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The Secret of The Paopu Fruit RP (Story)


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#1 Sky Heart

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Posted 19 April 2012 - 12:49 PM

This is the story, no sign ups should appear on this.

The link to the sign ups are here: http://kh13.com/foru...sconcept-stage/

At the moment, there is no spot available so the only people posting are the ones with roles.

Make sure to press the FOLLOW TOPIC button on the TOP RIGHT CORNER OF THIS POST.

Anything not part of the story line should be PARENTHESIZED.

READ YOUR CHARACTER DESCRIPTIONS, IT IS IMPORTANT TO THE STORY. DON'T STRAY FROM THEIR BASIC CHARACTERISTICS UNLESS YOU TELL ME.

Characters:

Sky Heart:
Hoshi - Main character of the story. She stubborn, strong-hearted, un-moving, and stubborn. 15. She is royalty. As part of a long line of Keyblade Wielders she is destined to receive hers before she's 16. (Not Masters, keep that in mind. Although all her ancestors have been Keyblade Wielders they have never become Masters.)

Her name is 'Star' in Japanese. Similar to Sora and Ventus. Sky = Wind = Star. (Their names are all things that connect things/people around them.)

Yami - A mysterious person who has strange powers of darkness. He shows up after the 3 protagonists set off on their own journey. He seems different, but comes off as a threat to everyone.

His name is 'Dark' in Japanese. For obvious reasons, he is an antagonist.

Yuffie Kirasagi:
Sekai - She is nice, loving, gentle, and very understanding. Although she may look lost, she is wise beyond her years. 14. She comes from the 'slums' of

Her name is 'World' in Japanese. Similar to Riku and Terra. Land = Earth = World. (All suffer from the pain of Separation.)

Xatah:
Uchuu or Chu (Your Preference) - He is weird, kind, understanding, loyal, and curious. He mysteriously arrives to 'Kingdom of the Sky' the world where Sekai and Hoshi hail from. 15.

His name is 'Space' in Japanese. Similar to Kairi and Aqua. Ocean = Water = Space. (All are the cause of Separation.)

Ven4ever:
Hikari - She is the second antagonist and is sort of the right hand woman to Yami. She practically does what he wishes, but often disappears to god knows where.

Her name is 'Light' in Japanese. Being the physical embodiment of the True Light that was lost when Darkness swallowed it. She has forgotten who she really is.

Yugure - A laid-back Knight of Ascension who always opposes Kage just to make him irritated. He is just as strong as Kage and this infuriates the latter. He is kind, gentle and a comedian to the other Knights.

His name is 'Twilight' in Japanese.

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Kage - The leader of the Knights of Ascension. He is loyal to Yami, but very hot-headed. (He goes rogue later on.)

His name is 'Shadow' in Japanese.

Worlds:(So Far we need 2 more worlds: Either New/Old Disney, Original, or already used worlds.)
1. Kingdom of the Sky - Just like the name says, it is a Kingdom in the Sky, where all it's royalty knows how to wield a Keyblade. Everyone else are either upper class, who live with in the Castle or the Lower Class, who live in the 'slums.' (In honor of the main character of the series: Sora, I thought the name was proper for the story.)
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At the moment we don't have an order on the worlds, but have some down:
- Ancestral River: Pocahontas
- Gleaming Kingdom: Tangled
- The Axiom/The World of Miscellaneous: Wall-E (This will have to involve some sort of time travel to include this story.)
- Toy Chest: Toy Story
- Monstropolis: Monster's Inc
- Paradise Falls: UP
- Scavenger's Hideout/Treasure Planet: Treasure Planet (These are two planets near each other since the story involves looking for Treasure Planet)
- Vibrant Castle (Disney Castle): With Oswald as king. I'm gonna put my own spin on why it's called Disney Castle and how Mickey becomes king. I think you guys will like it.
- City of Skyscrapers/The Ruins: Original World. The middle world of the story and also the ending world after the skyscrapers are destroyed.
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- Isolate Islands (Destiny Islands): Two Islands separated by the water. One island has a town and the other has never been visited before.


Themes of the Story:
- Friendship
- Perseverance
- Romance
- Change
- Misunderstandings

Enemies: (All are the colors of white, light green, yellow, and/or pink. They look harmless, but are a danger.)

Forsaken - Creatures born out of desires that have been rid of or denied. The desires go haywire and form these creatures who yearn to be whole again. They look for other small desires to take from other living things.

>>>>Ascender - Special Forsaken that only appear as 'bosses' to the story. They have the power to take one's ability to grow if they pass through your heart. Most have no feet and look like ghosts. The only way to retrieve the 'ability to grow' is to destroy the one who took it.

>>>>>>>> Knights of Ascension - Are 5 Ascenders that have taken over Human Bodies and Yami and Light. So there are 7. They are all incredibly strong. Two of them are Yugure and Kage.

>>>>Descender - A Higher Class of Forsaken that can temporarily drain strength, magic, etc by slashing you with their weapon. All of these Forsaken have weapons, but they rarely draw them because they lack the capacity to comprehend their powers. Most of their attacks are jumping-based and requires downward movement.

Premise of the Story:
Hoshi is a 15 year old girl. In one month, it will be her birthday, but she has yet to produce any evidence she can wield a Keyblade. She becomes worried and starts to explore her Kingdom trying to find a way to wield a Keyblade. While this is happening, Sekai, a girl of the lower class has been struggling to keep up with her school work and drops out. After the death of her parents, just a year before she decides it's best to take care of her brothers and sisters (No names needed, they will disappear later and that will be her driving force to leave the world). Hoshi meets a boy named Chu. He is a 'foreigner' and is part of the Upper Class. He tells her if she can not produce a Keyblade by her 16th birthday, she will be forced to marry him. She doesn't believe him and runs to her father. Her father, the King confirms this (This will be her driving force to leave, while Chu's driving force is to chase after her to bring her back). Chu informs her that he can wield the Keyblade and shows her himself. She is surprised. He tells her because he can wield the Keyblade it would be perfect for them to marry since they can breed more Keyblade wielders, which came off as disgusting to her. He was only thinking logically.
And so the story begins..


We won't start until everyone confirms their character. Just post your character name and type 'no complaints' if you're ready. Also I'm assuming you read everything on this. It's crucial you do.

Keep in mind:

- Explain the origin of the Paopu Fruit.
- What exactly does it do.
- How it became well-known enough for Aqua to know about it.
- Why it matters to the story of Kingdom Hearts.
- How Destiny Islands got it's name.
(If you think there should be more just tell me.)

Edited by Sky Heart, 19 April 2012 - 07:30 PM.


#2 Sky Heart

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Posted 19 April 2012 - 01:18 PM

Updated Rules:
- No god-modding.
- Romance to a minimum. (Keep it PG13 and under and we can talk about who will have a romantic story line.)
- Cursing to a minimum. Only use the words: Damn, Shit, and Ass every post or so if you have to.
- No controlling anyone else's character unless I or the person using it allows you to.
- Make sure your post contributes to the story line and isn't just random.
- Post at least once a day. Try to at least.
- If you haven't posted for a week without an excuse, your character will be given away.
- Use full sentences when describing things and try to use proper grammar and punctuation.
- I'm limiting each post to have 8 lines at most (Usually, 2-4 lines will do). This will keep the story moving and prevent people from controlling the flow of the story.
- Each quote is a line.
- He said/she said doesn't count as a line.
- Have fun. All :]

Example of how you should write:

1st line: "Why are you doing this? What do you have to gain?" she asked. (After the quote, if you aren't going to quote again, enter to the next line like this.)
2nd line: She ran from the mysterious figure, scared out of her mind. 3rd line: She turned three left corners only to end up seeing him again. (Enter to type another quote.)
4th line: "Why are you following me? Stop!" she yelled at him.

You don't need to label the lines, they are there for guidelines.

Edited by Sky Heart, 19 April 2012 - 10:34 PM.


#3 KingdomKatherine

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Posted 19 April 2012 - 02:08 PM

I like the Pocahontas world name.

#4 Lt.Random

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Posted 19 April 2012 - 03:45 PM

weird, kind , curious? it's like you know who i am =O

as for the enemies i think we should try a different one, or atleast change their names and add a few more details

Edited by Xatah, 19 April 2012 - 03:46 PM.


#5 Sky Heart

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Posted 19 April 2012 - 03:46 PM

weird, kind , curious? it's like you know who i am =O

as for the enemies i think we should try a different one, or atleast change their names and add a few more details


what do you have in mind? Go ahead and hit me with your ideas aha.

Edited by Sky Heart, 19 April 2012 - 03:56 PM.


#6 Ven4ever

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Posted 19 April 2012 - 04:15 PM

Hikari

'no complaints'

( This is an amazing rp! It's so detailed I can't wait!)

#7 Sky Heart

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Posted 19 April 2012 - 04:35 PM

Time People are on:

Me: (PST)
2:00 PM to 12:00 AM Weekdays
8:00 AM until I feel sleepy Weekends

Edited by Sky Heart, 19 April 2012 - 04:46 PM.


#8 Ven4ever

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Posted 19 April 2012 - 04:48 PM

I'm PST too

Weekdays: 2:15 P.M to 12:00 A.M
Weekends: Around 10 A.M. to 12:00 A.M.
I might be off on the weekends for a cat nap ^^

#9 Yuffie Kisaragi

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Posted 19 April 2012 - 10:17 PM

PST is Pacific in America right? If so, than that is what I am as well
Weekdays: 5:30 to 11:00 Pm
Weekends: Normally, all day I might be having camping or other such things
Yeah, I'm Sekai

Edited by Yuffie Kisaragi, 19 April 2012 - 10:17 PM.


#10 Sky Heart

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Posted 19 April 2012 - 10:20 PM

Ahh okay. You, Xatah and Me need to be on at the same time for the main characters to progress, but are you ready right now? I think we can start.

PST is Pacific in America right? If so, than that is what I am as well
Weekdays: 5:30 to 11:00 Pm
Weekends: Normally, all day I might be having camping or other such things
Yeah, I'm Sekai


wait which east coast, or west coast?

#11 Yuffie Kisaragi

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Posted 19 April 2012 - 10:21 PM

No, I'm taking a temporary break from HW. Also, isn't 8 lines a little high? i guess I don't type using the enter key, so it is just a wall of text, and that is a problem. West Coast.

Edited by Yuffie Kisaragi, 19 April 2012 - 10:25 PM.


#12 Sky Heart

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Posted 19 April 2012 - 10:26 PM

No, I'm taking a temporary break from HW. Also, isn't 8 lines a little high? i guess I don't type using the enter key, so it is just a wall of text, and that is a problem. West Coast.


8 lines at most? o-o As in you can do anything less you think 6 lines will do?

#13 Yuffie Kisaragi

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Posted 19 April 2012 - 10:29 PM

Oh, 8 at most. Okay, I can definitely do that.

Edited by Yuffie Kisaragi, 19 April 2012 - 10:30 PM.


#14 Sky Heart

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Posted 19 April 2012 - 10:54 PM

(Kk I'm going to start. Yuffie and Xatah as Sekai and Uchuu/Chu respectively, are the only ones posting for now.)

Hoshi stormed off after Uchuu's ridiculous comment. She refused to call him by his nickname Chu, because it was a term of endearment and he was not dear to her at all.
"Who does that guy think he is? Ugh.." she asked.
She marched out of the Castle Gates and down the street. She headed for the 'slums' of the city where all the Lower Class people were.

Edited by Sky Heart, 19 April 2012 - 10:55 PM.


#15 Yuffie Kisaragi

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Posted 19 April 2012 - 11:38 PM

Sekai sat on top of her roof fiddling with her knife. She was taking a "break" from her schoolwork. It was tiring work, trying to do it while keeping her brothers and sisters distracted long enough to finish it. "I probably won't finish it. Again." Sekai sighed. For a while now this had been happening. She wouldn't finish her homework, or schoolwork for that matter, and her teachers would give her no credit. Straight Fs for the third quarter in a row. It wasn't like Mom and Dad cared about her or her siblings. Being the oldest, it was her responsibility, she felt, to give them the love that Mom and Dad refused to give. She looked down onto the streets and saw a noble walking through. Sekai slid down the roof landing in an alley beside her house. She went over to the corner and leaned against the wall.
"Hey, what's a noble like you doing in a place like here?" Sekai said cheerfully after the noble had walked a little ways past her.

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Posted 20 April 2012 - 12:09 AM

Hoshi looked at the girl barking at her. "Huh?" she said.
She was lost in her thoughts. She saw the girl holding a dagger and thought of something for her to do.
"Hey, are you from around here?" she didn't let the girl answer. "Well anyway, are you good with that?" she pointed to her dagger.

Edited by Sky Heart, 20 April 2012 - 12:11 AM.


#17 Yuffie Kisaragi

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Posted 20 April 2012 - 12:22 AM

"If you call winning first in every monthly tournament, then yeah." Sekai smiled.
"Why?" She added

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Posted 20 April 2012 - 12:27 AM

"Well, as you guessed, I'm a noble!..." she answered. "And not just a noble, I'm Hoshi [Insert Last Name Here], heir to the throne."
She was standing up right and becoming full of herself.
"I need you to help me train! So how about it?"
She completely left out her one month time limit to acquire a Keyblade. She thought if the girl knew, she would just laugh at her.

(If you guys have any ideas for her last name just PM me.)

#19 Yuffie Kisaragi

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Posted 20 April 2012 - 12:59 AM

"Haven't gotten your keyblade yet eh?" Sekai continued grinning. "I'll help ya, but I need to know what's in it for me."

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Posted 20 April 2012 - 01:01 AM

Dang. She thought. Oh well, there's no hiding it now.
"What do you need?" she asked desperately.