Text Evas -Nothing happens by accident.

[Naroco 26]

I loved chapter 12 Me!! It was really interesting to me! The story is getting better and better. I can't wait till Chapter 13!

 

same here

8)

[Zenithia 305]

tutti frutti. This story is definitely getting better as it goes on. I like how this story goes on.

[Keyblade13 6]

Illusion world? Lol Man I hate levels liek that. But thumbs up as always.

[Zexion's_Lover_46 76]

Illusions now! 8D Very neat. This story keeps getting better and better. You're doing great on the story brother ^_^

[KingOFHearts 19]

OH SHIZ.

[Hazimie 1,595]

cool story,keep it up ^_^

[replika13 455]

as a writer i would say this is pretty good work.

characters having interesting names and plot is awesome.

its getting better allthe time.cant wait for next one if theres next one

[karma 0]

omg write more

[Lu Xun 2,069]

Sorry, I wasn't able to post chapter 13 yesterday. Here it is :

 

Chapter 13- Rage and Hatred; the worst feelings

-Where are them? Myez.. You don't think they...- Tuvo said this to Myez.

-No! They can't be dead... He trusted me... I have to-

-Myez! Both Evas and Tifah managed to exit the forest. However, they were sent to an alternative world created by Perlu. You two need to get back to the castle. Go through that portal.-Master Shin Zuy's voice called them and opened a portal.

-Come, Tuvo. I don't have to time to explain!-Running, Myez instructed Tuvo to enter in the portal.

 

After entering on it, they returned to the castle. There, they found both Phapy and Joshy. As a normal reaction, both of them asked Tuvo about why was he with an enemy.

 

-Tuvo? Are you teaming with him? I can't believe it!-Joshy said.

-What are you doing, my friend? He isn't an ally, he is an enemy.- Phapy also asked why Tuvo was with Myez.

-He... he is not our enemy. He saved me, Tifah and Evas at the forest. If he didn't arrive, we could be dead.

-Don't be like that, Tuvo. I just helped a little. Anyway, I have to explain the entire situation to you guys. At first, I was really your enemy. But then, master Shin Zuy-the voice you hear,Tuvo-saved me from death. I am now his apprentice. I have to do everything he orders me to. The first thing was to help you guys against Perlu. I'll help you util the very end.-Myez said to the group.

-Nice speech, �apprentice�. Now, I've located both Evas and Tifah- they're on the Dream World which was created by Perlu.-Shin Zuy's voice interrupted their conversation.

-What? Mom and Tifah? No! We have to-Joshy was interrupted by Master Shin Zuy's voice.

-No, you won't do anything. Not to help them. Your mission is to save Yufy who has been kidnapped by Hertad. I'll take care of your mom and my old friend.What did Hertad said to you?-Master Shin Zuy's voice called them again.

-He said that Tifah would know where to find him. Do you have any idea?-Phapy replied to Shin Zuy's question.

-No... Oh yes! I know exactly where it is. It's in the Old Organization's HQ. It's not too far from your castle.. But you'll find many things on you way to it..-Shin Zuy finally discovered where Yufy was.

-I'm on it! Anything to save Yufy!-Phapy said.

-Me too! Just take of mom, will you?-Joshy also accepted to go save his friend.

-If they're on it, then I'm too.-Tuvo accepted as well.

-If it's my master's orders, then I'll go to this dwarf's rescue.-Myez decided to go as well, since it was Master Shin Zuy who ordered it.

-Then it's settled. You must bring everything that is important to you, because Perlu may take advantage from this opportunity and attack the castle. I won't be able to defend it since I will be trying to save Evas and Tifah. I can call two monsters to protect it, if you want.

-Okay! Do it. It's better than nothing.-Happy, Joshy said this to Master Shin Zuy.

 

Meanwhile, Evas and Tifah were highly surprised because they didn't end up in the castle. This place was really weird. Everything was white, some marks of blue were into the air. The gate had closed, they couldn't exit it.

 

-Where are we, Tifah? This isn't your castle!

-Evas.. I know this place. I've never seen such a place with my eyes, but I've read about it. They're called � The Dreams World�. There are much more than only one. Everyone of them is controlled by someone, and once you enter on it, it's really hard to exit.

-You're saying that we're trapped here?

-For now, yes..my dear Evas.. But our allies may come to help us.. We must not give up our hope! I've also read that some people went crazy inside the Dreams Worlds. But it says that only bad people can create one. So.. I belive that this is work of...

-Perlu!

-Yes, Evas. His hatred and rage for us are so big that maybe-- using dark magic, he managed to create this.

-What can we do now, master?

-Pray, Evas.. Pray that someone actually manages to open a pathway, otherwise, we'll be both lost here forever...

 

At the same moment, Hertad was with Yufy. He wasn't awoke until Vertad's strange voice called him.

 

-You, dwarf. You've helped us a lot. Thank you, haha! But, once your friends bring me Tifah and the wand, you'll be killed.

-No... You can't! Your dark powers.. They're-

-Shut up, little man! Can't you stay quiet for a moment. I don't know can you not kill him now, Vertad. I'd kill him now if I were you.

-Calm down, my dear. Just because you're my wife, it doesn't mean that you can choose things for me... But you can have your fun at the forest, Gera.

-Thanks, my dear. And you, dwarf, sleep with your eyes open or maybe they can't be there once you wake up. -After saying this, Gera left her husband with Yufy.

-You'll see... They'll save me and slay you!- Exhausted, Yufy said this to Vertad.

-Go sleep!- After saying this, Hertad used a kung fu blow to make Yufy sleep.

-Hahahaha! They'll come here to save you. But they'll be the ones who'll need to be saved when I get them! Hahahaha!

 

Now, Master Shin Zuy was thinking in a way to save both Evas and Tifah from the Dreams World. It wasn't easy. They were truly inside in one of the darkest magics of the world.

 

-Perlu... You've learned that.? Then you may have been completely eaten by the darkness.. I'll do what it takes to save them! In this book, it says that a sacrifice must be done in order to open a pathway to the prisoners escape.. But, I have to find out what this sacrifice is. Does someone have to die? Or just use a knife to make a wound? These books will surely help me.. but I must have patience. I just hope that Evas and Tifah aren't becoming crazy in the Dreams World...

 

Will Master Shin Zuy find a way to rescue them? Will Yufy be saved? Will Hertad meet his end at Yufy's friends hand? What will Evas and Tifah find in the Dreams World?

[Naroco 26]

Wow its getting good

[KHlover12 22]

Like I said before this story is fantastic! you really have some great writing skills. I love the plot and everything so keep writing and get chapter 14 up ASAP Thank you!

[DarksideZero 3]

it just keeps getting better i want 14

[Zexion's_Lover_46 76]

The chapters are great brother You're very good at writing Good job. Can't wait until Chapter 13

[Zenithia 305]

tutti frutti. This story keeps me on the edge my seat. Great job.

[KingOFHearts 19]

OH SHIZ.

 

STORY GETS BETTER AND BETTER IN EACH CHAPTER.

[Lu Xun 2,069]

It's not too big as usual, but there are a lot of important facts in there 8D

 

Chapter 13 part 2- The Past

In the Dreams World, Evas and Tifah were getting bored and decided to talk about some things, since there wasn't anything better to do.

 

-This is getting very annoying, Tifah.

-I know my dear. Just try to calm down.

-Let's talk about more things about the past...

-What do you want to know, dear?

-Everything! About my father and everything else!

-Okay.. It seems like this is the perfect opportunity to talk with you about that. Your mother, she was also able to use the magical wand. When she died, I guarded it. Suddenly, I checked and it wasn't there anymore. And then.. it went to you. About your father-- He was killed, you know. But.. who sent those bandits who were in the truth shadows pretending to be humans, was Perlu. He's the responsible for your father's death.

-No... It's... it's all.. that idiot's fault! When I have the chance, I'll take his head off with a knife. He'll pay for everything!

-Don't be like that, my dear. He is a bad person.. But just because of that, you don't have to put feelings like hatred, rage and wishes for vengeance. We'll settle things when it's time...

-What about Seray? The one that wrote a letter to me... Is he alive?

-We don't know.. After writing that letter, he disappeared. We haven't seen him since then.

-What was the code �Old Organization�?

-It's a long story... During the war, I, Shin Zuy and other people, we made an organization. It was called the White Organization, but since we're all old nowadays, we began to call it The Old Organization. We had a lot of work. We saved people from the old king's wrath, we rescued some allies, we gave food to the poor people. We had so many duties.. It was pretty cool for me.. But of course, since that was a war, some of my friends died, just Shin Zuy remained. However, we got separated since he chose to use some darkness' powers. Thankfully, he didn't forget his old friend.

-And.. could you tell me more about Math?

-Math.. I just want to die when I hear that name.. He was such a strange kid. He went to the kitchen and stayed stealing knives.. Since, he was adopted by your grandmother, I couldn't do anything. The reason why your grandmother adopted him is unclear. I really don't know. I almost killed him to get vengeance for the old King-- but, Hertad, helped him. That black wizard was a being who was completely eaten by the darkness... He used a magic that made Math immortal-- even if you hurt him really bad, he can regenerate. There are two ways to break that spell-- We can kill Hertad.. or search for the Magical Stone. Only with it, the spell will be broken and then, we can finally kill Math.

-This is so much... I have to stay thinking for a while....

-Poor Evas. I know how you must be feeling....

Meanwhile, Master Shin Zuy had finally discovered a way to rescue Evas and Tifah. It was written in a piece of paper inside a book called �Flee can be sometimes be really useful�

 

�- To escape from the Dreams World, someone must pay a high price. At the place where the spell was made and with the spell caster in there, you must kill one person. Before killing, you may say these words �In order to flee, I killed a person. May the darkness hear my voice and open a new path, so the prisoner can escape.�

 

-What? I have to go to Perlu's castle? That won't be easy. I'll need someone.. Hm.. Oh yes. Mark, the newest soldier. Even being only thirteen, this boy seem to be very devoted to my cause. He'll be the one to accompany me to there. I'll have to send a group of creatures to attack the castle before, then I can enter on it. Mark, are you there?

-Yes, master. What do you want?

-You'll be coming with me to Perlu's castle. Not now, though. Soon, I'll warn you when it's time.

-Yes, I'll train for now.

 

At the night, Master Shin Zuy's voice called Myez, Tuvo, Phapy and Joshy. It was time to begin their journey to Hertad.

 

-Gathered everything?-Shin Zuy's voice asked them.

-Yes, master.-They all replied at the same time.

-So, you can begin your journey. Head to the north. When you arrive at a forest, I'll talk with you again. Don't worry, I'll be watching over your progress.

-Thank you, master.-Myez replied.

-Any hint about Mom and Tifah?-Joshy sked.

-Yes.. but I cannot tell you guys yet.. When I finally save them, you may know how I did it..-Master Shin Zuy replied this.

-Okay! Myez, Joshy, Tuvo! Let's get going!-Happy, Phapy said this to the group.

[terraxaqua34 98]

This is getting really good.

[DragonMaster 1,166]

I have only read the first 2 chapters so far, but it is really interesting. I have this bookmarked, so I will try and catch up bye the end of the week (Sunday), that is, if my homework doesn't get in the way. Anyway, great job!

[Final Hearts 69 12]

Wow i sure missed alot. this is getting exciting, i'm so glad i caught up on what i missed. i loved it all...get going...you got me really interested in it now.

[Zexion's_Lover_46 76]

It keeps getting better. Can't wait to chapter 13

[Final Hearts 69 12]

It keeps getting better. Can't wait to chapter 13

 

you mean chapter 14...chapter 13 had two parts to it.

[Lu Xun 2,069]

Hello guys. I love all your comments ?

But I'm here to say that if you want, you can suggest a character. Give the name and appearance so I can try to add it in some part. Mark, the one who is helping Master Shin Zuy, is Naroco's character. He asked me to add him and I managed to (;

 

However, I said I'll try. I don't know if I'll be able to put too many characters. If, of course, you guys come with some suggestions.

[FaceofSoraHeartofVentus 49]

yeah i agree it is getting better, but the small parallels with KH befuddle me sometimes.

[KingOFHearts 19]

Make a character named Save

[Naroco 26]

Hello guys. I love all your comments ?

But I'm here to say that if you want, you can suggest a character. Give the name and appearance so I can try to add it in some part. Mark, the one who is helping Master Shin Zuy, is Naroco's character. He asked me to add him and I managed to (;

 

However, I said I'll try. I don't know if I'll be able to put too many characters. If, of course, you guys come with some suggestions.

 

and thx for puting him in just remember he is a tough guy