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LionheartXIII

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I must firmly say I don't like this piece, Lionheart. No bad feeling but it's just seem like kid's drawing overall, unlike your other drawings (those two I've commented). I'm sorry to point out:

-The hair's looks like just coloured without thinking with pencil roughly

-The gift boxes don't look like boxes... just squares

-The hands doesn't seem grabbing the boxes

-I'm so not agree the way you tie the ribbon (the x form on the top of it) and scarf

More expert notes if those already fixed... maybe you're just not yet be good at stuffs other than clothes. I'd say take it slowly. ;)

--This is sooo constructing tips, no heart break soul intended, keep on the good work!~~--

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I must firmly say I don't like this piece, Lionheart. No bad feeling but it's just seem like kid's drawing overall, unlike your other drawings (those two I've commented). I'm sorry to point out:

-The hair's looks like just coloured without thinking with pencil roughly

-The gift boxes don't look like boxes... just squares

-The hands doesn't seem grabbing the boxes

-I'm so not agree the way you tie the ribbon (the x form on the top of it) and scarf

More expert notes if those already fixed... maybe you're just not yet be good at stuffs other than clothes. I'd say take it slowly. ;)

--This is sooo constructing tips, no heart break soul intended, keep on the good work!~~--

 

It's OK I didn't like this ether! I have a lot to still learn!

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