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Mystery

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A KH fanfiction dedicated to the Mysterious Figure.

 

Introduction

 

A man in a black cloak approaches me. Am I in the woods, or somewhere else? I see mansion, and a memory immediately flashes in my head. I picture a boy...a boy with blonde hair, and a key. A key? My flashback ends, and I turn my attention back to the man that was approaching me. Although his hood was on, I could see his features clearly. His skin was a tanned brown, while his hair was bright silver, hanging down to his shoulders, and his eyes were of amber color. He speaks."They must not know your identity, for time itself will become void. Wear the cloak of darkness to conceal your identity. You must go back, and test the ones with the keys. I have brought them to ruin. You must fix my mistake, my error, and set things right. You are the key to all connections. You are...the number 15 of the Organization. The one with no name." Who am I?, I think.How did I get here..when did I get here? I have the urge to be frightened...but I can't feel anything at all. It's like I have....no emotions.

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    I like it ^^

    Although, when you're writing, you either write in past or present, using words to define it as 'was' instead of 'is', or vice versa. I noticed that most of it's present writing, but in a few spots you switched to past, which is okay only i the character's speaking. Just a little tip :3

    All in all, good job

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    I'm gonna be loving this.

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    @ lexi. I just noticed that, and I'm going to fix it

     

    @RoxSox. 8D

     

    Chapter 1

     

    The man then turns his head and holds his right hand out towards a tree. A portal of darkness suddenly appears, and the man walks to it. Before he steps in it, he beckons me to follow him. I proceed to do so. As soon as I step into the darkness, something changes inside of me. I start to feel that my heart itself is being swallowed by something evil. The man turns around and beckons me even more, and I quicken my pace. It seems that this pathway is nothing but darkness. There are no walkways, I cannot see a floor, nor a wall, nor a roof. It's just miles and miles of seemingly endless darkness. I start to tire out, and stop for a breather. The man stops too. He does the same thing he did in the woods, and shoves his hand out. A door opens, and I see light. My heart jumps for joy as I step out of the corridor of darkness. The portal closes behind me, and I find myself in some sort of throne room. Lines are all over the walls and the floor, and they are glowing, on and off. I see a giant chair, and a boy sitting in it, seemingly sleep. An image from earlier pops into my mind. This was the same boy that I had a flashback of minutes ago. But wait..something was different about him. His clothing. Was this the same boy? The man also gives the boy a glance, and then turns to me. "He is one of the people you must save." I have no response, for I do not know how or when I am going to save this boy. The man continues. "To save him, the most important of all, you must let darkness grow in your heart. Let it consume you. I see you have been affected by it already."

     

    I do not know what this man is talking about. "A-a-affected?", I stutter. My first words roll out of my mouth slowly, for it seems that I have not yet mastered speech. The man nods, and he leads me to a wall in the room. The wall was reflective, so I can see myself in it. My hair is dark black, and sticks up in spikes all around my head. My eyes...they were brown. Even though I have never seen my eyes, they look different. They feel different. My face has the appearance of someone I have met before. I can see the persons face in my head right now. We are identical. Why is this?

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    Nice ^^

    I like it

    Write me another chapter! ;D

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    OH MY!!! This is going to be awesome :D

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    Chapter 2

     

    My head begins to ache from this moment of d

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    I like it ^^

    Nicely written, besides a few minor grammatical errors (:

    Post more! :D

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    I really like it ^^

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    very awesome man! i love it. keep it up

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    Chapter 3



    Xemnas then approaches me, and hands me a cloak identical to his own. "Wear this to symbolize the Organization, and also to protect you from various things in the Realm of Darkness." I grab the cloak, and observe it. The material of the cloak is very soft, like cotton, but stern as well. I put the cloak on, and it automatically fits to my body, very tightly. Xemnas begins to speak. "I cannot let the other members witness you. I am going to ask you to hide in this room until I give further instruction." I nod. "Good. If a boy wielding a key comes in this room, you must do whatever you can to conceal your identity. Do not let him defeat you, understand?". I nod again. "I have to go now. Take care." And with that, Xemnas opens a portal, and disappears into it. I find a seat next to a wall in the room, and I take it. I look up to observe the boy sitting in the middle of the room. Why was he sleeping? Xemnas never specified what was wrong with him. If he was sleep, he should have woken up when Xemnas and I entered this room. He must be in a coma. I place my face in my hands, thinking about the events that just occurred. Why can't I remember my name? My head starts to ache. I get up from my seat, and walk to where the boy was sleeping. Something inside of me wanted him to wake up. I reach out, and touch the boy on his shoulder. Suddenly, the room starts to flicker. What was going on? The walls begin to fade away, and so does the boy. Soon, I find myself standing in an open area, full of grass and rocks. Where was I? I turn around and see a girl striding past me. Who was she? The girl seems to sense my presence, and she quickly turns around. She summons a Keyblade, and stands in a defensive position. I don't know what to do. I summon the blades that Xemnas had given me, and stand in an attack position, with my left hand sticking up to the sky, and my right hand sticking to the right.
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    Sweet (: Another really great chapter.

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    another awesome chapter (:

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    Chapter 4



    The girl has dark blue hair. Almost an aqua color. Aqua. Why does this word seem to fit this girl? I look and see the surprise and determination in her eyes. I have seen that look before. My memory projects a flashback. I am standing in a square, in a familiar town, gazing at the sky. The girl notices me from a distance, and comes running towards me. She says the name "Terra." I grab her by the throat, and lift her off of her feet. "Who...am I?", I say. As she struggles from my grasp, she manages to reply. "Terra, this darkness. Fight the darkness within you!". I drop the girl, and place my hands on my face. The flashback ends.

    "Who....am I?", I say to the girl. She doesn't speak, she just charges at me. I get into a defensive stance, and block her first attack. She is powerful. She continually swings her Keyblade at me, but her attacks are parried by my Ethreal blades. I decide to go onto the offensive. I attack her with my blades, and perform magic I've never dreamed of doing. The fight is lasting for a while, and I begin to tire. The girl goes in for the kill, but before her blades impales me, time stops. I begin to feel recharged, and time then starts up again, giving me the opportunity to block her attack. She slices at me again, this time, hitting me on the chest. I step back, injured, and remember that I finished the task at hand. I summon the No Name Keyblade, and I drop it to the ground. The area around me starts to fade again. I look at the girl pick up the Keyblade, and the memory hits me. This girl is Aqua. Before I can call her name, the area fades away, and I find myself face first on concrete. I pick myself up, and notice that I am in the exact same square that I was in during my flashback. My head aches, and I put my hands to it to soothe the pain. Suddenly, I hear several peoples footsteps. I look up, and I see a boy with a key, a duck, and a dog. The boy. He seemed so familiar. And the Keyblade. I have seen it before...

    The boy's face looks like it is filled with rage. He swings his key in the air and yells, "It's Xehanort!".
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    I LOVE AQUA! 8D

     

    Great chapter ^^

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    "Who....am I?"

    There wouldn't be a comma. Otherwise, it's awesome <3
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    Chapter 5: The End



    The boy. He looks so familiar. He..looks like me. But wait..I have gray hair. I remember looking like Xemnas. But I saw my reflection in the castle..and it was almost identical to this boys. Why..why were things so confusing? Who am I really? What am I?

    I fall to the ground, and grip my head. I scream, a scream of eternal torment. Nothing could stop the pain that was flowing through my body. The confusion. The misunderstanding. My sight begins to fade. The boy drops his intense glare, and walks to me. "Hey, are you okay? Wait a minute!". His facial expression changes from calm to surprised. "Roxas?!". I look in a puddle of water not far from me, and see the reflection of a person I've never seen before. Wait. I had seen this face. Ventus. But why did this boy just call me Roxas?

    I grip my head again, memories running through my head at an intense pace. I see a girl with blue hair, getting attacked by a masked man in some sort of desert. I see a girl with black hair, and a boy with red hair, sitting on a ledge of a clock tower, eating something blue. It looks like ice cream. Ice cream? Why does this ice cream look so familiar to me? The boy reaches out, and touches my hand. Immediately, I faint. I don't know how long I fall to sleep. It could have been 5 minutes ago, to 500 years ago. But I feel a sensation I've never felt before. It's warm. Nostalgic. I open my eyes, and find myself floating in darkness. The area feels so warm...but cold. I feel that something is missing from me. Something important. Something..something I let someone else lend. In a sudden flash, a ball of light appears in front of me, and a voice emits from it. "Thank you." And with that, the ball floats towards me, and enters my chest. After this, a rush of emotions flow through my body, emotions I've never felt before. Memories rush in my head, memories that I never knew I had. Another flash of light happens, and I awaken in a chair. A throne of some sort. My body feels stiff, as if I had been sleeping for 13 years. Or had I? A door directly in front of me opens, and a man walks into the room. He had long, spiky brown hair, a gray shirt, brown pants, and a shoulder pad similar to my own. He looks into my face, and I look into his, and I already know what I'm going to say, and I know what he's going to say. "Terra". Terra smiles and says, "Ven." All of a sudden, the room around us disappears, and we are in a field. A familiar field. We're in the Land of Departure!

    I start to think about all of the stuff that's happened. A name strikes my mind. A name..a name of a boy. A boy that has held my heart for a long time. A boy..that has rescued me from my suffering. Terra walks close to me, and puts his hand on my shoulder, as he understands what I am thinking. We both look into the sky, and we recite the one word that is on both of our minds at this very moment. "Sora."



    That's the end folks. I hoped you enjoyed it.
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    I guess Ven's Lingering Sentiment :P

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    I have to say

     

    rKI3a9pqJg0

     

    This song is what inspired me to keep writing this story. It gave me the ideas and stuff.

     

    So now..since there is a lot of untold stuff...I am going to make a fanfic based off of Sora's perspective after KH2.

     

    I've made a fanfic series, if you guys have read it, about this, but I am disappointed in it, so I will remake it.

     

    Hope you guys enjoyed this story, my next one will be much longer.

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