guillus 3 Posted November 1, 2010 When I first met on the net, You were like "I just gave you your first rep!", I was still kinda dazzled, By that thing you said, I wouldn't even dare to think that, We could be friends But when I first seriously talked with you, And found out that you're into Zexion, I got this thought "This girl has a serious complexion!". But after truly speaking, I started understanding, that you're that kind of girl That came with a swirl And a cherry on top, And just like an ice-cream... It's so sweet to be your friend. And with no remorse, It depends on the flavor, Of course! I just got lucky, That when picking out the flavor, It came as a buddy, And that's something in my favor. The other day I was checking out the site, And I saw your "hello", Then I truly thought "Well she won't bite!", And am I glad she didn't say "Hell no!". Two days later, I was anxious to see her, I was getting to know my stapler, But that didn't stop the meeting, It was great to meet her again, We talked about everything, Poems, stories, and what else, Until my mom started yelling. "My brother's signing up today", That's all I heard her say, He was kinda cool, Like that Sephiroth dude. One day I was hitting the books, When you gave me a hint of your looks. I tried not to think about it, Not to let it get to me, And I don't know how that sounded, But it was kind of weird. You caught me by your personality, not by your looks, You're a good friend, And I didn't even asked for it though. (it might sound weird at some points but don't worry its just to make riming easier) (This is for you, Reikon, for being a great friend) Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Zexion's_Lover_46 76 Posted November 1, 2010 -blushes- thanks ^w^ that was nice of you to say and I don't think it sounds weird at all. It's a good poem. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Antrium 10 Posted November 2, 2010 Well this may noteven be related to me in anyway but as a poet I love this. It had nice ryhme and an amazing message. I absolutely would publish this if I was a publisher. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
VENROXAS 152 Posted November 2, 2010 That was verry good I liked how you showed your feelings in your poem, nice of you to dedicate it to reikon Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Zexion's_Lover_46 76 Posted November 2, 2010 You expressed feelings that were in your heart and that makes it very meaningful Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Ai Enma 7 Posted November 2, 2010 You are a good poet. I like your poems! This one is my favorite out of them all! LOL Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites