4Everbee 1,365 Posted February 6, 2011 do you know me for me?? do you see me for me?? do you know me for who im m i don't need ppl telling me what to do telling me who i m calling me rude i don't take it i get up and say you NOT the boss of me i can be rude but il say im sorry i don't need ppl calling me name's and if you don't like it then to bad hope u like :|[/u][/i] Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Antrium 10 Posted February 6, 2011 do you know me for me?? do you see me for me?? do you know me for who im m i don't need ppl telling me what to do telling me who i m calling me rude i don't take it i get up and say you NOT the boss of me i can be rude but il say im sorry i don't need ppl calling me name's and if you don't like it then to bad hope u like :|[/u][/i] This a rant more than writing but anyways I feel alot of negative feelings that unnecessary Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Godot 513 Posted February 6, 2011 It's alright, but it would be easier to read and understand if you used spellcheck/checked your grammar over. Just a suggestion~ Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Cellar Door 652 Posted February 6, 2011 do you know me for me?? do you see me for me?? do you know me for who im m i don't need ppl telling me what to do telling me who i m calling me rude i don't take it i get up and say you NOT the boss of me i can be rude but il say im sorry i don't need ppl calling me name's and if you don't like it then to bad hope u like :|[/u][/i] This a rant more than writing but anyways I feel alot of negative feelings that unnecessary ...if he intended to have negative feelings in it, then there will be. this isnt the advice he needs, more what demyx says. fix your grammar, punctuation and spelling. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Antrium 10 Posted February 7, 2011 do you know me for me?? do you see me for me?? do you know me for who im m i don't need ppl telling me what to do telling me who i m calling me rude i don't take it i get up and say you NOT the boss of me i can be rude but il say im sorry i don't need ppl calling me name's and if you don't like it then to bad hope u like :|[/u][/i] This a rant more than writing but anyways I feel alot of negative feelings that unnecessary ...if he intended to have negative feelings in it, then there will be. this isnt the advice he needs, more what demyx says. fix your grammar, punctuation and spelling. Well actually it's a she lol. I already gave that advice over chat haha. I was just pointing out that the reason behind this was a little unorthadox. I for one love passionate poems and although yes, this is a good piece the meaning behind it is incomplete. It's not just about your spelling and grammar but the heart behind all of it. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
4Everbee 1,365 Posted February 7, 2011 WHY ARE YOU ALL MEAN lol jk i know i sucks at spilling sorry Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
