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Silvia Kuroi

Text Friendship--(Giveaway Fan-fiction)

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Very nice piece! I really enjoyed the connections you made with other elements of the series (Winner stick, Isa and Lea's friendship).

 

"kiss already or sit down"

 

^ I really loved this line because I support RokuShi very much. xD And it suits Axel's character.

 

I have one minor complaint though... it's nothing major, it's just personal. Usually when stories are written under the influence of a certain prompt or theme, like friendship, I like it best not to use the actual word in the story, this case being the theme of "friendship." It's a subtlety thing :P

 

P.S The theme really set the appropriate atmosphere, so props to you on that! :)

 

Peace!

Edited by CaelumMare

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