly, eyes sliding shut as the pain dulled into a numbing sensation of emptiness. . . . 'Wh-Where...am I? What's going on?' Allie blinked open her heavy eye lids carefully, her vision being met with the starry night sky. What...was...She sat up, wincing from the stiffness in her joints but proceeding to sit in a kneeling position. She looked around quickly, brow furrowed before wiping away a piece of hair that had gotten caught on her lashes. She froze. "M-My hair...!" Allie stared at a small section of her hair, jaw slackened ridiculously. Her once blond locks were now a mixture of blue, green, and violet shades. Looking down, she was relieved to find her in her original clothing appearance of a sky blue dress and white sandals but her skin had taken on a palor color just a few shades off from death. And another thing--she felt empty on the inside. "What is going on?" Allie asked herself shakily, bringing herself to her feet and looking around in fear. Something...something wasn't right. She needed to find Daniel. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Stardustblade358 806 Posted April 18, 2011 The girl walked around,trying to find Daxen,or the source of the mysterious voice. She walked around and saw some stairs. She walked down when she tripped on one of the steps. "Whoa!"The girl says as she was about to fall face first on the floor. Then she felt something huge grab her and then settle her down. She looked up to see two creatures in what appeared to be a type of armour or hard cloathing,their heads like helmets and they had...swords? (The Sammurai. Lesser Nobodies.) The girl stared. The creatures did nothing to her. "Um,ok. Do you know where I can find Daxen?"The girl asks hoping that maybe these creatures were familiar to him or knew him. The creatures just turned and walked away. The girl then followed. "(They look like Sammurais...maybe I should call them that until I can figure out what they are.)"The girl thinks as she follows them around. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Tricia-chan 42 Posted April 18, 2011 Black for narration. Grey for her thoughts. Orange for her dialog. Purple for other people's dialogs. ---------------------------------------- (( I'm just guessing where I start off. :'D )) Stepping out of the odd vortex, the girl looked around. The place was completely foreign to her. However, there seemed to be none of those Heartless things around, so she presumed it was safe enough to relax. She looked behind her, but the portal was no longer there. Who was that that I heard? she thought. Maybe they might know what I am...? The name Alice was what popped up whenever she thought of a name. Along with the name, memories of Alice flushed through her head. However, it didn't feel right. It was as though she was holding onto something that wasn't even hers. Alice wasn't her name. It was the name of someone from the past. She was only in charge of holding onto it. I might as well look around, she thought, see if there really is anybody here. Of course, to play it safe, she called out her two ninja blades. When she first came to when she was "born", these weapons were already in her hands. She figured out that she was able to summon them to her heart's content. Wait, she thought, why does that sound... wrong? 'Heart's' content? She shook her head. It would be best not to think too much about it. Stepping forward, she continued to explore the strange land. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
roxaskeybladeart55 72 Posted April 18, 2011 Saren looked around in the castle, it was rather clean looking, he cdalled out for anyone to answer him. "Hello!" He yelled out, he kept moving, he then saw a group of well things with swords go towards him, he summoned his guns again, they looked at him and nodded, suddenly a girl younger then him came out, she seemed distraught, he crossed his arms. "You from around here?" He asked, she stared at him. "relax, my name's Saren, who are you?" He asked. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Stardustblade358 806 Posted April 18, 2011 The girl stared at the boy and thinks. "My name is...um...Neku...I think."The girl says. She looked at the boy. He wasn't Daxen. But he was someone. "Are you a friend of Daxen?"The girl asks only knowing that his name was Saren. "Um,well...If you mean no harm,I don't think you can be a bad person,right?"The girl asks. She just stared at the boy. "How did you got here?"The girl asks. She had no idea of her past. Only the name Neku and what has happened ever since she woke up in that alley. She saw the Sammurai. "I don't think he means harm...lower your swords please..."The girl says. The Sammurai did so. "(These Sammurai seem nice. Protective too. But why does it feel familiar?)"The girl thinks. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Tricia-chan 42 Posted April 18, 2011 The girl continued to examine where she was at. The place most certainly didn't spark anything in her mind, so the Alice memories weren't going to benefit her. Then she noticed something moving behind her. Stopping in her tracks, the only thing that moved were her eyes as she blinked, as well as her breathing. Waiting for the precise moment, she instantly turned on her heels, crouching down as she lashed out her sword. What her blades almost made contact with were small, white-colored things. They were in the shape of throwing stars, and their teeth looked like that of a zipper. What was intriguing was that they did not fight back. They flinched, but that seemed to be what they casually do. They slowly gathered around her, but they didn't cause any sort of harm. They're... on my side...? she thought. The thought almost made her laugh-- A bunch of animated stars were her army. "Well, I do need help," she said to herself. Looking down at them, she directed, Half of you, stay with me. The other half, scout out and find any other living thing." The order was carried out. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Lady Aleister 1,677 Posted April 19, 2011 Plum? for what I am saying Orange for thoughts Blue for what other people are saying Black for narriortion I HOPE THIS WORKS! AHH it did not work ok im going to do somehing a little unknown but i do this alot it looks like this: Axgrce:What? Axgrce:*sits down* ???:hello or like Dexter:hello but that is just an example, Sorry Grace:*Wakes up on the grond of the unfirmalar place* What? Oh great...*is dizzy* Where am I?*is getting a little fuzzy* Shadows...? AH! they are shadows! *runs to this big casle and bangs on the door* LET ME IN! *manages to break inside than falls on the floor and starts a deep sleep* Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
roxaskeybladeart55 72 Posted April 19, 2011 Saren sighed. "Who's Daxen?" He asked, she looked at him. "Well, nice to meet you Neku." Saren said, he looked around the castle, he noticed his clothes were ripped, he saw a closet, he walked in and found a black robe, he put it on over his clothes, he brushed off his hair for a moment. "Well this is new I suppose." HE said lookign at his clothing. Neku nodded. "Alright, now do you knwo where I can meet this Daxen?" Saren asked. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Stardustblade358 806 Posted April 19, 2011 "Er,kind of...I'm looking for him right now...he must be around here...somewhere."The girl says. She looks around. It was her first time around the castle. Ever. She looked around and from side to side. It would take a trip or two for her to memorize the entire place inside out. She looked around. "Um...around here...I think."The girl says. She starts to walk around,the Sammurai following her. The girl walked around. "Daxen!Daxen!You here?Um,you got a visitor!I think..."The girl says a she walks around. "Oh,and I think I remembered my name!"The girl says as she went through some hallways. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Final Hearts 69 12 Posted April 19, 2011 (Hey Axgrce, i couldn't see your colors that you had used for your posts...and if you need to add something hit the edit button next to the reply button, i just don't want to see you get a negitive for double posting....I would like to say to all of you that the color text...i am only doing it so you won't be confused when i went into narration. I don't mind you guys doing the same, i just wanted to say that it was an option for you. that was all.) ........................................................................................ Dexan got up from his bed and started to roam the halls, since he had heard some voices calling out. he had searched all over the castle until he had managed to get to the area where he had last left the girl. when She had came into view, it looked like she was looking for someone...then he heard her calling his name and she wasn't alone either.it looked like she had someone with her, someone that probabaly wanted to join...but join what? he didn't have a group, there's no one here at the moment except for the three of them. he went over to them and stopped them in thier tracks. "What is it ma'am?" Dexan asked politely. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Stardustblade358 806 Posted April 19, 2011 The girl looked at Dexan. "Um. First. This guy named Saren came by. I thought he was a visitor of yours. And,um,oh yes. I think I remembered my name. My name is Neku. I think. I remembered two voices yelling that name. So it must mean something."The girl says as she looked at Dexan. She then looked at the Sammurai. "And I met these too."The girl says. She was kind of happy. Since she had met plenty of people and known plenty of things than she knew before. "Er,but besides that name...I am in blank."The girl says wishing she knew more. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites