Sportsmaster5 353 Posted April 12, 2018 (edited) I've been working on drawing for school and I'm still not great, but here is some fan art I recently made. Not completely happy with it, but I thought I'd ask for some critiquing. The second one is an update or just a different version. Edited August 12, 2021 by Sportsmaster5 8 Thomasnab, lendaiteva, DennosZew and 5 others reacted to this Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Mystics Apprentice 2,397 Posted April 12, 2018 Wow, that is amazing! I wouldn't even critique anything about it; it looks that good. . Great job! 1 Sportsmaster5 reacted to this Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
KeybladeMasterBalo 504 Posted April 12, 2018 As a general work it's quite amazing! You could improve here and there in some details but on the other hand this defines your style so, yeah, great job! 1 Sportsmaster5 reacted to this Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
xTekemo 6 Posted April 12, 2018 It looks good! The style is unique and such, although from the minimized version of the pic it looks like sora's a zombie lol, all in all it looks cool! 1 Sportsmaster5 reacted to this Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
KingdomHearts3 2,591 Posted April 12, 2018 That’s incredible! Amazing! 1 Sportsmaster5 reacted to this Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Dustin Lübbers 933 Posted April 12, 2018 Thats a very good picture but why do you need it for school? Are you in art class and the teacher wanted you to draw Something whatever you wanted? 1 Sportsmaster5 reacted to this Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
The Transcendent Key 12,109 Posted April 12, 2018 Dang man, aside from being an awesome Youtuber, you're also a gifted artist!? You're just full of surprises! Wow, what an amazing drawing! The only critique I have is that you could fix up Sora's face just the tiniest, most slightly bit, but other than that, the drawing is just spectacular! Also, is the discovery Kingdom Hearts itself? Because I notice that Sora's looking up at the sky, and his eyes are reflecting something that looks heart shaped! So it is Kingdom Hearts, isn't it!? Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Sportsmaster5 353 Posted April 12, 2018 Wow, that is amazing! I wouldn't even critique anything about it; it looks that good. . Great job! Thanks! I'm glad you like it! As a general work it's quite amazing! You could improve here and there in some details but on the other hand this defines your style so, yeah, great job! Thanks! And yea for the most part my biggest problem with many of my drawings is that they aren't as clean and detailed as many other pieces of art that I see, which is something I will keep working on. Thanks for the feedback! It looks good! The style is unique and such, although from the minimized version of the pic it looks like sora's a zombie lol, all in all it looks cool! Glad you like it! I noticed the same thing looks kind of creepy. I think I know why it looks like that, and I may change it. That’s incredible! Amazing! Thanks! Thats a very good picture but why do you need it for school? Are you in art class and the teacher wanted you to draw Something whatever you wanted? Thanks! As of now I'm in school for animation/art and this is just a picture that I did on my own outside of class, and this is the first piece that I have tried to put to use many of the techniques that I've learned this year Dang man, aside from being an awesome Youtuber, you're also a gifted artist!? You're just full of surprises! Wow, what an amazing drawing! The only critique I have is that you could fix up Sora's face just the tiniest, most slightly bit, but other than that, the drawing is just spectacular! Also, is the discovery Kingdom Hearts itself? Because I notice that Sora's looking up at the sky, and his eyes are reflecting something that looks heart shaped! So it is Kingdom Hearts, isn't it!? Thanks buddy! Glad you like it and yea faces have been something I've been trying to work on and the fact that I have been practicing with real faces may have transferred to a more cartoonish character a little more awkwardly, I think I may know how to fix it though. And yep that for sure is Kingdom Hearts! 3 Mystics Apprentice, KingdomHearts3 and The Transcendent Key reacted to this Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
The Transcendent Key 12,109 Posted April 14, 2018 Thanks buddy! Glad you like it and yea faces have been something I've been trying to work on and the fact that I have been practicing with real faces may have transferred to a more cartoonish character a little more awkwardly, I think I may know how to fix it though. And yep that for sure is Kingdom Hearts! You're welcome, man! And well hey, practice makes perfect, and you already have an amazing art style, and you managed to nail the coloring as well, because coloring is an important aspect of art, and not everyone knows how to do coloring just right. But you managed to pull it off! Keep up the great work, man! Yesss, I knew it! THE ONE AND ONLY KINGDOM HEARTS!!! 1 Sportsmaster5 reacted to this Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
