sota9 4 Posted December 11, 2010 This time long chapters everyone;) Chapter 1: Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Felicitas 4 Posted December 11, 2010 It's really good, you just need to fixed up some grammatical mistakes but that's pretty much it. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
khkyle 2 Posted December 11, 2010 It's really good, you just need to fixed up some grammatical mistakes but that's pretty much it. I agree its great but you need to fix some mistakes Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
sota9 4 Posted December 11, 2010 Okay you guys I'll work on that. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
sota9 4 Posted December 13, 2010 I'll be done with chapter 2 soon everyone^^ Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
