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Geralt 4,874 Posted January 9, 2017 Pretty interesting. 1 Sarrin reacted to this Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
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KingdomHearts3 2,591 Posted January 14, 2017 Well written. Nice job! 2 The Transcendent Key and Sarrin reacted to this Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
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The Transcendent Key 12,109 Posted January 17, 2017 Whew, I finally caught up! This has been quite an enthralling read so far! I really like this story, its so grand and epic in scale! Reading it has felt like watching a really cool anime series! I really like Gilgamesh, and I think that Caleb and Sophie make for a cute couple! And also, Skuld seems like such a badass! Overall, I've liked the structure of this story so far, it's action packed, and it feels like the characters live in a world with so much lore behind it, and so much history! I find it awesome! The only thing I'd have to ask is if you'd leave space in between paragraphs instead of having everything all cluttered up in one humongous paragraph, ya know what I'm saying? Other than that, the story is pretty darn awesome, and I'll definitely keep reading! 1 Sarrin reacted to this Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
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The Transcendent Key 12,109 Posted January 18, 2017 Ill be posting the next chapters soon i even though of throwing a little snippit of book two out just to add a thousand questions to your lives Yes the spacing issue, thats not how rhe book is written sadly its when i transfer it from its source to here and it wont let me fix it Nice, can't wait for more! Ah, and alright, then it's no problem! The story is awesome! Wow, and these two chapters were insane! Skuld is every bit a badass as I pictured him to be, and I loved that whole scene with him talking to Caleb and the others! And then Ludious coming and telling the heroes that everything is for naught also brought a smile to my face! I just really love villains, they're awesome! X3 (Well, okay, Skuld's not a villain, but his attitude reminds me of one, hehe.) Dang, and that many pages!? That's impressive! But yeah, great story, man! 1 Sarrin reacted to this Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
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The Transcendent Key 12,109 Posted January 20, 2017 (edited) Oh my goodness, so much has happened! Everything has been thrown into chaos! Omg, I hope Isaac's not really dead! And Sarrin is a part of Caleb and vice versa!? That's insane!!!! And good God, that battle between Sophie and Phi was legendary! X_X Overall, these chapters were intense! Keep up the great work! Edited January 20, 2017 by The Transcendent Key Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
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The Transcendent Key 12,109 Posted January 21, 2017 (edited) Well hey, it's no problem at all! Your story is pretty darn good and enticing, so it's a worthwhile read! And I have questions for you! What was your inspiration for this story? How long did you take to make it? And I'm guessing that things like Skuld and Urd are words that come from history, aren't they? And as always, I look forward to the chapters! (I also noticed the awesome KH Days reference you made with that Caleb flashback sequence! And another cleverly hidden KH reference as well!) Edited January 21, 2017 by The Transcendent Key Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
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Sarrin 100 Posted January 21, 2017 (edited) -Deleted Thanks for all the support!!! https://www.amazon.com/Seventh-Dawn-Transcendence-Book-1-ebook/dp/B01BFLWIPW Edited July 1, 2017 by Sarrin 1 The Transcendent Key reacted to this Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
The Transcendent Key 12,109 Posted January 22, 2017 An empty shell with no heart? The Lanes Between! Ha, loving these Kingdom Hearts references! But dang, these chapters were insane! The world is already going up in smoke, and it seems that now Caleb's struggling with himself and what he's becoming! It's scary to think that who you think you are isn't who you are at all! Anyways, I really loved that scene where Sarrin was talking with Isaac, and telling him his story! And good lord, when Caleb stayed behind when the portal closed, Sophie trying to chase after him....gahhh, the feels! Also, Skuld is majorly badass! Oh wow, so you had quite the hefty writing process for your story, huh? Well, I'm glad it ended up the way it did, and that you were able to overcome your personal hurdles and finish your work! I've loved this story so far, and I can only imagine the other books in your series are just as badass, if not more! And well, those KH references are a nice touch! Oh, so Skuld and the Aesir and Yggdrasil are related to Norse mythology, huh? That's pretty darn cool! I'll be looking forward to seeing the end of Book One! Great work, man! 1 Sarrin reacted to this Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
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Sarrin 100 Posted January 25, 2017 (edited) -Deleted Thanks for all the support!!!https://www.amazon.c...k/dp/B01BFLWIPW Non smettere mai di vita e infinita, ma si sono-Sarrin Edited July 1, 2017 by Sarrin 1 The Transcendent Key reacted to this Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
The Transcendent Key 12,109 Posted January 26, 2017 Holy dang, what a rollercoaster end to Book One! Dang man, I gotta say, this was some piece of work! Those final two chapters in particular were explosively insane! Wow, so it seems that now Caleb has completely turned into Sarrin, huh? Dang, I really hope that there's some chance that Caleb can be able to return! And OMG, that battle against Ludious was amazing, and Aeolus, gahhh!!! Dude, this was amazing!!!! This story was really well made, and I loved the pacing of it! I felt like I was watching an anime! A well made anime, mind you! (Also, I noticed that you provided spacing for the final two chapters, nice!) This was a rollercoaster ride, and I'm glad I was able to stumble upon it! I'll be eagerly awaiting to read Book Two! Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
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