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love it! and a response book? (poem?)

yyessss! Poem! Just to have a fun game and maybe someone will write a response to yours

 

I hope its not based on real life :O

 

It actually is. The first two are about an argument that happened in my house, but it was awhile ago, like months. i remembered what happened and wrote a poem about it. the rest is me just being emo and the end is about me giving in.

 

"Can i say i really wish the world was silent?" is close to 'Can i say i really want to shut the world out?"

 

And the last all rights, are me saying yes

 

Yeah, just me being dramatic in poetic style

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yyessss! Poem! Just to have a fun game and maybe someone will write a response to yours

 

 

It actually is. The first two are about an argument that happened in my house, but it was awhile ago, like months. i remembered what happened and wrote a poem about it. the rest is me just being emo and the end is about me giving in.

 

"Can i say i really wish the world was silent?" is close to 'Can i say i really want to shut the world out?"

 

And the last all rights, are me saying yes

 

Yeah, just me being dramatic in poetic style

*hugs* 

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you want me to write a poem? okaayyy here goes nothing....

ummmm......

 

 

seasons come and go

 

spring came

and you waltzed through my life.

You danced with me until you could dance no more

 

Summer came

we fell more in love

days grew longer and the kisses sweeter

 

fall came with a brush of cold breath

distance started to grow between us

and the miles seemed to stretch on in-between

 

winter came and our love was cold

you became as the snow

and I became like the sky- gray with sadness

 

seasons come and go

I cant go one without thinking of you

you and your smiling face

 

seasons come and go

change happens in a dizzy cycle

however, I must move on to a new happiness

 

 

theres my miserable attempt at a poem that just came from the top of my head xD

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you want me to write a poem? okaayyy here goes nothing....

ummmm......

 

 

seasons come and go

 

spring came

and you waltzed through my life.

You danced with me until you could dance no more

 

Summer came

we fell more in love

days grew longer and the kisses sweeter

 

fall came with a brush of cold breath

distance started to grow between us

and the miles seemed to stretch on in-between

 

winter came and our love was cold

you became as the snow

and I became like the sky- gray with sadness

 

seasons come and go

I cant go one without thinking of you

you and your smiling face

 

seasons come and go

change happens in a dizzy cycle

however, I must move on to a new happiness

 

 

theres my miserable attempt at a poem that just came from the top of my head xD

Awwwww i like it!

Its so sweet, and then so sad.

Actually, its really sad...

And then the ends good again!

 

Now someone needs to get in and answer it with another poem!

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Awwwww i like it!

Its so sweet, and then so sad.

Actually, its really sad...

And then the ends good again!

 

Now someone needs to get in and answer it with another poem!

Let's see how well I can polish off my rust.

 

A fool I was.

The brilliant glass that held my rules.

For promise of love, I shattered it.

Not caring I laid bare my body.

The cuts formed as the shards kissed my body.

I forgotten why the tablet was there hanging above my head.

Made of glass so I would not break it.

I lost my love because of neglect.

All I am left with are mistakes and wounds.

Cared for by no body.

 

Something fast I whipped up.

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I have no name

I have no memories

I have no one

who am I?

 

What are these weird feeling I get?

What does everything I seem to do seem familiar,

but also so foreign?

 

They tell me im a nobody.

they say we have no heart

they say we cant feel.

 

what is a nobody?

what is a heart?

What are these weird thoughts ive been having?

 

Who am I?

Who is this shell, this puppet of a girl in front of you?

Who is Xion?

Edited by Amber Cole

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