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[replika13]

CHAPTER TWELVE


SIXTH TEST


Gake saw huge buildings around him. Lights of different colors shined from everywhere. He saw an red moon shining down on that world. Gake walked through park, where giant trees growed. He saw small ice cream kiosks around it and an corgeous stage in middle of park. Everything looked so awesome. He walked to bridge and crossed it to sreets of city. He looked at sign where name "Moon-Rise City" has been written. Gake didnt know this world. He wasnt sure what kind of world this was acctually.
He saw giant skyscraper with shining clock and beautyful lights coming from it. He felt like this world would be his home... He suddenly remembered stick that Drew told him to keep. He took it out from his pocket and looked it aganst Skyscraper. It felt like ice cream and building would be connected somehow. He immediatly runned across the streets in order to get to Skyscraper. He saw peoples, but no one didnt notice him or they just didnt care. Gake runned behind the corner and he saw Zenwae.
"Huh? What are you...?" Gake asked. Zenwae turned his arrogant face to him. His black hair waved in wind that runned across the streets.
"Now this is weird... somehow you have lost something from yourself... your darkness feels weaker..." Zenwae said and walked toward Gake. Gake stepped back, only to see that he was against the wall. Zenwae took grip from his shirt and pulled boy up from ground.
"How is that possible? Your darkness has weakened!" Zenwae shouted.
"Im not sure! Maybe im just doing great with my light!" Gake shouted back and managed to free himself from mans grip. Zenwae looked angrier than ever.
"This isnt possible... at all..." He said. Gake smiled. He was amused to see Zenwae being so confused.
"So be it... I shall release DayFaders around this city! They will take it and you cant stop them!" Zenwae shouted and DayFaders appeared around buildings walls. Gake watched them and summoned his keyblade. But then he realised something and dissummoned it. Zenwae looked curious.
"Whats wrong?" He asked.
"Hmph! You are stupid. This isnt an real world, so why should i bother to attack your fake DayFaders and defend thousands of reflections? You can keep your DayFaders and take over the city for all i care. I have more important things to do after all..." Gake said and walked pass Zenwae who looked deeply suprised about Gakes words and actions. He then throwed an evil grin and vanished, leaving dozens of DayFaders to attack world.

"Where... am i...?" An voice asked. Man saw that his face was sealed by mask. His cloths were changed into dark jacket. What was going on? He immediatly though that this might be just an distortion of his own mind so he rised his hand into air and summoned keyblade. An normal keyblade of darkness.
"Your awake?" Another voice echoed through darkness. Man saw an light cutting through darkness as door opened. He walked out from dark room and saw an weird looking room full of shadows.
"Is ths a dream?" He asked.
"It depends on if you chose to believe its reality or an dream." Other man answered. Dark corridor opened. Man quickly dissummoned his keyblade and saw how another masked man walked into room. But this man had an royal looking robes, shoulder packs and white mask. They two looked to each others.
"Who are you?" Man asked from other man.
"I am your savor. Without me you wouldnt be back." White masked said.
"Then im honored... i guess..." Man said and bowed fast.
"But as an exchange for saving your life and creating your heart, you have something to do for me..." White masked said and black masked sighed and started laughing loudly.
"Stop it immediatly!"
"Sorry! Hahaaahhaaa! Its just so funny... there is always a catch isnt it?" Black masked said and white masked slowly shook his head and looked dissapointed.
"Okay. I can help you... but first, take of this mask from my face." Man said.
"Very well then..." White masked said and removed mask from mans face.



Gake was at top of the SkyScraper. He sat to edge and looked up to stars.Stars that were fake as this world and everything inside it. Gake was so confused about Hariwe and Maya. He heard Mayas song in the wind. Those lovely sentences again and again. An song she made for him when they were childs... But how did Gake forgot her and how did she dissappear?
Gake closed his eyes and imagined himself in his childhood years... she remembered Maya. She played with him and Kuma everyday. But then she suddenly dissappeared. Gake remembered sadness he felt. It was his first lost. Second one would be his and Chokus parents... Suddenly he felt angrier and more determined to defeat Hariwe and save Maya. Hariwe kidnapped her long ago. Possibly wanted to take Gake too, but Gake was always protected by his parents and Magma.
"You look angry..." Drew said. Gake opened his eyes and looked to man. He didnt notice mans arrival. Drew sat on the edge on right side of him and watched city and beautiful red moon. Gake stared at him. It felt like he and Drew would have done this before. Sitting on SkyScraper and looking up to stars.
"Does this feel great?" Drew asked.
"Drew, what is this place?" Gake asked.
"Its logical you dont know this place. This place comes from feelings beyond other side of your heart." Man answered and looked away.
"Feelings beyond other side of my heart?" Gake repeated.
"Yeah." Drew said and stood up.
"But why? What do you mean?" Gake asked desperately and stood up too. Drew looked sad.
"I miss those old days..." Drew said and walked away from Gake.
"Hey! Come back here!" Gake shouted but Drew already vanished into dark corridor. Gake watched city once more and tried to figure out what Drew said. Then he saw something really interesting. It was an old observatory at forest. He quickly runned down the stairs and headed to his next destination.

Edited by replika13, 13 April 2012 - 10:43 AM.

[inori]

Its hard for me to keep up reading D:

[hawk]

It's so awsome how you put Hake in that castle. Almost like a better version of CoM!!! Wonder if Crace is gonna join the party. I kinda miss her evilness.

Bet Maya reprisent Namine...

[coolwings]

This story keeps getting more and more awesome every chapter. XD

I hope Drew is as awesome as Axel. XD Also loving the CoM in the story.....

[inori]

This story keeps getting more and more awesome every chapter. XD

I hope Drew is as awesome as Axel. XD Also loving the CoM in the story.....

Por que!!!!!!!!!!??? D:

[coolwings]

Por que!!!!!!!!!!??? D:

What!?

[replika13]

CHAPTER THIRTEEN


TRUTH ECHOES, LIES SPREADS

Gake saw someone at gates of observatory. Somehow he knew this man. His name was... Yolew. Gake calmly walked toward man, who opened his eyes when he came closer. He looked amused of Gakes appearance. He looked boys hair, jacket and cloves and grinned. Gake stopped and felt quite nervous of Yolews stare.
"You really do have same look..." Yolew said.
"Huh? Same look with who?" Gake asked angrily. Yolew looked toward observatory.
"Nobody... just talking to myself..."
"Dont play stupid with me! I know you are smart!" Gake said. He somehow knew many things about Yolew, but wasnt sure why or how.
"Really...? Then this world surely does affect on you... even when it is something you never saw before." Man grinned, giving greeps for Gake. Gake summoned his keyblade.
"Now now... are you gonna fight with your allie?" Yolew asked.
"Your not allie! Your Hariwes puppet like Jalwondo and Drew! You too want me to give into darkness! THAT is not gonna happen!" Gake shouted and runned toward man. Yolew quickly jumped over him and summoned an arrow-spectre, an colorless arrow shooter. He shooted an purple liquid toward Gake. Boy dodged it easily.
"Lets see what master like yourself is going to do... maybe you do give into darkness right here and now. I have counted all probabilities and there wasnt even an slightest change for you to avoid it this time!" Yolew laughed.
"You know, i never cared about scient nor probabilities! I play with my own rules!" Gake shouted back and runned to attack.


Meanwhile, Drew returned to secret room. His plans worked like always... Lwack was history like Wynca. Kuma was safe... but he was still in trouble, since Yolew wanted to get him into trouble and Drew didnt wanna Hariwe to prepare for his arrival... in bad way. Lwacks IRAS has been already hacked all data to secret files Hariwe posessed. Drew quickly started to read them. He took mouse to his hand and started scrolling down the screen.

Day 5 in Shadowless Tower: Plans

After discovering that keyblade was an ultimate weapon ever, i decided to use one to take over Group and take over Kingdom Hearts.
Even though i have planned this with Jalwondo for two years now, we still needed keyblade itself. Then answer to our problems appeared
when Maya appeared to Moon-rise City one day. She was just like us. Full of phenomenal powers and personal darkness for us to use...
I immediatly discovered her abilities and asked Leader that i could place her to Shadowless Tower, which i already had control over.
I soon discovered that there was many keyblade wielders, but i needed an strong one, who would be easy to manipulate... I first chose Kuma,
but before i would have able to lure him into Tower, he and his twin brother travelled to "closed realm" out of my reach. Then i stumbled across with Gake, who was fighting with his darkness. Now im luring him into Tower, since he travelled far enough...

Day 7 in Shadowless Tower: Manipulation

I got Gake into Tower easily. He believed every word that Tower would help him to get rid of his darkness. But he doesnt know that capturing his
DayFader, Nile was an bad idea, since DayFaders are full of darkness. Nile was also rare human one, with ability (Even though man never noticed it)
to create false memories to himself and his "relatives" like Diana, who claimed to be Niles younger sister. Anyways, Niles darkness combined to
Zenwaes shadows in Gake, were both very useful to me. Gake would soon fail and give into darkness,however i need to seal Zenwaes shadows
deeper into his heart somehow, so man could not take control of body and mind of boy, cause then Gake would be useless.

Day 8 in Shadowless Tower: Allies

While Gake is walking through worlds, he desires to revisit or fight against evil, I was careful towards others. Lwack was in Tower in order to kidnap Kuma
and turn him into DayFader. I already told him that since Kumas heart has no single drop of darkness inside, he cannot get any DayFaders, but Lwack
revealed me something curious. He heard Kumas conversation with Gakes brother and discovered that Kuma had another heart inside him. Not just
any heart, but heart of legendary Spirit Master. If Lwack succeeds to turn Kuma into DayFader, im sure i could manipulate Spirit Master to my side
as well. Drew came to me today and offered his help, but since i knew he had friend in Group, i knew i couldnt trust him. Also Yolew appeared, that
fool... Jalwondo and Drew tricked Yolew to sixth floor, where he would be annihilated.
So far Drew has prooven himself useful and loyal at same time...

Drew stopped reading and though about writings. Hariwe was planning to destroy Leader and take ovre Group... He then rised his head and realised that important moment was now. He quickly used dark corridor.


Yolew was weak... he dropped his arrow-spectre and stood tiredly against gate of observatory. He coughed and breathed hardly. Gake didnt put down his keyblade, but didnt attack on him anymore. He glared to Yolew for a second.
"Now tell me! What did you meant by saying i look same with other person? And why do i have these feelings we have met before?" Gake asked angrily. Yolew laughed a bit and then rised his head to Gake.
"Didnt that fool Drew tell you about feelings beyond other side of your heart?" Yolew asked and grinned weakly.
"Yeah? So what about that?" Gake asked.
"Well you see... you have..."
"...Nothing to worry about..." Drew said and walked from shadows.
"Your talking too much Yolew. I think you are no worth for Group anymore..." Man said and summoned DayFaders to around him. Yolew looked amused like this would be an joke, but looking to Drews serious face, he realised what man was gonna do to him. He looked deeply shocked.
"NO! You cant do this!"
"I can do, whatever im trusted to do." Drew said and snapped his fingers. Yolew screamed as dozen DayFaders attacked him. They bited and scratched him and ripped of his jacket and hair. Then they vanished and Yolew falled to ground and vanished into wind. Gake stared at Yolews fading body and then angrily turned his face to Drew.
"What was that for! You guys are so sick!" He shoued and throwed ice cream stick to Drews feets. Drew picked it up and stared at it.
"You should relax and go forward... someone is waiting for you..." Drew said and pointed the gate, that opened by itself. Gake loked at it and then turned his face back to Drew, who wasnt there anymore. Gake didnt mind about that and runned toward door.
Drew walked down forest and putted stick to his pocket.
"Good luck... Gake..."

[replika13]

CHAPTER FOURTEEN


HELP FROM THE FRIEND


Gake saw an girl who was standing in middle of round room. Gake realised who she was.
"Maya!" Gake shouted and runned toward girl. Girl looked sad.
"Dont worry. Im here! And i will never let go of you again!" He said and tried to grab Mayas arm, but girl took it away from him.
"Please...uggh! This is a trap!" Maya said.
"What!"
"I am not who do you think i am Gake!"
"Foolish girl!" An voice echoed through room. An wind started to blow from middle of roof. It was so powerful that it made both, Maya and Gake to fly across room to different sides. Gake flied against wall and immediatly chains appeared from wall and tied him against it. Maya flied to floor and Hariwe appeared behind her. Man took her up and pushed him against pilar. Chains tied her up too. Hariwe looked deeply hateful toward her.
"Hariwe!" Gake shouted and tried to summon his keyblade, but his hand was stuck. Hariwe glared at him, smiling and being amused.
"You surely do wanna rescue your girl dont you?" Hariwe asked.
"No Gake! I am not who do you think!" Maya shouted and Hariwe putted his hand on girls mouth.
"What?" Gake asked shockingly. Hariwe shook his head and sighed.
"Stupid girl... we went through this plan many times didnt we? And yet you dare to defy me?" He said.
"What plan!" Gake shouted.
"An plan to manipulate you Gake!"
"Huh?"
"You were nothing more than just small puppet in my plans to take over Group... using your keyblade i would have overpowered our leader..."
"My keyblade?"
"I first wanted to use your friend, Kuma. But when time was right, he travelled to Realm of Spiritians, out of my reach... Kuma was perfect. Kind and naive. An heart of pure light combined to my evil plan... and keyblade of course..." Hariwe said and summoned shadows from wall and covered Mayas mouth with them. He then walked toward Gake.
"You were perfect too. If not even more. Your darkness that runned deep inside your heart was level of superiority..." Hariwe stopped and rubbed Gakes hair in order to annoy him.
"You were so easy for Maya to manipulate. I lured you into this tower and in a moment you stepped inside from door, Maya had connection to your mind. She helped me to create five worlds from your desires and sixth one to bizzare you... That Drew... he was fooling me from very beginning... he managed to eliminate Jalwondo and Yolew with using you as an pawn in his secret game. Not only that he protected you, he also protected your friend from other members. All other members except me and he in this tower are eliminated..." Hariwe turned back to Maya.
"This girl was nothing than another pawn... her abilities over mind of keyblade wielders like yourself... i tricked you to believe that Maya was someone from your past i even made her sing that cute song... of you two."
"Your sick!" Gake shouted and Hariwe looked even more amused.
"Believe it or not, but this girl was obsessed to do anything. She wanted freedom and i offered her an change... but now im taking it away." Hariwe summoned his weapon and walked closer to Maya.
"Maya!" Gake shouted in horror. Hariwe rised his weapon then suddenly an bright light pushed him to other side of room. Gake gasped.
"Ken!" Ken stood right middle of room, holding his keyblade pointed to Hariwe. Boy smiled to Gake.
"I sensed that something was wrong. Luckily i putted an connection shell into your bag. It was good way to find you through spaces of light." Ken said and turned back to Hariwe.
"You must be behind all this! Who are you and why do you keep my friend as a prisoner?"
Hariwe weakly stood up. His eyes flashed and he dashed toward Ken with his crossed katana, but Ken jumped away from him.
"It cant be! An little child like you? How can you be so strong?" Hariwe shouted and attacked again. Ken attacked too and keyblade and crossed katana clashed together and both of them pushed their weapons in order to make other fall.
"I am strong because my friendshipness is strong! I do anything for them!" Ken shouted back and jumped away, making Hariwe fall to floor.
"We will meet soon..." Hariwe said and runned inside from door. Ken cut chains around Gake and Maya and both felled to their knees.

"Thanks Ken. I appreciate it." Gake said and helped Maya up. She cried.
"Whats wrong?" Gake asked.
"I- i did wrong to you. I lied and manipulated..."
"Hariwe made you do that! Its not your fault!" Gake said and Maya gasped suprisingly. She stared at Gakes smiling face and calm eyes. Gake then hugged her. Girl feeled good from inside. An warmth and feeling of being safe. She hugged back. Ken stared at them.
"Even though Hariwe was right... you are my friend Maya." Gake said.
"But i..."
"No buts! I searched you... i found you... you are my friend. Same way as Kuma or Shabon or anyone else." Gake said and letted go from girl.
"I dont deserve it..." Maya said sadly and turned around.
"Surely you do... even if im a little mad about what i just discovered, maybe a bit shocked too, you deserve to be my friend."
Maya smiled a bit and looked at her shoes.
"Your gonna continue? Or would you rather leave this tower... forever?" She asked.
"I will continue and finish Hariwe. He cant hurt you ever again!" Gake said. Maya turned around back to Gake.
"I must congratulate you Gake... you have gotten rid of your darkness... completely. Zenwae included..." She said.
"What?"
"Lets say that someone helped us both. He helped you to get rid of Zenwae and helped me to understand what is the best. If he wouldnt have done that... you would be Hariwes puppet right now." Maya said.
"Drew?" Gake suggested, but girl shook her head.
"Then who?" Gake asked.
"You need to hurry now... please!" Maya said.
"Okay." Gake said and nodded to Ken. Both boys walked toward door.
"Oh and Maya? Promise me to stay here. Dont run away. I will take you out from this tower myself!" Gake said. Girl smiled to him and nodded.
"I promise."


Gake looked around next world. It had same walls like towers floor-rooms. But he didnt see roof. He saw stages flying above with staircases going from walls and stages to other stages and dead ends.
"This is... True Tower..." Gake said to Ken.
"I help you Gake. We both started this journey to fight your darkness! And we both are gonna end it!" Boy said.
"Yeah! You and me! Soon i will meet Kuma, Shabon and Choku again!" Gake smiled, but soon took an determined and focused attitude. Hariwe was strong enemy and not so easy to defeat. He needed to be ready. Then Tower started to shake.
"What was that?!" Ken asked.
"I- think..."



"You coward! Face me like an man!" Drew shouted and attacked again to Hariwe, who blocked him away with powerful blast. Hariwe then commanded chains to take Drew, but Drew dodged and cutted them easily.
"Pathetic toys!" Your so lame Hariwe!" Drew grinned and throwed his sickles toward Hariwe, who summoned his crossed katana and blocked them, but sickles returned like an boomerangs to Drew and he dashed toward Hariwe, jumping to air in order to dodge his attack.

[coolwings]

XD Drew is so awesome! Maybe even better than Axel

[replika13]

CHAPTER FIFTEEN


FINAL TEST

Drew jumped toward Hariwe and hitted his crossed katana with his sickles and caused an energy collission between two powerful men and two powerful weapons. Drew jumped back, dodging Hariwes attack.
"There is no way for you to destroy me before i destroy you..." Hariwe grinned. Drew glared weakly at him. Hariwe dropped drop of his blood to floor and chains came from floor to his hands, forming an shell. Then chains broked and Drew saw Maya coming out of them. Hariwe took Maya to his arm.
"Give it your best shot Drew. I know you would like that." Hariwe said. Drew looked deeply amused and laughed.
"Is that suppose to be something you call an protection? What a shame..."
"You´ll see. Ah Gake!" Hariwe said. Drew looked back and saw Gake and Ken at door.
"Drew is ready to destroy your friend Maya to destroy me. You wont wanna that happen?" Hariwe asked from Gake. Gake immediatly summoned his keyblade.
"You really are his pawn arent ya?" Drew asked.
"I will destroy him after i have dealed with you!" Gake shouted and Ken nodded. Hariwe grinned and walked away to stairs. Drew runned after him, but Gake and Ken runned in front of him and blocked the way. Drew smiled.
"I have tried to protect you Gake. Guess i haf to do my duty to protect Group. Kill you!" Drew attacked immediatly.


"Let go of me!" Maya shouted and shook off her hand from Hariwes hand and runned back to stairs. Hariwe teleported in front of her.
"You cant escape girl... you will pay for your insolence.Oww!" Hariwe growled when Maya kicked him to knee and runned pass him to downstairs. She wanted to make sure that either Drew or Gake wouldnt be hurted. Hariwe runned after her, though his knee was in pain.
Drew striked repeated attacks on Gake, who managed to dodge them. Ken then jumped to Drew from behind, but Drew dissummoned sickle from his right arm and punched Ken to face. Boy flied through room against the wall.
"Ken!" Gake shouted and blocked Drews sickle. He tried to push Drew away, but man didnt even show of being weak, even though he used only one hand to push Gake away, while boy used two.
"Your such a weakling Gake. I expected more from keyblade master material. Guess as for resbondation your master didnt manage to train you hardly enough..." Drew grinned. Gake glared at him so murderously that he had slight headache. How dared this man insult his master. Gake then felt how ground below his feets resbonded his anger. Gake smiled and stomped his left leg to ground and piece of floor below Drew suddenly rised and throwed Drew to air.
"What in the...?" Drew looked suprised.
"EARTH!" Gake shouted and stomped again, summoning two pieces of floor to air. He spinned and hitted them toward Drew with his keyblade. Drew spinned in air and cutted other piece of floor with his sickles. But then Gake throwed his keyblade toward Drew and he didnt wait for its coming. Keyblade striked Drew, who felled to floor.
Gake pointed his keyblade to Drew and charged it full of light. Maya and Hariwe appeared from stairs. Drew smiled and throwed his sickle and vanished into darkness. Sickle pushed Maya away as Gake shooted beam of light that stabbed Hariwe. Hariwe falled to his knees and started to vanish as darkness and chains surrounded his body.
"No... this cant be... my demise..." He said and chains covered him. Then chains melted and Hariwe was there no longer. He was gone for good and only because of fast thinking of Drew. Gake runned to Ken.
"Are you all right?" He asked.
"I guess." Ken smiled weakly and stood up. Maya stood up too and handed Drews sickle to Gake.
"I think we should thank Drew. He sacrificed himself to save us all." Maya said. Gake stared at Drews sickle as it turned to an keychain.
"Yeah..." Gake said and putted keychain to his pocket.
"So... now we just haf to leave the Tower now?" Gake asked.
"Not guite Gake... you received emotions and your heart was damaged while i was manipulating you..." Maya said.
"What does that mean?" Gake asked.
"That means that you must forget everything what happened here. Including me... forever." Maya said.
"WHAT?"
"I know it sounds sad, but if you walk away from here with those emotions... your heart will collapse and... i dont want that to happen to you." Maya said. Gake stared at window. He tried to pull it all together, but maybe all it was best for him. He didnt wanna leave Choku alone with no other family. He didnt wanna die and make Kuma and Shabon sad... Gake sighed and turned back to Maya.
"So you just erase my memories in order to seal away those emotions?"
"Yes. I will make you sleep. Ken can then take you out from here. But he cant speak about this to you. Not anytime soon at least. Otherwise those emotions might return and cause harm again..." Maya said. Gake nodded slowly to her. He then hugged Maya.
"We will meet again. I promise." Gake said. Maya shed tear and putted his hand behind Gakes head. She sighed sadly.
"Good bye Gake." She said, closed her eyes and took grasp from Gakes head. Gakes head then felt huge pain and he immediatly collapsed to floor. Maya cried, but Ken took her hand and smiled.
"Dont worry. He promised you..." He said and Maya smiled a bit. Ken made spell around Gakes unconscious body that made it float. Ken waved farewells to Maya and walked out from room. He would be outside in ten minutes and he Tower would vanish behind him and Gake as Ken walked away from it.


White masked man walked out from Shadowless Tower. Another man followed him.
"Now remember what you promised to me."
"Dont worry. I dont forgot."
"Im counting on you... Nile."

[replika13]

FINAL CHAPTER (16)


TIME TO SLEEP

Gake woked up. He felt weird. He looked around him and saw grassy field. There was small hills and some trees surrounding area. He then noticed Ken, who was sleeping right next to him. Gake felt weird. It was like darkness inside him would have dissappeared for good. Maybe he did something and won Zenwae, but doesnt just remember it now... Well, he can ask Ken when he wakes up.

Gake yawned and stretched his arms. Then he suddenly heard an weird noice. He saw an big mosquito that flied towards him. It landed to Gakes arm and stinged him to shoulder.
"Oww!" Gake shouted and tried to catch mosquito, but then his head felt dizzy and his sight started to blacken out. He felt really weak. His every muscle was too weak to continue... he felt to sleep again.


Umbra walked at beach. He then saw an armored figure. His armor was knight like, nothing compared to keyblade armor... It was black and had red details.
"Are you Umbra? Keyblade wielder?" Armored man asked. Umbra immediatly summoned his keyblade.
"Depends on who wants to know!" Umbra shouted.
"Hahahaaa!" Someone laughed.
"What the...? Aaaagh!" Someone throwed an iron ropes around him and tied him up. He saw small jester showing his tongue to him.
"Why you...!"
"Enough! Your mother wants to meet you immediatly! We haf to take you to her if you want it or not!" Knight said. Umbra tried to free himself, but Jester snapped his fingers and Umbra got electrified by ropes.
"Aaaagh!" He shouted and fainted. Knight then took him to his shoulders and jester opened dark corridor.


Kuma and Choku played inside one of the tree houses. Kuma teached Choku how to use keyblade and Choku had wooden sword. Boy was becaming really good. Then Kuma felt tired and took potion from table. He was about to drink from it, when suddenly an big mosquito flied from window. Kuma immediatly noticed that it was not bug but machine.
"Choku! Run and get Shabon to here!" He shouted. Choku did as Kuma told him and runned out from house. Mosquito stinged Kuma to forehead before Kuma managed to summon keyblade. He tried to nap the bug, but unsuccessfully. He felt dizzy and finally slept. Mosquito flied down to ground and when Choku appeared from stairs, it stinged him to knee. Choku didnt notice it, but as he runned he slowed down and felled to bushes.


"Thats my last word father! Im not gonna do that for my brother!" Shabon shouted and turned around.
"But it is your duty as part of your family!" Her father shouted. Shabon stopped.
"No! My duties in this family are over... my duty as a keyblade wielder is protect peoples. Im not gonna kill anyone just to unite our family."
"I guess my daughter is dead then. I have only six daughters."
"And i have father! His name is Magma!" Shabon said and walked out. She was full of her father, she was ready to travel back home with Kuma. She wondered if she would never return to see her father. Selfish man who only cared about his own world and only his stupid traditional ways to have all childrens as Guardians of Oshi the Ancients secrets.
"Kuma! Choku! Umbra! Lets go home!" She shouted, but didnt hear anyone from treehouse. Suddenly she felt how something stinged her.
"Oww..." She muttered and looked how big mosquito stinged her again. She felt tired. Maybe if she would just reach elixir bottle in her pocket... Shabon felled to ground and slept.


"Oh sir! Magma! It is horrible!" Mrs Recy, Magmas housekeeper shouted in horror and runned to Magma, who was with his other 10 pupils.
"What is it?" Magma asked.
"Its horrible! DayFaders are inside school! They are everywhere!" Ryce shouted. Magma stood up and by then someone shooted glowin g arrows to his pupils and each one of them fainted to floor. Magma saw an teenage girl, standing at door. She was wearing an dark uniform.
"Suprise!" Crace smiled and came in from dark corridor.
"Crace! Just in time! That girl is attacking here!" magma said and pointed to girl at door. Crace summoned his keyblade and shooted toward Magma, Magma summoned keyblade and blocked spell, but got glowing bullet to his arm and his keyblade vanished.
"These bullets have paralyzing ability. Dirt suits your robes Magma." Crace laughed and made Magma fall by kicking his feets down. She then pointed her keyblade to Magmas head and man looked at him.
"What are you doing Crace?" Magma asked in anger.
"Isnt it obvious?" Crace laughed.
"Im here to take over this castle of yours. So many secrets and so many powerful objects plus i have free room for Umbra and Kuma together." Crace said and walked toward Magmas throne
"Apparently theres always one problem and it is you! Your stupid light ruins this castle. My touch of darkness should do many changes here..." Crace sat to Magmas throne and smiled to him like she would already own his castle. Magma tried to stood up, but girl at door shooted more bullets to him, paralyzing his body completely.
"I wasnt on vacation. I was travelling to many worlds and gathering allies. Once i had enough, it was easy to take over DayFaders and send them here."
"What are you gonna do to me and my pupils? Your not gonna kill us?" Magma asked.
"Of course not. To show you that i have gentle side, i will banish you into Black Manor! An place where you took my son from me! I have sealed whole building with spells that no one cant enter it or leave it. No Spirit Windows or Dark corridors are gonna help you there!" Crace laughed and casted an giant dark corridor to floor, so each of ten pupils and Magma would sink into darkness.
"Farewell! Dont worry, you will have able to move again really soon! Once i find Gake and Shabon, they too are gonna company you at Manor!" Crace said and Magma and pupils vanished. Then someone knocked to door. Crace looked at Mrs Recy.
"Your in my service now! OPEN THAT DOOR!" She commanded and Mrs Recy immediatly runned to door, but knight already pushed it away and carried Umbra to Crace. Umbra was angry, even when Crace cutted ropes around him.
"What is going on!"
"Were moving in my dear. Your stuffs are already in empty room of boys corridors." Crace said and looked at knight.
"Where is Kuma? I though he was with Umbra!"
"He wasnt there lady Crace!" Knight said and bowed. Crace punched him to helmet and knight falled to floor.
"Well... no matter. We dont need Kuma yet. He can take so much time as he needs. He will return to home no matter what. And when he does, i have my both sons here..."



THE END

Now imagine staff roll while listening this music


Thnx for reading and supporting. Story will continue in Kingdom Hearts Ancients: Traveller. But i keep a break with series and write something different. But dont worry. I will post new story during this spring. Thank you again

Edited by replika13, 23 April 2012 - 07:44 AM.

[hawk]

LOL! Where did you find fireflies for such an ending? Anyway that was a nice story, bro! Gake really sounded epic in this story, but I do miss Kuma... when will you write the story where he turns into a kitty?

[replika13]

LOL! Where did you find fireflies for such an ending? Anyway that was a nice story, bro! Gake really sounded epic in this story, but I do miss Kuma... when will you write the story where he turns into a kitty?

XD just wanted to use that
i dunno. Maybe after i have planned that

[inori]

why fireflies!!!???

[replika13]

why fireflies!!!???

becuz i like that one XD
sorry if that dissapointed

[inori]

becuz i like that one XD
sorry if that dissapointed

Lol no no its okay, its my fave song.

[coolwings]

O.O I was only going to read one chapter today but I found myself soon finishing the whole story. I couldn't stop reading! Seriously you have improved a lot since the first KH Ancients.

I loved the end the final battle seemed more like KH2 final battle than CoM but I loved Drew. If Axel was around at the final battle in KH2 then it would of been like this... EPIC! The secret ending (What I would like to call the final chapter) was awesome. It makes me more egger for the next story, I can't wait!! I can see Crace being the next bad guy XD

I hope Drew makes his return in the next story XD and..... Continue (No seriously HURRY UP. I can't wait!)