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[The Unversed 168]

Hey

 

Okay, the edit is done to both my posts being no.44 & no.47 changing Midnea's target & Effie telling King Alderon her replacement being the guy in red K

 

 

Overlords of the Rings: The Two Worlds.

 

Haha good one!

[Scrapmaster 1,731]

I said I was gonna do it, and here he is. Motherfiretrucking Maxis.

 

"Christ, how did you even get me to talk in this mess of a post"

"Shut it Maxis just do it"

"Alright....daaaaaaaad >:("

 

Name: Maxis. "The Eye of The Beholder"

"What? expected a nicer name? think of one for me then!"

 

Gender: ???

"I like to think im a male...but at this point im too afraid to ask my creator."

 

Race: Posessed armor

Race abilities: Being a spirit inhabiting an armor, Maxis's physiology is rather different, he can be broken, torn apart as many times as one would like, with each time taking longer for him to recombine and rebuild himself, for one to trully kill him they need to exorcise his soul out of the armor and destroy the seal that binds him to it. Being a metal suit of armor also allows him to perform feats normal "Fleshies" wouldn't, like jumping off cliffs to escape, jumping off waterfalls, throwing himself in front of a oncoming train or something of the sort to escape.

 

"Oh but what is a vessel without a catalyst and a physical body? Human flesh is weak, it is unreliable, but the soul is the part of the being's life that will always remain, and as such, when imbued within an armor...that armor shall never break unless the soul allows it".

"The old rituals of the seekers saw them imbue their very souls into suits of armor, abandoning their physical bodies and adopting a new form, for everlasting life...whether it is a worthy price...is yet to be proven".

"Enjoy the lore, chumps"

 

Age: Literally ancient, he doesn't even remember how old he is, he only knows he has seen the fall of many kingdoms in his years in the overworld

"I've seen some shit, I dunno how old I am. But every time I wake up every now and again I am surrounded by cobwebs'n shit...sometimes on a merchant's stock, hell I've woken up on the bottom of a lake once."

 

Appearance:

 

"Im firetrucking beautiful"

 

Magic:

 

Gaze of The Beholder: The eye drawing in the chest of his armor is a mark of the power he was imbued before he was bound to the armor. This allow Maxis to toy with  anyone in his vicinity with both deadly illusions and harmless ones in the form of pranks or just nasty visions. One person may see him, other may not think they can see him at all. To all of those weak minded in particular, the stronger the mind, the harder it is to cause tricks to them. 

 

Should an opponent be naturally weak to magic and be weak of mind, Maxis has almost full control over what they see,hear and feel even. Cue hilarious interrogations issued by him.

 

This magic also steps into summoning magic, as he can summon weapons, gadgets and all sorts of things from his imagination into the world and use them as a real, touchable thing. Called "Bound items"they are permanent in his hands, and to those who can control the magic they contain, can obtain them, and they fetch an astoundingly good price in the markets, for a bound item, is indestructible and if a sword, is always sharp.

 

"In order to truly be one with illusion, one must sacrifice their body and soul to the beholder, give up the flesh, and manipulate all around you with what they want, or don't want to see." 

 

Grasp of The Beholder: Highly advanced shadow magic, different from pure 'darkness' in a sense, but very similar, can do almost anything regular darkness can do, but this particular kind works specially well with illusion magic, he can make spells out of shadow, like a shadowy blast or even a shadowy flame that can burn, it is a very maleable form of magic...granted to him ages long past.

 

"And oh, seeker of the beholder, give your shadow up to our gracious lord, and be granted free reign over all others, even if there is light all around you, ye shall wield the power opposite of it at all times"

"If you didn't get from the lore I just told ya it makes it so that I don't have a shadow too...but I still have a reflection in the mirror, im an armor, not a fanged pale, sparkly in the light kinda creature"

 

 

Weapons: "A whole arsenal of summoned weapons and stuff...though my mostly used ones are sword,bows,explosives, throwing knives, grappling hooks, shadowy claws, which are awesome by the way, to just ripping out my suit's arm and beating someone with it...what? its fun to do."

 

Personality: Lovable asshole, joker sort, Maxis loves to joke, criticize and generally just annoy everyone around him, he cares not for formalities, nor does he care for respect and being respected, he does what he wants, when he wants, often prone to mood swings on occasion.

 

Maxis may seem carefree, jolly and friendly at first, but behind all this is an unhinged killer who would rip out his own arm and beat you to death with it...not like hasn't already done that in the past, because he has. Maxis is not one to follow orders, but if the person is a particularly powerful summoner or cleric, he might not have a choice at all if his life depends on it.

 

"I am also prone to breaking the fourth wall on occasion, thats right Vaude,Unversed, Mystics and everyone else, even behind your monitors or phones. you're not safe from me! Welll...technically you are safe, but whatever."

 

Biography: 

 

An ancient civilization's ritual? an old civilizations's customs or maybe a shadowy cult of sorts, Maxis has many stories he tells people, why? because he doesn't remember too well, its been thousands of years.

 

WHat is known however is that there is a urban myth in the overworld that

"When great conflict rises, The Beholder awakens, and so does his vessel...a shadowy armor, capable of bending the minds of all. His purpose? unknown, he awakens to cause hell to all sides of the conflict, appearing at random, when no one expects it, to taunt, annoy and even kill. He has killed leaders who posed as the biggest threats to our land, and maybe saved us all...but no one knows the truth, but one thing is true, when  there is conflict, a war, anything that threatens our world, he will reappear...and fight, whether his cause his just or not is unknown. The only thing for sure is that when the conflict ends...he vanishes, only to be seen again in the next".

 

"I also have a tendency to enjoy the company of animals and puppies...im a softie, yeah."

 

 

 

Theme:

 

Regular theme:

 

 

 

 

Serious, pissed off theme:

 

Edited August 13, 2016 by Scrapmaster

[The Unversed 168]

 

I said I was gonna do it, and here he is. Motherfiretrucking Maxis.

 

"Christ, how did you even get me to talk in this mess of a post"

"Shut it Maxis just do it"

"Alright....daaaaaaaad >:("

 

Name: Maxis. "The Eye of The Beholder"

"What? expected a nicer name? think of one for me then!"

 

Gender: ???

"I like to think im a male...but at this point im too afraid to ask my creator."

 

Race: Posessed armor

Race abilities: Being a spirit inhabiting an armor, Maxis's physiology is rather different, he can be broken, torn apart as many times as one would like, with each time taking longer for him to recombine and rebuild himself, for one to trully kill him they need to exorcise his soul out of the armor and destroy the seal that binds him to it. Being a metal suit of armor also allows him to perform feats normal "Fleshies" wouldn't, like jumping off cliffs to escape, jumping off waterfalls, throwing himself in front of a oncoming train or something of the sort to escape.

 

"Oh but what is a vessel without a catalyst and a physical body? Human flesh is weak, it is unreliable, but the soul is the part of the being's life that will always remain, and as such, when imbued within an armor...that armor shall never break unless the soul allows it".

"The old rituals of the seekers saw them imbue their very souls into suits of armor, abandoning their physical bodies and adopting a new form, for everlasting life...whether it is a worthy price...is yet to be proven".

"Enjoy the lore, chumps"

 

Age: Literally ancient, he doesn't even remember how old he is, he only knows he has seen the fall of many kingdoms in his years in the overworld

"I've seen some shit, I dunno how old I am. But every time I wake up every now and again I am surrounded by cobwebs'n shit...sometimes on a merchant's stock, hell I've woken up on the bottom of a lake once."

 

Appearance:

 

"Im firetrucking beautiful"

 

Magic:

 

Gaze of The Beholder: The eye drawing in the chest of his armor is a mark of the power he was imbued before he was bound to the armor. This allow Maxis to toy with  anyone in his vicinity with both deadly illusions and harmless ones in the form of pranks or just nasty visions. One person may see him, other may not think they can see him at all. To all of those weak minded in particular, the stronger the mind, the harder it is to cause tricks to them. 

 

Should an opponent be naturally weak to magic and be weak of mind, Maxis has almost full control over what they see,hear and feel even. Cue hilarious interrogations issued by him.

 

This magic also steps into summoning magic, as he can summon weapons, gadgets and all sorts of things from his imagination into the world and use them as a real, touchable thing. Called "Bound items"they are permanent in his hands, and to those who can control the magic they contain, can obtain them, and they fetch an astoundingly good price in the markets, for a bound item, is indestructible and if a sword, is always sharp.

 

"In order to truly be one with illusion, one must sacrifice their body and soul to the beholder, give up the flesh, and manipulate all around you with what they want, or don't want to see." 

 

Grasp of The Beholder: Highly advanced shadow magic, different from pure 'darkness' in a sense, but very similar, can do almost anything regular darkness can do, but this particular kind works specially well with illusion magic, he can make spells out of shadow, like a shadowy blast or even a shadowy flame that can burn, it is a very maleable form of magic...granted to him ages long past.

 

"And oh, seeker of the beholder, give your shadow up to our gracious lord, and be granted free reign over all others, even if there is light all around you, ye shall wield the power opposite of it at all times"

"If you didn't get from the lore I just told ya it makes it so that I don't have a shadow too...but I still have a reflection in the mirror, im an armor, not a fanged pale, sparkly in the light kinda creature"

 

 

Weapons: "A whole arsenal of summoned weapons and stuff...though my mostly used ones are sword,bows,explosives, throwing knives, grappling hooks, shadowy claws, which are awesome by the way, to just ripping out my suit's arm and beating someone with it...what? its fun to do."

 

Personality: Lovable asshole, joker sort, Maxis loves to joke, criticize and generally just annoy everyone around him, he cares not for formalities, nor does he care for respect and being respected, he does what he wants, when he wants, often prone to mood swings on occasion.

 

Maxis may seem carefree, jolly and friendly at first, but behind all this is an unhinged killer who would rip out his own arm and beat you to death with it...not like hasn't already done that in the past, because he has. Maxis is not one to follow orders, but if the person is a particularly powerful summoner or cleric, he might not have a choice at all if his life depends on it.

 

"I am also prone to breaking the fourth wall on occasion, thats right Vaude,Unversed, Mystics and everyone else, even behind your monitors or phones. you're not safe from me! Welll...technically you are safe, but whatever."

 

Biography: 

 

An ancient civilization's ritual? an old civilizations's customs or maybe a shadowy cult of sorts, Maxis has many stories he tells people, why? because he doesn't remember too well, its been thousands of years.

 

WHat is known however is that there is a urban myth in the overworld that

"When great conflict rises, The Beholder awakens, and so does his vessel...a shadowy armor, capable of bending the minds of all. His purpose? unknown, he awakens to cause hell to all sides of the conflict, appearing at random, when no one expects it, to taunt, annoy and even kill. He has killed leaders who posed as the biggest threats to our land, and maybe saved us all...but no one knows the truth, but one thing is true, when  there is conflict, a war, anything that threatens our world, he will reappear...and fight, whether his cause his just or not is unknown. The only thing for sure is that when the conflict ends...he vanishes, only to be seen again in the next".

 

"I also have a tendency to enjoy the company of animals and puppies...im a softie, yeah."

 

 

 

Theme:

 

Regular theme:

 

 

 

 

Serious, pissed off theme:

 

 

 

It's Maxis! & his come back as a fullmetal alchemist alphonse type of character too, cool!

[Scrapmaster 1,731]

It's Maxis! & his come back as a fullmetal alchemist alphonse type of character too, cool!

 

Yes it is!

 

Woulkd you think he'd be a priority target by Midneah's punishers? Probably a good target, since he'd probably have eluded them for mileniums

[Mystics Apprentice 2,397]

 

I said I was gonna do it, and here he is. Motherfiretrucking Maxis.

 

"Christ, how did you even get me to talk in this mess of a post"

"Shut it Maxis just do it"

"Alright....daaaaaaaad >:("

 

Name: Maxis. "The Eye of The Beholder"

"What? expected a nicer name? think of one for me then!"

 

Gender: ???

"I like to think im a male...but at this point im too afraid to ask my creator."

 

Race: Posessed armor

Race abilities: Being a spirit inhabiting an armor, Maxis's physiology is rather different, he can be broken, torn apart as many times as one would like, with each time taking longer for him to recombine and rebuild himself, for one to trully kill him they need to exorcise his soul out of the armor and destroy the seal that binds him to it. Being a metal suit of armor also allows him to perform feats normal "Fleshies" wouldn't, like jumping off cliffs to escape, jumping off waterfalls, throwing himself in front of a oncoming train or something of the sort to escape.

 

"Oh but what is a vessel without a catalyst and a physical body? Human flesh is weak, it is unreliable, but the soul is the part of the being's life that will always remain, and as such, when imbued within an armor...that armor shall never break unless the soul allows it".

"The old rituals of the seekers saw them imbue their very souls into suits of armor, abandoning their physical bodies and adopting a new form, for everlasting life...whether it is a worthy price...is yet to be proven".

"Enjoy the lore, chumps"

 

Age: Literally ancient, he doesn't even remember how old he is, he only knows he has seen the fall of many kingdoms in his years in the overworld

"I've seen some shit, I dunno how old I am. But every time I wake up every now and again I am surrounded by cobwebs'n shit...sometimes on a merchant's stock, hell I've woken up on the bottom of a lake once."

 

Appearance:

 

"Im firetrucking beautiful"

 

Magic:

 

Gaze of The Beholder: The eye drawing in the chest of his armor is a mark of the power he was imbued before he was bound to the armor. This allow Maxis to toy with  anyone in his vicinity with both deadly illusions and harmless ones in the form of pranks or just nasty visions. One person may see him, other may not think they can see him at all. To all of those weak minded in particular, the stronger the mind, the harder it is to cause tricks to them. 

 

Should an opponent be naturally weak to magic and be weak of mind, Maxis has almost full control over what they see,hear and feel even. Cue hilarious interrogations issued by him.

 

This magic also steps into summoning magic, as he can summon weapons, gadgets and all sorts of things from his imagination into the world and use them as a real, touchable thing. Called "Bound items"they are permanent in his hands, and to those who can control the magic they contain, can obtain them, and they fetch an astoundingly good price in the markets, for a bound item, is indestructible and if a sword, is always sharp.

 

"In order to truly be one with illusion, one must sacrifice their body and soul to the beholder, give up the flesh, and manipulate all around you with what they want, or don't want to see." 

 

Grasp of The Beholder: Highly advanced shadow magic, different from pure 'darkness' in a sense, but very similar, can do almost anything regular darkness can do, but this particular kind works specially well with illusion magic, he can make spells out of shadow, like a shadowy blast or even a shadowy flame that can burn, it is a very maleable form of magic...granted to him ages long past.

 

"And oh, seeker of the beholder, give your shadow up to our gracious lord, and be granted free reign over all others, even if there is light all around you, ye shall wield the power opposite of it at all times"

"If you didn't get from the lore I just told ya it makes it so that I don't have a shadow too...but I still have a reflection in the mirror, im an armor, not a fanged pale, sparkly in the light kinda creature"

 

 

Weapons: "A whole arsenal of summoned weapons and stuff...though my mostly used ones are sword,bows,explosives, throwing knives, grappling hooks, shadowy claws, which are awesome by the way, to just ripping out my suit's arm and beating someone with it...what? its fun to do."

 

Personality: Lovable asshole, joker sort, Maxis loves to joke, criticize and generally just annoy everyone around him, he cares not for formalities, nor does he care for respect and being respected, he does what he wants, when he wants, often prone to mood swings on occasion.

 

Maxis may seem carefree, jolly and friendly at first, but behind all this is an unhinged killer who would rip out his own arm and beat you to death with it...not like hasn't already done that in the past, because he has. Maxis is not one to follow orders, but if the person is a particularly powerful summoner or cleric, he might not have a choice at all if his life depends on it.

 

"I am also prone to breaking the fourth wall on occasion, thats right Vaude,Unversed, Mystics and everyone else, even behind your monitors or phones. you're not safe from me! Welll...technically you are safe, but whatever."

 

Biography: 

 

An ancient civilization's ritual? an old civilizations's customs or maybe a shadowy cult of sorts, Maxis has many stories he tells people, why? because he doesn't remember too well, its been thousands of years.

 

WHat is known however is that there is a urban myth in the overworld that

"When great conflict rises, The Beholder awakens, and so does his vessel...a shadowy armor, capable of bending the minds of all. His purpose? unknown, he awakens to cause hell to all sides of the conflict, appearing at random, when no one expects it, to taunt, annoy and even kill. He has killed leaders who posed as the biggest threats to our land, and maybe saved us all...but no one knows the truth, but one thing is true, when  there is conflict, a war, anything that threatens our world, he will reappear...and fight, whether his cause his just or not is unknown. The only thing for sure is that when the conflict ends...he vanishes, only to be seen again in the next".

 

"I also have a tendency to enjoy the company of animals and puppies...im a softie, yeah."

 

 

 

Theme:

 

Regular theme:

 

 

 

 

Serious, pissed off theme:

 

 

When you mentioned fine I started to become a bit suspicious.   Overall I'll accept Maxis, with a few exceptions.

 

His powers, frankly, are incredible, making him a rather invincible foe with so much at his disposal.  I will accept that he can't fully be killed unless his soul is removed, but he must have a weakness/breaking point in battle where he is too damaged to continue fighting, or else it wouldn't be fair to other players.  I would also like to regulate his Gaze of the Beholder and limit it to how much he can control his opponent's visions.  I think if he can create some illusions that would be fine, but not full control of what his opponent sees and with such strength.  That would be a bit OP, so a few illusions/visions are fine, but exercising limitations on these would be optimal.  (He can fully control NPCs, if you'd like; I'm just concerned about other characters and the fairness issue).

 

If all sounds good above, Maxis is accepted!  I also have an idea for him, one which I hope you would accept: could Maxis be Queen Shiva's right-hand man, her personal guard and most powerful asset?  I think it would be very interesting and fit well, but I understand if you have other ideas for him.  It was just a thought I wanted to throw out there.

 

 

Everyone get ready for Phase 2 later today!

[Scrapmaster 1,731]

Alright then

 

Maxis will not flat out control other players, and illusions aren't guaranteed to work on most of them.

 

And I like that idea, sure thing! Maxis will awaken to serve the queen in this upcoming battle.

Or you think she holds the keys to awakening him? 

 

WOuld be cool if she awakened him herself, we could add in the lore that she was always the one who awakened him in the past wars

Edited August 14, 2016 by Scrapmaster

[Mystics Apprentice 2,397]

Alright then

 

Maxis will not flat out control other players, and illusions aren't guaranteed to work on most of them.

 

And I like that idea, sure thing! Maxis will awaken to serve the queen in this upcoming battle.

Or you think she holds the keys to awakening him? 

 

WOuld be cool if she awakened him herself, we could add in the lore that she was always the one who awakened him in the past wars

Sounds awesome; thanks!  Also, I really like the concept of Shiva awakening him.  I saw your PM but haven't gotten the chance to fully read it and allow it to sink in, as I'm getting ready to head out soon, but I'll reply soon and I *think* it looks awesome from what I could tell.   Thanks for the suggestions!

[Sora's Baby 729]

So how does teleports work,runes,stones,souls? I'm thinking that it's Aqua's main watt to travel.

[Elrandir 783]

So how does teleports work,runes,stones,souls? I'm thinking that it's Aqua's main watt to travel.

I think it depends on the caster.

Take Rabiyu as an example. She can use space manipulation to warp herself (but not long distances.) or with special runes she made in her travels.

[Sora's Baby 729]

Okay,then I'll have Aqua use stones. Thanks.

[The Unversed 168]

Yes it is!

 

Woulkd you think he'd be a priority target by Midneah's punishers? Probably a good target, since he'd probably have eluded them for mileniums

 

Haha I can make him a target if ya want? but are you sure about that idea? the punishers are tough fights. (which I can't wait for haha )

 

So far the punishers have 4 targets that are characters that they wish to kill & have 3-4 targeted areas that they wish to either destroy or conquer too. I wonder who/what they could be? haha  

[Endless Thundaga 533]

I thought of a new character that will help us understand why Jynn has no wings.

 

Name: Bherna Lao

 

Gender: Female

 

Race: Fey

 

Age: 50, but appears to be 8

 

Appearance: She is rather short for her age, standing only 3'7". She often wears a light blue dress with short sleeves. Black hair and blue eyes.

 

Magic: She interestingly has the power to command electricity as well, but she fears her powers after she accidentally fried Jynn's wings during a training exercise to control her powers. Since then, she has learned to keep her powers at bay. Since she is still young, she can only fire electric projectiles.

 

Weapons: N/A

 

Personality: Outgoing, kind, happy, carefree

 

Biography: A young Fey who was born in Mystras and was neglected by her original family. When she was only 10 (or 5 in appearance), she was abandoned by her family due to the fact that she could not learn to control her powers as fast as most Feys. One day, Jynn found her all alone and lost, and he decided to give her shelter and have her as an adopted daughter. Since then, Jynn has been training her in a much more even pace than her parents ever did, and she is learning fast. Currently, she lives with Jynn in a large house located inside a mountain outside of Mystras. She is able to care for herself just fine whenever Jynn has to go on a mission. Sometimes she stays with Queen Shiva when Jynn is on more longer and perilous missions.

[Endless Thundaga 533]

Is it alright if I ask that all the characters that are joining Jynn's mission to wait until I post first? Because I need Mystic's approval of my new character.

[Mystics Apprentice 2,397]

Okay, it was a little late than I had planned, but I initiated the timeskip.  I have posted a fresh post here with new scenarios for everyone: http://kh13.com/forum/topic/98798-overworld-rp/?p=1856146

 

I'm sorry for the abundant posts from everyone over the past couple of days, and I hope no one fell too far behind!  If it helps any most of those posts were for character development and didn't really affect the plot, so if you are behind and don't wish to read everything you could probably make do with reading the latest post and find a good place to get started again.  If you want to finish scenarios you are welcome to post flashbacks where we left off from the night prior in spoiler tabs.  Thanks!

I thought of a new character that will help us understand why Jynn has no wings.

Name: Bherna Lao

Gender: Female

Race: Fey

Age: 50, but appears to be 8

Appearance: She is rather short for her age, standing only 3'7". She often wears a light blue dress with short sleeves. Black hair and blue eyes.

Magic: She interestingly has the power to command electricity as well, but she fears her powers after she accidentally fried Jynn's wings during a training exercise to control her powers. Since then, she has learned to keep her powers at bay. Since she is still young, she can only fire electric projectiles.

Weapons: N/A

Personality: Outgoing, kind, happy, carefree

Biography: A young Fey who was born in Mystras and was neglected by her original family. When she was only 10 (or 5 in appearance), she was abandoned by her family due to the fact that she could not learn to control her powers as fast as most Feys. One day, Jynn found her all alone and lost, and he decided to give her shelter and have her as an adopted daughter. Since then, Jynn has been training her in a much more even pace than her parents ever did, and she is learning fast. Currently, she lives with Jynn in a large house located inside a mountain outside of Mystras. She is able to care for herself just fine whenever Jynn has to go on a mission. Sometimes she stays with Queen Shiva when Jynn is on more longer and perilous missions.

Accepted!

[Mystics Apprentice 2,397]

 

Sorry to be a bother, but I think you may have to edit your post.  A slight timeskip to the next day occurred as of yesterday and everyone has progressed slightly in the plot.  Jynn's group has arrived in the mountains bordering Mystras, but I have a scenario planned out for them already (see post below that I quoted).  This is the current series of events, but I have a few potential solutions so that your post won't be entirely in vain and still could've happened.

 

1) it could be a flashback.  On their way into Mystras they could've stopped at Jynn's home before proceeding further into the mountains, so you could put your post into a spoiler tab and indicate that it was a flashback moment before arriving to the ogre attack.

 

2) I could change the scenario slightly so that they are all staying in Jynn's home, but that would pose problems because it would mean that ogres are attacking his home.  It depends on what your preference is there, really, but I wouldn't mind editing my post to reflect this, though it still would mean that Jynn's most recent post would be a flashback moment.

 

3) They could be heading to Jynn's home but they haven't arrived yet, so you could save the post you wrote for a later time after the ogre attack.

 

Let me know what works best for you.

 

It is now time for phase two, where we will be leaping ahead to the following morning upon the voyage to the Overworld.  For those who have fallen behind you should be able to determine your objectives by reading this post.  Also, if you wish to continue any conversations or character development prior to the timeskip you are welcome to do so in spoiler tabs with an indicator that it is a flashback scene.

 

In the world above Jynn's group of fey arrived to their destination.  The mountains soared high into the clouds, their peaks coated in a blanket of white snow.  This continent belonging to Queen Shiva made it no surprise to find snow wherever it were possible.  Upon their arrival they had decided to set up camp, the fey alternating who would remain on guard.  Presently it was Erica's turn, and it was not an uneventful watch indeed.

 

Shapes could be visualized from the outskirts of the mountains surrounding them.  It was possible that they were merely shadows, though anything in the Overworld could take the form of many things, many of which were threatening.  Soon Erica would smell the rancid breath of something awful, before turning to find an Ogre standing beside her, its club raised and prepared to strike.  This Ogre was hideous, with sickly green skin and rotting teeth.  The abomination was not alone, either.  In close pursuit eight others arrived, prepared to destroy the group in one fell swoop.

 

When battling these menaces remember that they are huge, perhaps twelve-feet tall, and each has a very devastating club and a few spells at their disposal.  Your objective is to fight them, but what strategy will you use?

 

Inside of the security of the tent, Elia still remained asleep, her eyes securely closed as she dreamt about something that put a silly smile on her face.  The raven-haired mage was completely oblivious to the sounds of the approaching Ogres, and did not even realize that they were in any form of danger.

 

Back outside, however, Erica was fully surrounded by these creatures.  The one looming over her in a threatening manner was preparing to strike her with its club, until a white blinding light surrounded it.  The Ogre cried out in pain wildly, its shrieks echoing off the mountains and probably disrupting all of the fey asleep inside.  A short distance away the figure of a person loomed into view, his robes whipping in the wind as he narrowed his eyes at the other Ogres stomping toward the camp.  "We cannot take them alone," Yevgeni murmured, darting over to Erica's side. "Quickly!  We must gather the others to our aid!"

 

 

Everyone who was following Jynn landed on a tall mountain near Mystras. Inside, Jynn welcomed everyone inside his large home. As nighttime arrived, everyone found rooms to sleep in. Jynn, exhausted, planned to let his mother know the group arrived safely in the morning.

 

Jynn Venas and Bherna Lao - Moutains near Mystras

 

It's morning, and Jynn has just gotten out of bed. Quietly, he takes a stroll outside, notifying the two guards patrolling the front door. As he takes his stroll, he gazes upon the city of Mystras. His home was in the mountains on the edge of the main world, in between Mystras and the Forbidden Shrine. Flying over or climbing the mountain was the only safe passage to get to the Forbidden Shrine fro Mystras, even though it is forbidden for anyone to go. Jynn then closes his eyes and begins to use telepathy in an attempt to notify his mother that the group has arrived safely. "Me and the group have arrived at the mountains outside of Mystras. We will be keeping an eye out for the troublemakers." As he ends his telepathy, he suddenly, hears footsteps running towards him. "Dad!" He turns to see his daughter, Bherna. "Hey Bherna!" He kneels and opens his arms to give Bherna a hug. "Sorry that I could not say hello last night. We have a few visitors." Bherna smiles. "It's okay." Jynn rises back on his feet. "Do you want to help me make some fondue for everyone?" Bherna jumps in excitement, making food, especially fondue, was one of her favorite things to do when Jynn is home. "Yes, let's go!" She then pulls on his arm and runs inside the house. Once they reach the kitchen, they both begin cooking.

[Sora's Baby 729]

Sorry to be a bother, but I think you may have to edit your post.  A slight timeskip to the next day occurred as of yesterday and everyone has progressed slightly in the plot.  Jynn's group has arrived in the mountains bordering Mystras, but I have a scenario planned out for them already (see post below that I quoted).  This is the current series of events, but I have a few potential solutions so that your post won't be entirely in vain and still could've happened.

 

1) it could be a flashback.  On their way into Mystras they could've stopped at Jynn's home before proceeding further into the mountains, so you could put your post into a spoiler tab and indicate that it was a flashback moment before arriving to the ogre attack.

 

2) I could change the scenario slightly so that they are all staying in Jynn's home, but that would pose problems because it would mean that ogres are attacking his home.  It depends on what your preference is there, really, but I wouldn't mind editing my post to reflect this, though it still would mean that Jynn's most recent post would be a flashback moment.

 

3) They could be heading to Jynn's home but they haven't arrived yet, so you could save the post you wrote for a later time after the ogre attack.

 

Let me know what works best for you.

Okay I'm not ready for this. Meaning that posting off my computer isn't fun,so I'll wait in till the 18th to post and I'll just come up with a in universe reason to keep her busy. Sorry but I don't think my short posts are very far and besides that I can't do much to progress the story,or my character without longer posts.

[Vaude 536]

Insert your character when you have the time and your computer.  We'll find ways of fending off ogres in the meantime.

 

Now, to think up some ways for the R gang (and Jari, if he survives) to continue.

[Endless Thundaga 533]

Sorry to be a bother, but I think you may have to edit your post.  A slight timeskip to the next day occurred as of yesterday and everyone has progressed slightly in the plot.  Jynn's group has arrived in the mountains bordering Mystras, but I have a scenario planned out for them already (see post below that I quoted).  This is the current series of events, but I have a few potential solutions so that your post won't be entirely in vain and still could've happened.

 

1) it could be a flashback.  On their way into Mystras they could've stopped at Jynn's home before proceeding further into the mountains, so you could put your post into a spoiler tab and indicate that it was a flashback moment before arriving to the ogre attack.

 

2) I could change the scenario slightly so that they are all staying in Jynn's home, but that would pose problems because it would mean that ogres are attacking his home.  It depends on what your preference is there, really, but I wouldn't mind editing my post to reflect this, though it still would mean that Jynn's most recent post would be a flashback moment.

 

3) They could be heading to Jynn's home but they haven't arrived yet, so you could save the post you wrote for a later time after the ogre attack.

 

Let me know what works best for you.

Option 3 sounds good. Sorry for the misunderstanding.

I have remade my post, and it is up.

[Mystics Apprentice 2,397]

Okay I'm not ready for this. Meaning that posting off my computer isn't fun,so I'll wait in till the 18th to post and I'll just come up with a in universe reason to keep her busy. Sorry but I don't think my short posts are very far and besides that I can't do much to progress the story,or my character without longer posts.

Oh, that should be just fine!  It's the 16th now, so we can definitely go a bit before you respond.  At this rate I might not even get a post up until then.

 

Option 3 sounds good. Sorry for the misunderstanding.

I have remade my post, and it is up.

Awesome; thanks!  Sorry for the trouble, but I appreciate the changes. : )

[Endless Thundaga 533]

Oh, that should be just fine!  It's the 16th now, so we can definitely go a bit before you respond.  At this rate I might not even get a post up until then.

 

 

Awesome; thanks!  Sorry for the trouble, but I appreciate the changes. : )

No probs. I just need to pay better attention next time.

[The Unversed 168]

I thought of a new character that will help us understand why Jynn has no wings.

 

Name: Bherna Lao

 

Gender: Female

 

Race: Fey

 

Age: 50, but appears to be 8

 

Appearance: She is rather short for her age, standing only 3'7". She often wears a light blue dress with short sleeves. Black hair and blue eyes.

 

Magic: She interestingly has the power to command electricity as well, but she fears her powers after she accidentally fried Jynn's wings during a training exercise to control her powers. Since then, she has learned to keep her powers at bay. Since she is still young, she can only fire electric projectiles.

 

Weapons: N/A

 

Personality: Outgoing, kind, happy, carefree

 

Biography: A young Fey who was born in Mystras and was neglected by her original family. When she was only 10 (or 5 in appearance), she was abandoned by her family due to the fact that she could not learn to control her powers as fast as most Feys. One day, Jynn found her all alone and lost, and he decided to give her shelter and have her as an adopted daughter. Since then, Jynn has been training her in a much more even pace than her parents ever did, and she is learning fast. Currently, she lives with Jynn in a large house located inside a mountain outside of Mystras. She is able to care for herself just fine whenever Jynn has to go on a mission. Sometimes she stays with Queen Shiva when Jynn is on more longer and perilous missions.

 

This is nice to know info man! I always like learning more about each character

like how I found out Visco's mother's name is Elysia & that she died to a plague.

I even decided to reveal Effie's last name is Becker haha   

[Scrapmaster 1,731]

hard at work making the Henry and the Aeternum's rescue post.

 

I'l have it up sometime later today.

[Sora's Baby 729]

Oh, that should be just fine!  It's the 16th now, so we can definitely go a bit before you respond.  At this rate I might not even get a post up until then.

 

 

Awesome; thanks!  Sorry for the trouble, but I appreciate the changes. : )

The 19th. Sorry guys it should be up by 4pm on the 19th.

[Lady Aleister 1,677]

I've been slaving over school-- will post momentarily. 

[The Unversed 168]

(I got writers block and so this is mainly some of how Aqua thinks and her morals on killing. Also she has never had to fight aside from training spars so she'll be really nervous and weak for now.  So expect for her to have a lot of character and power growth lol)

 

WOW! No way Sora's baby! that's crazy cause I was planning on having Visco be the same what with her being kept safe from any fighting by her father, that is until Effie was hired as her personal guard. Also Visco's morals on killing aren't as friendly as Aqua's thanks to Effie's teachings haha  I guess in the Overworld Visco would be Aqua & in the World below Aqua would be Visco haha

Edited August 21, 2016 by The Unversed