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#1 inori

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Posted 04 March 2012 - 03:15 AM

10th grade
As I sat there in English class, I stared at the girl next to me. She was my so called "best friend". I stared at her long, silky hair, and wished she was mine. But she didn't notice me like that, and I knew it. After class, she walked up to me and asked me for the notes she had missed the day before and handed them to her. She said "thanks" and gave me a kiss on the cheek. I wanted to tell her, I want her to know that I don't want to be just friends, I love her but I'm just too shy, and I don't know why.

11th grade
The phone rang. On the other end, it was her. She was in tears, mumbling on and on about how her love had broke her heart. She asked me to come over because she didn't want to be alone, so I did. As I sat next to her on the sofa, I stared at her soft eyes, wishing she was mine. After 2 hours, one Drew Barrymore movie, and three bags of chips, she decided to go to sleep. She looked at me, said "thanks" and gave me a kiss on the cheek. I want to tell her, I want her to know that I don't want to be just friends, I love her but I'm just too shy, and I don't know why.

Senior year
The day before prom she walked to my locker. My date is sick" she said; he's not going to go well, I didn't have a date, and in 7th grade, we made a promise that if neither of us had dates, we would go together just as "best friends". So we did. Prom night, after everything was over, I was standing at her front door step. I stared at her as she smiled at me and stared at me with her crystal eyes. I want her to be mine, but she isn't think of me like that, and I know it. Then she said "I had the best time, thanks!" and gave me a kiss on the cheek. I want to tell her, I want her to know that I don't want to be just friends, I love her but I'm just too shy, and I don't know why.

Graduation Day
A day passed, then a week, then a month. Before I could blink, it was graduation day. I watched as her perfect body floated like an angel up on stage to get her diploma. I wanted her to be mine, but she didn't notice me like that, and I knew it. Before everyone went home, she came to me in her smock and hat, and cried as I hugged her. Then she lifted her head from my shoulder and said, "you're my best friend, thanks" and gave me a kiss on the cheek. I want to tell her, I want her to know that I don't want to be just friends, I love her but I'm just too shy, and I don't know why.

A Few Years Later
Now I sit in the pews of the church. That girl is getting married now. I watched her say "I do" and drive off to her new life, married to another man. I wanted her to be mine, but she didn't see me like that, and I knew it. But before she drove away, she came to me and said "you came!". She said "thanks" and kissed me on the cheek. I want to tell her, I want her to know that I don't want to be just friends, I love her but I'm just too shy, and I don't know why.

Funeral
Years passed, I looked down at the coffin of a girl who used to be my "best friend". At the service, they read a diary entry she had wrote in her high school years. This is what it read: I stare at him wishing he was mine, but he doesn't notice me like that, and I know it. I want to tell him, I want him to know that I don't want to be just friends, I love him but I'm just too shy, and I don't know why. I wish he would tell me he loved me!


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"I wish I did too..." I thought to my self, and I cried.

He died a few months later........
-FIN </3



(kinda change the story at the end) the original story is the link below
for more information ask me where i got these "stories"
picture is not by me(you can tell from the link on the picture)

http://www.boardofwi...5&listname=Love

#2 SoraKH

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Posted 04 March 2012 - 03:21 AM

....Ami this is beautiful and heartmelting.... I just love it... I can feel my eyes hurting and wanting to cry... This is beautiful and so damn real... I bow to you... One of the saddest love stories i ever read </3

5/5

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Posted 04 March 2012 - 03:26 AM

....Ami this is beautiful and heartmelting.... I just love it... I can feel my eyes hurting and wanting to cry... This is beautiful and so damn real... I bow to you... One of the saddest love stories i ever read </3

5/5

A very very sad love story indeed....

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Posted 04 March 2012 - 03:27 AM

A very very sad love story indeed....


Wait.... Is it true?!?!!?

#5 Not-with-a-whimper

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Posted 04 March 2012 - 03:31 AM

Oh noes!!!!! I nearly cried.

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Posted 04 March 2012 - 03:44 AM

that is so cute

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Posted 04 March 2012 - 03:51 AM

even Saix would start crying after this T_T

i've learnt something from this, if you love a girl, being shy is the greatest mistake of your life. Maybe.....i should ask her out.....

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Posted 04 March 2012 - 03:51 AM

Dammit,why i'm not cry on this Lovely Story.....and now i'm really crying.... :

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Posted 04 March 2012 - 03:58 AM

Wait.... Is it true?!?!!?

Dimi its just a story lol

even Saix would start crying after this T_T

i've learnt something from this, if you love a girl, being shy is the greatest mistake of your life. Maybe.....i should ask her out.....

Thats the spirit :D

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Posted 04 March 2012 - 08:09 AM

Chances of things like this happening are so incredibly low... ._.
Still I get the message of the story. But you know it's not so easy so I feel the characters' pain.
This is pretty freaking sad though, if it had the characters even more detailed and became a full fledged story I'd cry, no doubt.

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Posted 04 March 2012 - 08:48 AM

:'( D': this is so sad, but its soooooooo wonderful! its like , Hunger Games wonderful.

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Posted 04 March 2012 - 09:09 AM

That was one of the best love stories I've ever heard...

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Posted 04 March 2012 - 09:18 AM

I'm assuming he committed suicide for being an idiot

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Posted 04 March 2012 - 09:57 AM

OK, IM SORRY. IM SORRY FOR THAT NIGHT.

I like your story too btw.

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#15 inori

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Posted 04 March 2012 - 10:25 AM

That was one of the best love stories I've ever heard...

you mean "one of the best sad love stories you've ever heard" ;)

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Posted 04 March 2012 - 10:25 AM

You could at least credit the original writer, or at least where you found it, because it's all over the internet.

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Posted 04 March 2012 - 10:27 AM

You could at least credit the original writer, or at least where you found it, because it's all over the internet.

i should've done that in the first place :/

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Posted 04 March 2012 - 10:32 AM

i should've done that in the first place :/


If you're going to post something in the writing forum and you didn't write it, credit the original writer. If you don't know who the original writer is, at least put where you found it. Otherwise people will assume you wrote it, and we don't approve of plagiarism on this site.

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Posted 04 March 2012 - 10:40 AM

If you're going to post something in the writing forum and you didn't write it, credit the original writer. If you don't know who the original writer is, at least put where you found it. Otherwise people will assume you wrote it, and we don't approve of plagiarism on this site.

fixed it ._.

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Posted 04 March 2012 - 12:34 PM

Cute story.