RikuFangirl2008 1,368 Posted June 16, 2015 (edited) As I look at this pool of life. Many of them jumps in. Happily. Forcefully. One by one, they all jump in. As I stand alone, looking at this pool of life. Being smothered in fear, from the depth of my heart. Overflowing thoughts fills my head. Consuming myself with probability. When stepping in, what is to become of me? Will I forever drown in this potential despair, with weights on my shoulders? Will I STILL be me? Many eyes stares at me, as they stand in this pool of life. Soaked and wet from the experiences they faced. Wondering why I haven't jumped in. Wondering why I'm standing all alone. Still dry. So many voices I hear. So many questions from their thoughts. My fears being fed by all of this mental commotions. For I haven't jumped in yet. Life is like a swimming pool. At birth and childhood, it's not visible. When growing up, it slowly appears. For at adulthood, it's there. Waiting. Forever waiting. There is no turning back. Edited June 16, 2015 by RikuFangirl2008 4 Forever, catmaster0116, Yuya Sakaki and 1 other reacted to this Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Forever 3,550 Posted June 16, 2015 Beautiful~ 1 RikuFangirl2008 reacted to this Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
RikuFangirl2008 1,368 Posted June 16, 2015 Beautiful~ Thanks. 1 Forever reacted to this Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Yuya Sakaki 5,212 Posted June 16, 2015 That's... Very deep. /shot Peace! 1 RikuFangirl2008 reacted to this Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Forever 3,550 Posted June 16, 2015 Thanks. You're welcome! 1 RikuFangirl2008 reacted to this Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
RikuFangirl2008 1,368 Posted June 16, 2015 That's... Very deep. /shotPeace! Thanks. I should've added in there that it's going to be deep. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
catmaster0116 2,676 Posted June 16, 2015 The water, like life, is alive the moment you dive in it will immediately bare its fangs against you... - Quote by Nanase Haruka, from FREE! 1 RikuFangirl2008 reacted to this Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
RikuFangirl2008 1,368 Posted June 16, 2015 The water, like life, is alive the moment you dive in it will immediately bare its fangs against you... - Quote by Nanase Haruka, from FREE! Interesting quote! Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Philip Ellwell 5,487 Posted June 16, 2015 Mmm..i dunno... it gives me a sinking feeling. It was well written, not at all soggy or watered down. You really dived into the prose. Bad puns are bad Seriously, it was good. 1 RikuFangirl2008 reacted to this Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
RikuFangirl2008 1,368 Posted July 9, 2015 Mmm..i dunno... it gives me a sinking feeling. It was well written, not at all soggy or watered down. You really dived into the prose. Bad puns are bad Seriously, it was good. Thanks. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Philip Ellwell 5,487 Posted July 10, 2015 Thanks. Welcome Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites