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#41 hawk

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Posted 25 March 2012 - 11:31 AM

OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! This is so damm epic!!! Best chapter so far!!!!! Yeah, Shabon is back!!!

O_O Poor Kuma... Hope they'll save him....

I can't damm wait for the next chapter! Keep writing, cuz you rock!

And the drawing is damm epic!

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Posted 25 March 2012 - 01:20 PM

CHAPTER TWENTY THREE


TO BE AWAKENED


Darkness. Ever lasting darkness. Kuma felt it everywhere. Saw it everywhere. Even heard it everywhere. He felt how he felled down through that darkness. Even without wind, his hair and sleeves were waved by falling. Kuma opened his eyes and saw giant round platform below him.
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Kuma landed perfectly to his feets and looked around it. Platform was huge, showing two different yet the same figures.
"Welcome." Childs voice said and Kuma turned around. Dark corridor opened and an really young boy with similiar hair as Shiryo walked in. His eyes were completely red only having red pupils in them. Kuma saw sadness in boys eyes. Endless sadness and hatred. Even when boy smiled to him.
"Who are you?" Kuma asked.
"Im whats left from old me. I am the original." Boy said.
"Original... you?"
"I see you hate me Kuma. Hate me and my sad hatred against light." Boy said and glared murderiously to Kuma.
"What? I dont even know you." Kuma protested.
"You know me very well." Boy said and rised his hand toward darkness and turned his face to there too. Kuma then realised.
"Your... Shiryo? But how?" He stuttered. Boy grinned a little.
"It all happened nine years ago, when you were just a stupid baby with a wooden sword. Me and Shabon met many times in my home world. One day your stupid master was sure i use darkness, even when i was just 7 years old! He and his foolish friends chose that i must be get rid of from Shabon, but since we were so good friends, it would been impossible. Your master feeded lies to your friend, he manipulated her and finally she set me a trap and used powerful spell to banish me into this cursed realm." Boy said and tears falled from his eyes. Suddenly Kuma felt an presence. Darker and much less friendlier.
"Then i met dark spiritian. Source of all troumas! It found me and i didnt scare for it for some reason... it felt like... a friend. But it was weak to keep me safe on its own, so i offered my heart for it and we made a deal. I keep him in my heart and join him into Realm of Darkness someday and he will make me strong and determined and help me to get my revenge. Thats when legendary Spirit master appeared. No keyblade warrior ever escaped from this realm again thanks to me! No magician nor master could never have able to realise what i was or why did i do what i had to." Boy said and madness growed into his sad eyes.
"But i do! Umbra do as well! I know he does!" Kuma shouted. Boy grinned again.
"Even so, your brother isnt exception. He will too fall like many others already have during last 9 years." Boy said.
"Your planning to spare me then?" Kuma asked.
"Of course, but dont think there is no price for that. In order to escape from the realm, i needed to combine with another child who would have keyblade. 13 year old Umbra was my first target. His darkness would been great extra for Dark Spiritians and my own darkness. But his determination was too strong. He refused to turn into "toy" like he himself though."
"So you chose me instead?" Kuma suggested.
"Precisely!" Boy answered.
"Your light combined to my darkness makes me unstopable. Plus, i bet no one would ever suspect that innocent Kuma attacks to innocent peoples and slays them out from sight. When they does, its too late." Boy laughed.
Kuma was speechless. Shiryos plan really sounded like bad news and it would also cause devastation of everything. He had to act before its too late.
"I wont allow it to end like this..." Kuma said.
"Of course you... WHAT!" Boy said shockingly. He though that Kuma would surrender in front of all this despair Dark Spiritian spread. It didnt effect on him yet, but if he starts fighting, boy will never have able to combinate with him.
"I wont allow you to hurt my friends." Kuma said and summoned his keyblade. He thinked about Shabon, Gake, Choku, Diana, Nile, Ken, Magma, Cynthia, Umbra and mother. He wont let this boy to destroy any of them.
"Dont get too aggressive! It is dangerous!" Boy stuttered.
"For you or me? If my heart vanishes, you need new target, who propably wont be showing up in another 9 years. if i destroy you, everyone would be safe! There is no other option! We MUST FIGHT!" Kuma shouted. Boy glared at him, rised his hand and summoned keyblade.
"So be it. Be ready to meet your your future darkness Kuma." Shiryo said and gave him an grin.

"Give up now and you dont haf to feel pain." Boy said and runned toward Kuma. Kuma quickly dodged and striked boy to back. He then striked again and again, but boy smiled and rised his hand. Dozen Kuma replicas landed down to platform and attacked Kuma. Kuma used wingblade in order to keep them all away. He striked one down from platform, then used chain attack to make three vanish too. He then used four wingblades to stab two more replicas. He flied to air.
"LIGHT!" He shouted and shooted eight beams of light to platform, killing rest of replicas.
"Not bad Kuma..." Shiryo said and Kuma runned to him and both boys keyblades clashed together. They tried to push each others away.
"...but thats not enough!" Boy shouted, pushing Kuma to air and striking him away. Kuma flied to edge of platform.
"Uuugh!"
"Giving up?" Boy asked, but Kuma stood up and runned to him again.
"I guess not." Shiryo smiled and dodged both of Kumas strikes. He then jumped back and shooted darkness to boys face. Kuma hesitated a little, but then he used one of his hidden powers. He didnt know if it works, cause it was spirit formation power.
"Phoenix sanctuary!" He shouted and growed two wings. He then started to burn, but flames didnt hurt him. They protected him. Kuma started to whirl around, forming an flaming tornado. Shiryo stabbed his keyblade against platform and took strong grasp from it. Kuma then whirled closer to Shiryo, whos keyblade broke down, throwing boy into tornado. Kuma then freezed time and used powerful whirl-dash and jumped toward boy. He then hitted boy and he flied really high, when time suddenly was back to normal. Shiryo felled down to platform and stood up.
"Your weak Kuma. Join with me!"
"AAAAAAAAAAAARH!" Kuma roared and rised his keyblade. He runned to boy, who resummoned his keyblade and used it to make Kuma trip by hitting him to knee. He then tried to stab Kumas head, but boy quickly rolled farther. Shiryo smiled.
"You are nothing Kuma! Nothing! Hear me? NOTHING!" Boy laughed. Kuma dashed toward boy and when he stopped his keyblade wasnt in his hands anymore. It went through Shiryos chest to his back. Boy looked shocked. He dropped his own keyblade to floor and it broke into fragments. Boy then weakly tried to take off Kumas keyblade, but it was stuck in his chest.
"Why? Why do you hate me?" Boy asked and cried. Kuma then saw Shiryos real nature. He was just sad child, who was taken away from his home. Boy whos friends were turned against him. He was like... mother. Kuma walked toward boy and pulled keyblade out from his chest. He then stabbed it again into boys heart.
"Out from this vessel you dark creature! Escape and never return or cast your shadows to this boy again!" Kuma casted and shadowy creature escaped from Shiryos chest. Shiryo then felled to his knees and faded away, leaving ball of light. Shiryos heart.
"Why Kuma?" Heart asked.
"You dont deserve to be killed just because some kind of monster has manipulated you." Kuma said.
"Thank you Kuma..."
"Your welcome... friend..." Kuma smiled.
"Friend? We are friends now?"
"Sure."
"Do me a little favor then..."
"Anything."
"Let my strength to help you defeat Dark Spiritian. Let me into your heart Kuma." Shiryos heart echoed. Kuma didnt have time to think. Platform started to fade away. Same was with Shiryos heart. Kuma slowly pushed Shiryos heart inside his chest. He would wake up now...

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Posted 25 March 2012 - 01:41 PM

You make your stories more and more interesting :)

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Posted 25 March 2012 - 01:49 PM

View Postami, on 25 March 2012 - 01:41 PM, said:

You make your stories more and more interesting :)
thanks. I did best with this plot. It wa easy, cause i had now two characters instead of three and they both were having pretty much same story ^_^

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Posted 25 March 2012 - 02:00 PM

View Postreplika13, on 25 March 2012 - 01:49 PM, said:

thanks. I did best with this plot. It wa easy, cause i had now two characters instead of three and they both were having pretty much same story ^_^
You're welcome. and you type to fast. typing in your stories.Lol

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Posted 25 March 2012 - 02:39 PM

CHAPTER TWENTY FOUR


BATTLE AGAINST SHIRYOS ARMY


Kuma woked up and felled down from roof.
"Yaaaaaagh!" He felled right on Copy-Magmas neck, freeing Umbra in process.
"Master? Your all right?" One of masked people asked. Spirit master was on his knees and seem to feel a lot of pain now.
"Umbra? UMBRA!" Kuma shouted and hugged his brother. He then saw Shabon, who waved her hand nervously.
"Shabon!" Kuma shouted and hugged her.
"I though i would never see you again! When you did that thing back then." Kuma said and cried a little.
"Its okay Kuma. Im all right and we are free to go." Shabon said.
"Not so fast..." Said unnatural voice. Spirit masters eyes were pure gold now. He glard at them and stood up.
"You arent Shiryo! You are Dark Spiritian!" Kuma shouted, tapping his chest at same time.
"Yes... i never imagined this would happen. I had many years, but all i had to do was to get rid of his heart. No matter. I dont need any others anymore... Men! Ladies! Seize them at all cost!" Spirit master shouted and vanished into distortion. Kuma, Umbra and Shabon summoned their keyblades. Kia kicked Rellik to waist and hitted him to neck.
"No one will ever touch my hands without permission again!" She shouted and freed Seiji from Copy-Craces grip. Seiji looked apologizingly to Umbra and Shabon.
"Its okay." Umbra smiled without giving boy opportunity to ask. Crace, Rellik, Magma and Zenwae vanished into dark corridors.
"Hmph! Looks like we need to do this then?" Man asked from boy and they both took of their masks. Four others used dark corridors to get out of room. Kuma and Shabon gasped as those guys were Nile and Gake.
"But... how?" Shabon asked.
"They are just phonies, remember! They are created from your memories Shabon!" Umbra said and summoned his keyblade. Gake and Nile did so too.

Umbra and Kuma jumped to Nile, while Shabon and Kia jumped to Gake. Both were strong fighters however. Nile simply waved his keyblade and caused water to be shot into Umbras and Kumas face. Gake summoned rocks through wall and they punched Shabon and Kia against wall. Kuma recovered quickly and nodded to Umbra. Umbra nodded too. They took each others hands and silver aura of spirit drive of Brotherhood runned through their hearts. They summoned two more ketýblades and jumped back to Nile. Nile gasped when all four keyblades stabbed him and destroyed him. Gake then held Kia and was ready to hit her head off, when Shabon summoned Terminus, an powerful dark spell, that would send Gake to his oblivion. Gake looked to Terminus and shouted, when he vanished and exploded with spell. Shabon looked tired.
"Your okay Shabon?" Kia asked.
"Yeah. That thing just took most of my energy... i cant fight now..." Shabon said.
"Enough whining! We need to stop others as well." Umbra shouted and opened dark corridor. Others followed him Kuma helping Shabon through it.


Crace spinned and hitted Copy-Crace with her keyblade. She then shooted darkness to Copy-Magmas face.
"You both are nothing more than miserable reflections!" She shouted and annihilated Crace. She then jumped to Magma, who was ready. Dark corridor opened and Umbra walked out from it. Kuma, Shabon, Seiji and Kia followed him of course.
"Mom!" Kuma shouted.
"Get him mom!" Umbra shouted. Crace didnt look for them, but she heard them. She then spinned, hitting her keyblade to Magmas back and pushing him to wall.
"Eat darkness, faker!" Crace said and used her keyblade as flamethrower of darkness to destroy Magma too. She then landed down.
"What is going on?" She asked.
"Spirit master escaped. We think he may be at above of castle." Umbra explained.
"Its obvious Umbra. Every bad guy hides into highest places where they can keep eye on entrances and situations. Its ultimate place for their final battles." Crace said.
"Okay! Lets get going then! We have a Spiritian to take out!" Kuma said. While others walked in front of him, he putted his hand to chest and though:
"I will keep you safe... i promise it Shiryo."

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Posted 25 March 2012 - 04:07 PM

Wow those sure were epic scenes! Keep writing twin bro!!!

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Posted 26 March 2012 - 09:26 AM

CHAPTER TWENTY FIVE

LAST KEYHOLE REVEALED


Spirit masters body, now controlled by Dark Spiritian, looked down to ruined city. Thanks to Shiryo, he now had body in order to escape, but what if he cant control over boys keyblade? What if it isnt enough for unlocking last way into Realm of Light. He summoned darker version of keyblade. It was black and white, but its power felt real.
"Unlocking this keyhole will make them all bow to me..." He muttered.
"Master... they are coming!" Zenwae said when he and Rellik appeared from dark corridor. Spirit master moved his head a little and was being amused.
"So what?"
"Huh? We must stop them Master." Rellik said. Spirit master turned to them and grinned like an psychopath.
"I dont think i need you two anymore. You both failed me too many times." He smiled.
"What?" Both of them asked.
"Goodbye... forever." Spirit master said and turned his wrist like he would been turning an key. Zenwae and Rellik both turned into shadows and melted to floor. They then vanished.
"Who needs this army? It was all that fool Shiryos idea anyways..."


After facing masked man, who looked much like Richy, Umbras and Kumas passed father, all six continued their walk toward upstairs.
"I still need one thing." Umbra said and turned to left.
"Umbra..." Kuma said, but Kia nodded to him and went herself after him.
"What is he doing?" Kuma asked.
"No matter. He will see us at top." Shabon said and continued. Kuma walked after her and others.
"We still haf to face those other masked guys." Seiji suggested.
"No." Shabon answered.
"Huh?"
"Spirit master can summon them. But since Dark Spiritian is in charge of his body, he dont need these peoples anymore." Shabon explained.
"Kinda cold." Crace said and smiled a bit.
"At least there is few phonies left in this realm."
"Acctually..." Kuma said and stopped walking.
"What happens when we defeat him and unlock final keyhole? Will this world vanish forever? Will this realm vanish?"
"This realm isnt eternal, but i bet it doesnt end if we get rid of Dark Spiritian and troumas. This world, i think it will vanish since this isnt world for others to live anymore. Dark Spiritian and Shiryo did notable work on destroying it..." Shabon said.



"Umbra! Wait!" Kia said, when they Umbra runned to library like room. Kia immediatly saw silver chandel at table.
"Dont touch it! You stop stealing and i try to appreciate your help more." Umbra said and glared to Kia, who sadly turned around from chandel and putted her hands behind her back.
"What are we looking for anyways?" Kia asked.
"Spirit fragment! It must be here! It must!"
"Umbra... there is no spirit fragment in this castle." Kia said.
"What?"
"I could sense such a treasure. Forget it Umbra."
"I cant... I promised..." Umbra said and started to feel rage. He summoned his keyblade and cut table from middle. He then shot dark fire around bookcases, destroying everything in them. He finally throwed his keyblade to air and it got stucked into forehead of Spirit masters portray. Umbra took deep breath and then calmed down.
"You surely have a lot of rage to flood out." Kia suggested. Umbra didnt say anything. He walked out of room, summoning his keyblade too.
"We must help them... Im going grazy if im gonna still stay in this cursed realm." He said. Kia followed him.

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Posted 27 March 2012 - 08:24 AM

CHAPTER TWENTY SIX


LAST STANDING

"So you made it..." Spirit master said with Dark Spiritians unnatural voice. Kuma, Crace, Shabon, Umbra and Kia stood behind him. They all (excluding Kia) summoned their keyblades. Spirit master laughed.
"I am very amused that you are even planning to stop me..."
"Then be amused! Like we should care about your sick mind!" Shabon shouted.
"We´ll stop you! Once and for all!" Kuma said.
"Maybe. But all of you cant do that..." Spirit master said and turned around.
"Huh?"
"Only those who entered this realm, connected together and sealed all eight keyholes are allowed to defeat me. If i won, your realm will come to its end." Spirit master smiled rised his hand toward Umbra and Kuma and darkness swallowed them two.

"What a-?" Umbra asked and looked up toward Spirit master, who had now an armor around him. An giant dark creature surrounded him.
"Lets take him off!" Kuma shouted. Kuma runned from left and dashed toward creatures legs, while Umbra teleported to air, hitting Armor. Spirit master laughed and whirling sphere filled with dead keyblades appeared to air. Kuma used speed-mode and runned away from them as they flied toward them. Umbra got hitted by eleven keyblades and he flied back to ground. Kuma runned toward creatures legs and dodged, when keyblades stabbed into creatures leg. He did same all over again until third and final feet felled to its knees, making monster and Armor to fall. While creature was lying at ground, Armor summoned its own keyblade and cut the shadows, that holded it in creature. It landed to ground and runned toward Umbra.
"Darkness!" Umbra casted and made huge shadowy barricade around him, but Armor had able to cut it from middle and shadows simply vanished. Kuma jumped to Armors shoulders and stabbed his keyblade through Armors eyes that it didnt even have.
"Gaaah! CURSED... IDIOTS!" Armor shouted and turned around and hitted Kuma to air like an tennis ball. Umbra then used opportunity and striked Armors feet, making it to trip. However Armor vanished from ground and appeared behind Umbra. He casted and dark chain, throwing it around Umbras wrist and then throwing him to air. Armor jumped after.
"Kuma!" Umbra shouted and throwed his keyblade to Kuma. Kuma catched it and dashed toward Armor. He crossed both keyblades in front of him and pushed Armor away from Umbra just in time. He pushed Armor higher and dashed. He started to hit it repeatedly with powerful strikes. In end he rised both keyblades and slashed them at same time, throwing Armor back to ground.
Umbra summoned his keyblade back and slided toward falling Armor he went down of it, throwing Armor to other direction.
"Now!" Kuma shouted and floated right next to Umbra and light appeared to his other hand, while Umbras hand was shadowed by darkness.
"Ultimate power!" Umbra casted and balls of light and arrows of darkness styarted to rain from sky toward Armor, that tried to block them away, but unsuccessfully.
"Grrrr... GAAAAAAAAAAARH!" Armor roared and created giant shadowed wings to himself. He then crossed his arms and shooted dark thorns toward Umbra and Kuma. However Umbra felt darkness and waved his hand to left, making dark thorn to fly into that direction. Kuma then charged his keyblade and jumped toward Armor.
"Eat light!" He shouted and shooted beam of light that stabbed Armor. Armor falled to its knees and collapsed, revealing Spirit master.
"He is all yours Umbra!" Kuma shouted.
"Okay! Taste this!" Umbra shouted and slashed hs keyblade through Spirit master.
"NOOOOOOOO!"


Darkness faded and Umbra and Kuma saw Spirit master on his knees.
"This... cant be... how can i loose? Is it because... im still weak...?" He asked.
"No. Its because of will in our hearts. We are determined to keep everything safe from you, no matter what." Kuma said. Spirit master laughed a bit.
"Funny... so its because... i dont have heart?" He said and vanished with amused face.
Kuma and Umbra did high-five and Shabon hugged Kuma.
"You did it!" She smiled. Then an glowing keyhole appeared in front of them to window.
"This is it? Final keyhole?" Umbra asked. Crace nodded.
"Do it boys. Once you both do it, portal allows you to take as many others as there is keyblades to unlock portal." Crace said. Boys nodded and summoned their keyblades. They unlocked keyhole, that started to shine and shine and finally an portal growed from it. Umbra looked at Kia, who had her good bye face. Umbra didnt wanna leave her behind, but Shabon and Crace would fill her place.
"Okay. Lets go!" Kuma said and walked closer to portal. Then suddenly dark fire hitted him, causing him to fly against wall.
"Kuma!" Shabon shouted, but she also got fired. Umbra then took grasp from Craces and Kias arms and pushed them to portal.
"See you again someday Kuma! Maybe after next nine years!" Umbra said and walked into portal.
"UMBRA! Wait!" Kuma shouted, stood up and tried to run for him, but Umbra then closed the portal. Kuma looked for place, where portal was. He then realised that he was trapped into Realm of Spiritians with Shabon. It might take years before keyholes would be revived their powers.
"What now?" Kuma asked.
"I... dont know..." Shabon said sadly.

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Posted 27 March 2012 - 11:06 AM

Grrrrrrrrrrrrrrr Umbra you jerk!!!!!! You spoiled the happy ending!!!! I just started to like you!!!!!

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Posted 27 March 2012 - 01:20 PM

FINAL CHAPTER


REUNION

Kuma has sitted in edge of balcony for two hours now. He watched at ruined city.
"You know... maybe we could help spiritians to recover this realm." Shabon said and sat next to him. Kuma nodded sadly.
"How could he have done that...?" Kuma asked, looking Shabon to eyes. Girl looked brave and determined like always. She laughed a bit.
"Whats so funny?" Kuma asked.
"You havent change Kuma. You are still naive and innocent hearted. But think about this. Umbra has changed a little." Shabon said and stood up to edge and pointed to stars in order to get Kumas attention.
"Huh? How?"
"He sacrificed his brother in order to save both his mother and friend." Shabon said and Kuma smiled a bit.
"That was nice yes, but still, the annoying way he smiled to me when saying that i could spend another nine years in here."
"Kuma!" Seiji shouted and runned to them two.
"What is it?" Kuma asked. Seiji looked happier than anytime before.
"Have you ever heard of ghost train of DayDawn town?" He asked.
"Yeah, but its just a myth." Shabon said. Kuma looked confused and Shabon started explaining.
"They say that in DayDawn town, an mystic train would appear for a second. If passanger gos in, train takes him or her wherever their heart desires." Shabon said. Hope lightened into Kumas eyes and boy stood up.
"Its just a myth Kuma!" Shabon said.
"You forget that we are in realm that makes myths real..."


Shabon, Kuma, Seiji, Lolia, Clokon, Rafell and Kira stood in front of abandoned train trail. They looked to both directions, but nothing appeared.
"See? I told you." Shabon said.
"Wait! It will come! It haf to!" Kuma said and desired it from all of his heart... and Shiryos too. If train doesnt come, Kuma haf to grow up far away from home and friends. He wouldnt ever see his room again or reunite him and Shabon with Gake. He wouldnt even have able to help Shiryo.
Then weird noice appeared. Kuma opened his eyes and saw how train drived to place. Shabon looked suprised.
"What in the world?" Seiji whispered when train stopped. It opened its doors.
"This is it then?" Shabon sighed. Kuma turned to DayDawn gang. He knew that he wouldnt ever return. He shook hands with Seiji and Clokon and hugged girls. Rafell hugged him so he almost crushed boys bones.
"We are gonna miss you Kuma." Kira cried.
"Keep your spirit strong okay?" Seiji said and Kuma nodded. Kuma and Shabon stepped to train and tear came out of Seijis eye. Same was with Kuma.
"We might go away as a person, but connection through our hearts keeps us together... forever." Shabon said to Kuma and hugged him. Train closed its doors and it headed toward trails. Green light of spirit portal surrounded train from outside as it rided back to Realm of light. Kuma looked from back window and saw nine stars of realm. He smiled and waved goodbyes to Realm of Spiritians.


Magma drank his morning tea at his table, when suddenly an spirit portal opened and an trail came out of it. Master throwed tea to wall in shock and looked how giant train drived to his bedroom. It stopped and Kuma and Shabon walked out from it.
"My cloths! Their back!" Kuma shouted in happiness.
"Shabon? Kuma?" Magma asked like not believing they would be real. He hugged them both and tear came to his eyes.
"I though i lost you both... wheres Umbra and Crace?"
"Umm... long story..." Kuma grinned.
"Master Magma..." One of other pupils said when coming into room. He looked shocked to see magma in his pyjamas, Shabon and Kuma and giant train with glowing spirit portal behind them all in same room.
"Yes? Havent you ever seen us before?" Magma asked.
"Well... umm... Gake has returned from his trip and..."
"GAKE!" Kuma shouted and runned to corridors, pushing pupil against door. Kuma runned down the stairs and toward boys dormitory corridor. He then went into Gakes room, where boy was lying in his bed.
"Kuma?"
"Gake." Kuma smiled.
"Wheres Shabon?"
"Here i am your laziness." Shabon smiled, when coming to room.
"Shabon!" Gake said and tried to stood up, but he didnt manage to do it.
"Whats wrong?" Shabon asked.
"I got in this fight with Diana and... i used the darkness to win her. I took Niles half of my heart back and i managed to resist the darkness, but then i got these pains. Ken helped me back to here." Gake said.
"So, do you mind to tell me whats going on then?" Gake asked and Kuma smiled and was ready to tell everything, except that Shiryos heart was sleeping in his. He feared that Magma would find out and force Kuma to get rid of it. However, Kuma was happy to be reunited with his friends again. Trio would never broke apart again.


Now here is ending gredit music XD. close yr eyes and imagine ending gredits.


THE END

Final Mix chapter to be posted in 29th day (in europes time) It reveals more about future stories.

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Posted 27 March 2012 - 02:07 PM

OMG!!! That story was so damm awsome! Keep writing, cuz you rock bro!

I laughed so hard when that train appeared in Magma's room.

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Posted 27 March 2012 - 05:55 PM

Wow you even put a song at the end. :)

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Posted 28 March 2012 - 02:05 PM

KH ANCIENTS: REALM OF SPIRITIANS FINAL MIX


CHAPTER ONE: MAN BEYOND THE MASK

"Its down here." Seiji said and leaded Umbra and Kia into crystalized room, where Shabon slept while ago. Umbra didnt see anything unusual in room, except crystals shined red instead of green.
"Your sure about this? It looks like room just changed color thats all." Umbra asked. Kia looked suspecting.
"What is it?" Umbra asked.
"Nothing." Girl answered.
"Open." Seiji said. Umbra and Kia walked behind seat, seeing that an small hole appeared to seat. There was an computer system.
"I wonder what this is then..." Seiji said and crawled closer and started to enter codes.
"What are you guys doing here?" Kuma asked, when he came with Shabon to room.
"Seiji tells us that below this room is large amount of darkness." Umbra explained.
"It isnt just an big trouma then?" Kuma suggested.
"No. This is something else."
"Hey. I got something." Seiji said. Crystals started to shine now dangerously red and light moved forward to back wall of room. Crystals started to move away, revealing an door with eight round shaped holes. Umbra walked closer and searched the door.
"These holes looks like an perfect place for spirit fragments." Umbra grinned and summoned all spirit fragments. He then placed them to door and door moved slowly open, revealing an giant, massive dark corridor behind it.
"Whoa! This is powerful stuff all right!" Umbra said, feeling great darkness beyond that door.
"Hmmm... we cant use armors at this realm, so we cant go forward?" Shabon suggested and Kuma agreed. Umbra looked at darkness. It felt dangerous yet so calling. He had to walk in no matter what. Darkness wouldnt effect on him after all, no matter how powerful it is.
"I go check it out. You girls stay here." Umbra said and grinned to Kuma and Seiji.
"Be careful okay?" Kia said and Umbra showed his thumb to her, before walking into most massive source of darkness he ever had change to experience.


Umbra looked around him. It was an giant round room with single giant throne at other side of room. Throne was so big it almost touched the roof.
Umbra saw an man, wearing an mask and dark jacket. Was he sleeping?
"You have come this close? Without getting taken over by darkness?"
"Huh?" Umbra turned around and didnt see dark orridor anywhere. Voice was in his head and it surrounded him.
"Who... are you?" Masked man moved his head and turned his red eyes toward him. Umbra moved one step backwards. Man rised his hand and summoned an sword to his hand.
"Keyblade?" Umbra asked frightenedly and summoned his own too.
"I see... you are strong hearted too? Well then..."
Umbra glared at man.
"Lets testify you..."
Man flashed away from throne. Umbra searched for him, but he didnt have able to see him. Then man appeared from nowhere, hitting Umbra while flying right above him and vanishing again. He then appeared with ten copies of him around Umbra, though they kept far distance to him. They rised keyblade and shooted an golden, glowing chains to Umbra, tieing him up. Then chains started to give him an electric shock.
"Gaaaaaah!" Umbra shouted and didnt have able to move. Umbra was sure man smiled. He then gathered all his powers, charging darkness in his body. Umbra then pushed that power outside from his body, causing an black explosion, that brake chains. Man didnt move any inch, when Umbra runned to him. Umbra waved his keyblade, but man dissappeared steps farther everytime, when Umbras keyblade was about to hit his stomach.
"Why dont you fight? Fight you coward!" Umbra shouted in rage.
"My sleep is over..."
"Stop talking nonsense!" Umbra shouted and striked man against wall. Man didnt show any signs of being frightened. He turned transparent, causing Umbra to fall. He then walked through him, turned back to his normal and hitted Umbra to back of head with powerful strike oh hand.
"Uggh!"
Umbra felt like he is gonna fell unconscious. His every muscle was weak and tired to even stood up. He however stood up no matter what. His determination would keep him strong.
"Your still standing?"
"Yeah. Im... gonna take you...OUT!" Umbra said and rised his keyblade to pointing to man. Man watched emotionlessly his efforts to keep consciousness. Man runned to him throwing chain on his wrist, but Umbra suprised him by pulling chain suddenly to opposite direction, making man fall. He then attacked him and striked to man, when he was trying to stood up. Man turned around and slammed Umbra to air and Umbra flied against throne, making back of seat to broke apart.
"You are nothing compared to me... however..."
Umbra looked how man looked at him.
"There is something else in you..."
"Huh? STOP!" Um,bra shouted and runned after man, but man vanished.
"You are definently not same with him..."
Umbra looked around and was sure man was completely gone by now. He saw how dark corridor opened again and he immediatly runned into it, thinking about meaning of mans words.

SECRET CHAPTER can be opened once certain member has answered in five questions. I made it just for fun, but i post SECRET CHAPTER once i have answers so wait.

#55 replika13

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Posted 29 March 2012 - 01:18 AM

Questions have been answered. Now i present you SECRET CHAPTER. (PS. this chapter might not make any sense, cause it leaves mysteries and quotes you might starting to wonder at some point.)

KH ANCIENTS: REALM OF SPIRITIANS FINAL MIX


CHAPTER TWO: SECRET ENDING- HIDDEN TRAILS

"Truth sealed beyond eyes that lie"

Boy, wearing an mask and big jacket walked through the rain under the bridge. He heard echoing voice and saw train, passing under the bridge almost below him. He still kept walking. DayFaders, dark creatures started to appear from shadows. Boy started running from them, but they appeared more and more from trees and buildings. Boy stopped into playground and summoned his keyblade.

"Keyblade... mysterious weapon..."

He spinned, annihilating two DayFaders. He then kicked one away, when it tried to jump on him. He jumped backwards in top of slide and destroyed DayFaders when they tried to climb and jump to him, covering slide under them. Lightning flashed.
Boy looked to the sky. An man with similiar jacket than his dived toward him. Boy then hitted DayFader away and jumped so powerfully, it destroyed slide. He throwed his keyblade to man, who throwed his to him and they met in the air, starting to fight with each others keyblades.

"An memorable moment that was forgotten"

Keyblade hitted keyblade all over and over again until they landed to climbing rack. They immediatly jumped to different directions, destroying rack. Man rised his hand, summoning lightnings toward boy, who rised his keyblade, shooting beams of light toward lightnings.

"Shadowless Tower"

Boy runned to man and tried to hit him with his keyblade, but man dodged by jumping, making boy to cut swing from the middle. DayFaders appeared around man, who started to fight with them. man spinned and waved his keyblade, destroying more and more DayFaders, until he had enough and throwed an lightning to them. Boy then runned toward him, casting blizzard magic into mans face. He then hitted man to chest.

"Confusion...manipulation...darkness..."

Man jumped to train tunnel and jumped into trains roof. Boy jumped after him and runned toward him. Man dodged quickly keyblades strike and jumped to another train that passed first train, going to opposite direction. Boy jumped after him and shot light while man shot darkness. Both forces ended up to impact and caused another explosion.

"Resbondation"

"You are definentley not same with him..."

KH ANCIENTS, HIDDEN TRAILS

"Boy whos heart was hurt so many times..."
THE END
hope you enjoyed it :D Story will continue in KH ancients: Dark Quest.
Thank you everyone ^_^

Edited by replika13, 29 March 2012 - 08:35 AM.


#56 ami

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Posted 04 April 2012 - 02:59 PM

Wow it's just like kh final mix.