aroxion 0 Posted May 2, 2023 yeah cherry and melon were my least favoritesbut cherry caused me so much pain lol Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
RikuSoulEater358_1655148463 0 Posted May 2, 2023 Sorry for a very late reply but same here. Vanitas deserves more merch than just the Funko figures and keyring. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
ali3n.0bserv3r 6 Posted May 2, 2023 I will line my walls with Vanitas merch. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
RikuSoulEater358_1655148463 0 Posted May 2, 2023 That is very based and awesome Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
mayareader 2 Posted May 3, 2023 does this make sense to you guys? Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
mayareader 2 Posted May 3, 2023 it's for my article, and i realized that the way mickey talks in the game is confusing if you don't have visualsthanks, i just wanna make sure it makes sense to newbies reading about the game lolthere are too many ansems in this paragraph and but i'm talking about 2 different characters 😭 Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Daz_4th 7 Posted May 3, 2023 trueit does a great job at diffrentiating with no pIace for misinterpretation Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
mayareader 2 Posted May 3, 2023 i hate this paragraph lol but it's necessary so i gotta keep it Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Snakeskin94 13 Posted May 3, 2023 The nice thing is everyone knows what Mickey sounds like, so, as long as you throw in a couple 'welps' you'll be good.Remember, Disney rights the Mickey and Pals characters in such a way that while they have a specific way of talking, they talk just like any of us-- don't feel bogged down by the cartoony nature of Mickey Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
mayareader 2 Posted May 3, 2023 a sprinkle of "oh boy!"well i meant more how he explains it, not necessarily how he soundsit's cuz the game is trying to keep xehanort a mystery for a little while longer by having mickey forget his name Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Snakeskin94 13 Posted May 3, 2023 Oh yeah, good point Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
GoldenDrummer730#4323 24 Posted May 3, 2023 Another Maya article soon :blobaww: :blobaww: Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Snakeskin94 13 Posted May 3, 2023 Well a way you could word it is,"Mickey is withholding information that is equal parts intentional and unintentional that will kind of be explained in this game, and also sprinkled here and there the next 3 is games."For posterity. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
GoldenDrummer730#4323 24 Posted May 3, 2023 Haha yeah, for sure Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
mayareader 2 Posted May 3, 2023 i high key wanted to say that goofy died but we gotta be professional her lol Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
mayareader 2 Posted May 3, 2023 ok y'all i need your opinion: should i cut the 2nd visit to halloween town and pride lands from the article?i really have to cut down the word count and i figure since they don't meet org members in those worlds, it should be fine. the revisit to pride lands felt like filler and revisit to halloween town is just about the experiment looking for a heart. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
ElectriCole 5 Posted May 3, 2023 Pride Lands definitely cut. Unless there's some metaphor for Roxas/Xion that was hinted at in HT, the I would cut that as well Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
mayareader 2 Posted May 3, 2023 i mean they just talk about how giving a gift is like giving a piece of your heart to someone and how kairi is like sally b/c she's happy just by being with sora. but to the overall plot, this just feels like fluff since we already know how sora feels for kairialright i'm gonna get them bothshould i cut agrabah as well? they mention that an organization member wanted jafar's heartless but they don't say who and we never see one in that world Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
ElectriCole 5 Posted May 3, 2023 Yeah I wouldAnything that doesn't contribute to the over arching story can probably be leftThough maybe mention that only a few revisits have importantance so people aren't confused why your only talking about a couple of worlds a second time? Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
mayareader 2 Posted May 3, 2023 alright that brings my word count down to 4950, just gotta cut 900 more words 😭 Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
ElectriCole 5 Posted May 3, 2023 If you hadn't done that alreadyOhhhhhhh nevermind then Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
mayareader 2 Posted May 3, 2023 ok i'm cutting the cloud and sephiroth stuff. considering the sephiroth fight is optional, their stuff isn't too tied with the main story. (i know cloud has the whole facing the darkness inside him kind of mirroring riku, but we don't need more than 2 emo dark boys in this game) Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites