Misuzu 15 Posted July 21, 2009 .untitled. Now I am starting to love you more- Yet your breathing has eternally paused - cold to the core. I wish I could turn back time as we'd run away- To fulfill our wildest dreams, throwing all our fears aside. But now that you're gone, I have nothing left to hold - I have lost control. Those three final words that slipped from your lips I'll forever keep- Now you shall sleep. ~~~ Eternium E.TUHR.NEE.UHM. =An eternal sanctuary. My soul speaks so sliently But I just can't hear it anymore. Ever since you've been gone, Not once have you escaped the chamber of my throbbing heart. You broke open the lock of it- Even though I knew it'd be hard to do. My spirit still bleeds from the pain and hurt you've caused me to now know- I've never felt so alone. Your harsh words from a far-off memory still burn like venom in my core. Even from all those months...years, You still made me feel in such a way I thought I'd never remember- Yet now my most inner dreams have been finally regained. Do you hear me whisper your name in the stillness of night? I try to walk away - I can no longer stay under your spell. These memories of those days hidden deep in the hollows of my heart seem to stalk me; No matter where I run to, your image remains. I must forget you, and though it is far beyond a goal I have to eventually reach that is near the word impossible, I swear I will someday. A lack of hope will no longer cause this healing wound to stumble. I need to leave behind the past that I've shed so many tears about - Yesterday will become never. Forever will I remain in my, and not your sanctuary of which I used to know. An eternium, one of my own. 1 logansinc reacted to this Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
W 1 Posted July 21, 2009 They're lovely ma deah. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Misuzu 15 Posted July 21, 2009 Thank you, kind stranger. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
W 1 Posted July 21, 2009 Thank you, kind stranger. You're welcome princess. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Kaiso 2,764 Posted July 21, 2009 Those poems are beautiful. <3 Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Pseudonym 0 Posted July 21, 2009 You make beautiful poems:D Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
CardCaptorDeadpool 386 Posted July 21, 2009 What a beautiful poem thanks for sharing Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
DigiMoon93 2 Posted July 22, 2009 .......i have a problem with relating poems.......... the first one reminds me of Namine to Sora and the second one reminds me of Sora to Namine ...............i relate poems too much, sometimes its SCARY *kinda off topic here* TRUE STORY: my friend made SUCH a beautiful poem.......until i read it............it was about her and her old boyfriend....but to me i thought it was Akuroku (which i dont care for).........i laughed at her until she re-read the lines that just SHOUTED it which were: "I was your Mentor, Lover" and "your eyes blue mine green" "Your hand cold mine warm" and so fourth ..........lets just say that i tramatized her after pointing that out jes. now I'm not allowed to read her poems or else i'd tramatize her again Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Cellar Door 652 Posted July 22, 2009 Those are really well written. Keep writing poetry, you have a talent. C: Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
HarlequinMemory 2 Posted July 22, 2009 Great job, I really love the first. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
im-axel-fear-me-NOW 10 Posted July 29, 2009 those r so good!!!!!!!!! i luv both of them!!!!!!!! and digimoon93 i have that same problem XDD ill hear something and itll remind me of a kh character XDD heck i can take the strangest songs and think of kh xDD Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
zexionrox13 3 Posted November 7, 2009 *sniff* That was so beautiful! Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites