I'm thinking of making my own version of Kingdom Hearts Birth by Sleep, it's exactly like the original one, but with some new characters, along with an additional 4th pupil, and a new enemy. The amount of chapters are to be determined. I plan on making a sequel which is my version of Kingdom Hearts III, with some characters, well, some are based on some Metroid characters, but I don't want to spoil that. You can also submit ideas to me in pm, like for instance new characters.
Anywho, here is the summary of my story, and as it's chapter 1. (The whole story will be placed in another thread.):
"Four friends, four destinies.
Everything will link back to the beginning."
On a world an island, with trees carrying paopu fruit, there is a sunset currently going on. A young man, slowly makes his way to the shores, and stands there, looking on at the sunset. He looked like a man with tanned skin, with semi long silver hair neck down, wearing a sleeveless shirt, black pants, and black boots. His back is turned to face the sunset.
???: This world......Is just too small......
The man after that, kept looking on, and on, wondering if he will ever see the outside world.
Many years have passed, as the same man from before, now an old man, and he is now seen wearing a black coat of sort. He stand in the exact spot when he was a young man, and then he makes his way to one of the trees on a small part of the island, he is seen carrying a white cloth of sort, with something inside it. He places the sack on the tree that was nearly knocked down. The man looks upon the white cloth while folding his arms behind his back.
???: There....You see? A world....Like a prison.....I'm sure, that you'll think of it as home.....
(End theme here.)
The face of a blond haired boy is seen within the cloth, with glazed blue eyes, as the wind blew past he slowly closed his eyes.
Then all of a sudden, blackness was shown, the boy was falling through it, like as if he was drowning.
???: Hey, where am I?
The boy heard this voice, despite him being knocked out, and he is seen slowly falling in the Darkness.
???: Who's there?
(Play this theme.)
The white cloth surrounding the boy then vanished as he kept falling towards a white, almost broken platform, The boy slowly landed on his feet with no problems, he was then looking around for the sound of the voice.
???: I'm a brand new heart.
The boy is confused as he kept looking around slowly if the person that was talking to him was with him or not.
???: But this is......Why are you in my heart?
The boy waited for the voice to answer his question, he began waiting for the voice to answer him.
???: The Light brought me.....I saw it shining in the distance......And followed it here...
The boy is still a little confused, but believes how now has his answer, and places his hand over his chest, with one of his hands.
???: Yeah. That was my Light....
The boy then looks upon the platform, with a sad look on his face looking at the fractured platform.
???: But my heart was fractured.....And now.....The little I have left is slipping away.....
The silence begins again for a brief moment, as the boy continued to keep his hand on his chest.
???: Then you should join your heart with mine....
The boy looks confused as he heard the voice, saying this to him he still looked upon the fractured platform, with his sad face.
???: Huh?
The platform suddenly shines a white Light, and the fractured spot is filled in fixed, as if nothing ever happened to it.
???: Nothing else will slip away....And one day....You'll be strong enough to win back the part that already did.
The boy raises his head a bit, this time he is as sad when he looked upon the platform.
???: Right. Thanks.
The boy lowered his head, and had closed his eyes as he clenched the hand over his chest into a fist, as blackness is shown again.
(End theme here.)
???: It's time to wake up now. All we need to do now is.....
The boy raises his head, and opened his glazed blue eyes with a stern look on his face.
???: Open the door.
After the boy had said the words, the platform then shows an image of the boy, the color of the platform was now shown to be green, the boy looks around the platform and looks into the black sky. After a short moment of blackness the boy is no longer shown at the platform. Back at the island the man was staring at a different direction, with his arms still folded to his back, and he then walks away from the boy slowly.
(Play theme here.)
The boy slowly raises his hand, and in a flash of Light, a key-shaped weapon appears in it, the man looks back at the boy, and looks on surprised as he sees it.
???: A Keyblade!!!
Apperently he knows about a weapon named the Keyblade, and then a beam of Light was fired into the sky from it, and sparkles were forming in the sky, the man was then seen with a smirk on his face. The boy was watching the sparkles being created, and watched them disappear.
(End theme here.)
(End of Prolouge , I will make a topic where the main story will be posted, I will make one chapter per 2 weeks, so don't go bugging me when the next chapter is out.)
I'm thinking of making my own version of Kingdom Hearts Birth by Sleep, it's exactly like the original one, but with some new characters, along with an additional 4th pupil, and a new enemy. The amount of chapters are to be determined. I plan on making a sequel which is my version of Kingdom Hearts III, with some characters, well, some are based on some Metroid characters, but I don't want to spoil that. You can also submit ideas to me in pm, like for instance new characters.
Anywho, here is the summary of my story, and as it's chapter 1. (The whole story will be placed in another thread.):
Edited by Tom13