DarkAngelGrl22567 10 Posted December 6, 2009 Wow, I wanna kick my self! I haven't updated this story in so long, I'd be surprised if you guys just totally forgot about it! Well, I've recently posted the fifth chapter so I'll give you all the link so you can read it... Some more of the Twilight Town kids are introduced, Namine starts talking again, and Saix delves more into his relationship with Xigbar(kinda) and Axel had some REALLY bad karma coming at him....poor Axel... HERE'S THE LINK!!! -------------> http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5243233/5/The_To_Do_List I hope you all like it!! Message me to tell me what you think or just hit 'new reply' and say whatever you want! Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Larxene12 86 Posted December 6, 2009 lol im still readin i staretd on chapter 1 now im on 4 its really good! Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
DarkAngelGrl22567 10 Posted December 6, 2009 Thanks, Larxene! I'm starting to write the sixth chapter right now, so I'll hopefully have that up sometime this week... I really want to get this story at chapter ten by the end of this month! But I sadly don't really see this happening! I'm so angry with myself! Well, hopefully you like the fifth chapter as much as the others. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Larxene12 86 Posted December 6, 2009 i did! i thinks they;re funny! cos i dun like yaoi, i thinks its funny! 83 Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
DarkAngelGrl22567 10 Posted December 7, 2009 The sixth chapter is gunna have A LOT of RoxasXAxel fluffyness so hopefully for you AkuRoku lovers it meets your expectations! Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
DarkAngelGrl22567 10 Posted December 7, 2009 Yeah, that was one of my favorite parts. I absolutely adore Demyx but I do feel the need to harass him once in a while. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Friend 81 Posted December 8, 2009 IN DEED .. everone chold use a little hrasemeent ... ANYWAYS .. GOOD STORY .. i got a lot o good laughs out of it ..keep it a going .. OR ELS .. I KILL YOU XDXD Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
DarkAngelGrl22567 10 Posted December 8, 2009 HERE'S THE SIXTH CHAPTER!! Just wrote it, like, five minutes ago, guys! LoL Link --------> http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5243233/6/The_To_Do_List Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Friend 81 Posted December 8, 2009 IT WAS AWSOME . I LIkED IT . IT WAS like awsome .. yay .. im relly bad at revewing things .. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
DarkAngelGrl22567 10 Posted December 8, 2009 Haha. It's okay, I just really wanted to get people's opinion on what could be improved or what they like. I kinda needed specifics from people so I could improve the story, but it's okay, as long as know people are actually reading is good enough. Thanks for reading it! I think my favorite part of this chapter was Xigbar... Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Friend 81 Posted December 8, 2009 i agree ... and i like how he acted to .. that sort of what i whold of done to .. all thought i whold porbley run away then go into a bathroom stall Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
DarkAngelGrl22567 10 Posted December 8, 2009 Well, Xigbar had to pee really bad, otherwise he probably would have run away screaming and told Saix.... Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Friend 81 Posted December 8, 2009 not relly .. just the way you were makeng ever body act ... you make the men act just about right ... Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Larxene12 86 Posted December 8, 2009 lo, that was good! cant wait to read chapter 6 Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
DarkAngelGrl22567 10 Posted December 12, 2009 Okay, well, here's the seventh chapter! It's in Roxas' POV throughout, which I hadn't planned on AT ALL! So sorry if you guys were hoping to get other characters POV in there. I might just talk more about the party next chapter and leave Axel and Roxas out entirely for the next chapter. What do you guys want??? Well, enough of my rambling... Here's the link to the seventh chapter! Link ---------> http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5243233/7/The_To_Do_List Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Larxene12 86 Posted December 12, 2009 that was good, i never realised then Xion's hair was raven-like till now.... Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
DarkAngelGrl22567 10 Posted December 13, 2009 lol, well, now you know! Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Friend 81 Posted December 14, 2009 HELL YAY Alice Cooper FTW "only women bleed .. only women bleed" ANYWAY . GOOD STORY . BUT IT NEEDS MORE SMEXYNESS IN IT XDXD JK Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
DarkAngelGrl22567 10 Posted December 22, 2009 LoL. Yeah, I love Alice Cooper, too. I just had to add him in there. Three people in my story are obsessed with eighties/seventies music, Roxas, Demyx, and Leon. So, hence Alice Cooper, and Alanah Myles (Black Velvet) playing during his party. Anyway, I need your guys' opinion on the next chapter(s). I have A LOT more I need to do where the party is concerned. So much crap happens during that one night, that it's gonna take a lot to write. So, I'm going to leave it up to you guys.... Do you guys want everything in one HUGE chapter, (probably twice as long as my others, if not longer) OR split it between two chapters???? I'm leavin' it up to you guys, you have to read the mess after all! Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Rose Riku 39 Posted December 23, 2009 Poison made me jizz with happiness when I saw it in there. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Friend 81 Posted December 24, 2009 proble better to split it in two chapters and relesaese one on one day and relase the other and the day after Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
DarkAngelGrl22567 10 Posted December 26, 2009 That's what I was thinking of doing.... I'm almost done the first half so it should be up soon. I'll be splitting it up, because I can't really imagine anyone reading a twenty page chapter and the rest being about half that... So, the first half will be up soon, I'll post the link as soon as it's posted on the site. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Friend 81 Posted December 27, 2009 [taps foot].. [is waiting in pashently ] .... Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Friend 81 Posted January 4, 2010 any time will be nice ^^ Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
