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  On 3/5/2017 at 1:25 AM, Sarrin said:

Its definitely been used before me and square can't take any credit there like I said its just a great line

 

 

Indeed, it is a great line! Perfect for epic, grim and dramatic moments! :D

 

 

  On 3/6/2017 at 7:10 AM, Sarrin said:

I think I might be ending this feature soon doesn't seem to be much going on here lol

Duuuude don't do that! I wanna keep reading to see what happens! And just because people don't comment doesn't mean no one is reading your story! Just take a look at all the views your story has gotten! Don't be discouraged!

 

I happen to be the type of person that likes to comment on stories, because I wanna let the author know how awesome the story is, ya know? So don't give up heart!

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Boom two more chapters lets see where these go~


 

Chapter Eight: North Wind


 


 

  SPOILERS: Click to reveal


 


 

Chapter Nine: Finding Hope


 


 

  SPOILERS: Click to reveal

 

 

 

Enjoy and if you're reading let me know what you think of this long story so far and what you think might happen next~

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Daaaang, so much keeps happening, it's all so exciting! That particular bit of Babylon with Gilgamesh seems intriguing! I'm guessing we'll be seeing more of his backstory regarding Babylon, eh?  And also, Curtis is one hell of a badass! I love his character, you wrote him very well! Lol, and Tyler's interaction with Terra was funny!

 

And wow, Stephanie is dead set on her goal, isn't she? :O

 

These were great chapters, I can't wait to read more! :D

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  On 3/10/2017 at 2:33 AM, Sarrin said:

There are only two chapters left in the Bloody Evolution Ark what the hell is about to happen right now

Any questions?

 

 

Thanks for reading

-Sarrin

 

Ooh, ooh, I have a question!  Will there be more backstory that details things between Curtis and Aeolus? And will Gilgamesh face his innermost demons? And where's Isaac at!? :O

 

I can't wait to see where this all leads! I'm looking forward to more chapters, my friend! :D

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Curtis and Aeolis hmm you'll just have to find out for yourself there ;p

Yes Gilgamesh is about to go through some things but he's definitely not the only one woo I put these characters through things

And as to where Isaac is, i wonder where could he be, but is he really the only person you should be asking about?

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  On 3/10/2017 at 2:51 AM, Sarrin said:

Curtis and Aeolis hmm you'll just have to find out for yourself there ;p

Yes Gilgamesh is about to go through some things but he's definitely not the only one woo I put these characters through things

And as to where Isaac is, i wonder where could he be, but is he really the only person you should be asking about?

 

Gahhh, this is all so exciting! I can't wait! :D

 

Oh yeah, I can definitely tell you like to put your characters through tough situations! You create very interesting scenarios for them!

 

Lol, I know that the other guy I should be asking about is Caleb, but he's Sarrin, so that's all I need to know for now. X3

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  On 3/11/2017 at 12:35 PM, Sarrin said:

But if he's Sarrin who's the other Sarrin? I count three Sarrin's, not including me anyway;p

 

Wait, what? O.O

 

My mind is shattered now...now I'm wondering who the other Sarrin is! Because Caleb is him, and Aelous is him, so then...who is the third one? Gahhhh, dang it, the mystery intensifies! :D

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Here's the epic finale to the Bloody Evolution Ark!
 

Chapter Ten: Test of Will


 


 

  SPOILERS: Click to reveal



 


 

Chapter Eleven: Childhoods End


 


 

  SPOILERS: Click to reveal

 

 

Bloody Evolution Part – End

 

There you have it folks the conclusion to Book II's first ark I hope you've all enjoyed it!

 

 

In the mean time I'll give you a sneak peak into the next ark; Perfect World

  SPOILERS: Click to reveal

 

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GAHHH, THE FEELS ARE INCREDIBLY STRONG IN THIS ONE!!!! WHAT A MASTERFUL END TO AN AWESOME ARC!

 

Good God, tension is flying ridiculously high, and it looks like Gilgamesh is gonna face the ghosts of his past! But good God, what happened to Jeremiah and Sophie broke me. She's now broken beyond repair! She's lost everything, and now, only her raging flames remain! There's gonna be hell to pay, and I'm sure Sophie's gonna may Phi pay big time! I can't wait for the next arc! :D

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Now aside from the countless lives lost so far and in this stories background, three people have been lost first was the mastermind Ludious Alcross, Grantz the man who knew to much, and now Jeremiah Roads has been added to that list father of two of the greatest forces this world will know. You will be missed.

 

Not every story is happy and not all endings are wanted, but there are somethings in this world that you cannot deny or reject.

 

Thanks for reading.

-Sarrin

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  On 3/15/2017 at 2:42 AM, Sarrin said:

Now aside from the countless lives lost so far and in this stories background, three people have been lost first was the mastermind Ludious Alcross, Grantz the man who knew to much, and now Jeremiah Roads has been added to that list father of two of the greatest forces this world will know. You will be missed.

 

Not every story is happy and not all endings are wanted, but there are somethings in this world that you cannot deny or reject.

 

Thanks for reading.

-Sarrin

 

Oh ho ho, definitely undeniable truth! Truer words have never been spoken! I cannot wait to see what comes next! :D

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Ooh, it's definitely a rousing, riveting and epic composition! It feels dramatic, as if we're witnessing end world events, which, in the case of your story, is the case! It also feels like music that plays when a character overcomes hardship and rises like a phoenix! Very inspiring music indeed! :D

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Here are the first two chapters of the next ark enjoy~

 

 

Perfect World Part – Start


 

Chapter Twelve: The Loving Dark


 


 

  SPOILERS: Click to reveal

 


 


 

Chapter Thirteen: Anima, Treasures and Stars


 


 

  SPOILERS: Click to reveal

 

 

 

Let me know what you think!

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Oh snap, Gilgamesh's Mom is loose! This can't be good, it just can't, if Gil's reactions are to be taken as evidence of her evil! Daaang, that battle between him and Sophie was just insane! I really loved how action packed it was!  And it seems everyone else is going their ways! I wonder how these paths will connect to each other again? It was awesome seeing Sarrin again, his power is just mind blowing! I wonder what's next for Gil and Sophie?

 

I'm also very concerned with Steph's little project! It could prove to have disastrous results! And Skuld, as usual, is a badass! Great work man, keep up the awesomeness! :D

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For the first time ever here is THREE Chapters/ 34 pages

Enjoy~
 

Chapter Fourteen: Time and Memory


 


 

  SPOILERS: Click to reveal

 


 


 

Chapter Fifteen: We Who Hold The Future


 

  SPOILERS: Click to reveal

 



 

Chapter Sixteen: Perfect World


 

  SPOILERS: Click to reveal

 

I hope you've all been enjoying this and I'm sure there are questions, especially since i just posted 5 chapters in two days. xD

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Gahhh, so much is happening, it's all so insanely badass and awesome and amazing! OMG, the origin of Caleb Harris, I can't even believe my eyes! That story of Nell and Aeolus was intriguing, and it definitely provided some essential backstory to the mythology of your work! Amazing presentation there! :D

 

Omg, and everyone is gathering to take a stand against Sarrin and the void! I cannot wait to see how this will turn out! :D

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