Text New Story that has nothing to do with KH

[nickjonasxx 2]

Ok, I am thinking about writing a book about a guy who's life completely falls apart. Here's a quick summary of my story;

 

Ken is a level 5, a high rank in the Imperial army, and is a legend among lower ranks. He soon recieves an apprentice, but pleads to the government to hire somebody else. You see, 7 years earlier, Ken's mentor was shot and killed. Ken made a promise to never work with another partner again. But he soon becomes friends with his apprentice, named Andrew. After being convinced by Andrew, Ken searches for clues about his mentor's death. But he not only found the hitman who did the job, but also who was behind the assaination...

 

So, tell me what you think...

[Lee Kuro 10 17]

Interesting idea!

[sneezes 73]

sounds mysterious and cool

i say keep going <33

[Tom 437]

That sounds awesome! I can't wait to read that

[PrincessToriAlly15 2]

Hmmmm.....Okay,keep going!

[Blazer 7]

sounds interesting.Id like to hear your story.

[im-axel-fear-me-NOW 10]

coolio!!!!!!!!!!!!!!