PillowHead 569 Posted January 24, 2012 Keyla scares me... Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Robbie the Wise 5,050 Posted January 24, 2012 awesome job keep up the good work Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
dusk 910 Posted January 24, 2012 Cool story bro! Keyla is pretty scary person, but she is awesome! 2 JohnLuig and Lu Xun reacted to this Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Lu Xun 2,069 Posted January 24, 2012 Hey guys! This one is a bit short, if compared to the others, but even so, I hope you enjoy it just as much as you've enjoyed the others ---------------- Chapter 4.1 - The new Planet Keyla managed to get in the new planet shortly after departing from the main airplane, and there, she picked her bag, and left the transport in a random place. She was not dumb; she knew that if they found her near, or inside it, it would be more than obvious that she did something wrong. And she knew that someone would start searching for that transport. Keyla was also very pretty. She had blue eyes, black straight hair and would surely use it as a weapon -- to taunt the men that had gone in the planet in the previous days, and try to get advantages -- which was her goal for everything. She was never truly satisfied with anything. She loved to get more and more. She had fallen in a beautiful part of the new planet -- filled with flowers, a lot of little and cute animals, near a big and mysterious forest. Compared to what Earth had turned into after all of these years, this place looked like a paradise. http-~~-//www.youtube.com/watch?v=z0JVGfAEU7k&feature=autoplay&list=PLE137323A23C554FD&lf=mh_lolz&playnext=18 “So, this is the new planet? Not bad, I must say. Seems way better than that old Earth....” she said while looking around. “Hahahahahaha. I was successful. No one is ever going to stop me now... I will take everything this new planet has to offer! I must start to search for that magical powder they were talking about.... But... first I need to get out of this place... If anyone sees me with that transport, I might as well be in a terrible situation... I’ll head for the north.” she said. Then, she started walking towards the north, instead of going into the forest, which at her eyes, could be something dangerous. She was not a person that had many fears, but she was a little tired, so anything dangerous now would not be very good for her. Happy, she started to jump around like she had gained a lot of money and was very proud of that. But in reality, a new world of opportunities had just appeared in her life. That was more than enough for her to be ‘happy’. Just to think of how many things she could get, how many innocents she could fool, and how her old, boring life would never return was truly amazing. Meanwhile, on Earth, Vear had a dream where she saw her mother and other members of her family that had already left this world, and every one of them said that the best thing she could was exit Earth. So, as soon as she woke up, she was truly decided to get the quickest airplane to the other planet, and maybe even reunite with her daughter again. But when she turned the TV on, she heard of the accident, but it was also said that a woman managed to get the special transport, and was probably in the other planet by now. Not all her hope had died. A little bit was still alive. It surely could be Keyla! Knowing her, and her way of acting, it was more than possible that she was that woman mentioned in the journal. But when she heard that the woman killed another woman, and seriously injured the captain, who later was found dead, she started to be very worried about Keyla. But standing on Earth would not help with anything. Only going to the other planet and seeking Keyla for herself was the only way to find out the truth. However, because of that accident, the airplanes were stopped for a few days. The next one would only take off in three days. She quickly went to get two tickets -- for her and Jason. But she did not manage to get for the first one, so they would only be able to go there in four days. “What? We’re going there? You sure?” Jason replied when Vear told him that they had only four days remaining on Earth. “Yes, there’s no doubt about it. I wish to live more years, and who knows, even find your mom once again?” Vear replied. She did not tell Jason about the accident, nor did she let him turn on the TV, where he would end up discovering everything. But he noticed that something was very strange in all of that. Still, he decided to just go and seek the answers in the other planet. His and Vear’s days on Earth were counted. It was more than needed to change everything on their lives. “I just hope I’m doing the right thing... Oh, my God, please, protect me, Jason.... and Keyla too.” Vear said this while praying alone. During these three days that there were no airplanes to the new planet, small groups of soldiers were being sent -- in secret, of course -- to the new planet, in order to find more about this mysterious woman, and what happened to her and the transport. “Stay tuned for 4.2! [that song will be Keyla's theme for now] 13 Hunter Hawk, Luna☆, Kirie and 10 others reacted to this Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Akihiko 1,628 Posted January 24, 2012 Ah, então você assiste a novela Awesome chapter as always. Good job. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
SoraKH 793 Posted January 24, 2012 Good job. Keep it up. ^^ Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Leaxel 178 Posted January 24, 2012 Awesome! Very good chapter as always. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Luna☆ 108 Posted January 24, 2012 Amazing chapter I can't wait for more! Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
-Omaega- 629 Posted January 24, 2012 whoa this is amazing , your history are great as always. “So, this is the new planet? Not bad, I must say. 1 PillowHead reacted to this Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
rikunobodyxiii 700 Posted January 24, 2012 Good stuff, man. Vear and Jason going to the new world shall make for some interesting possibilities. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Sora's Baby 729 Posted January 24, 2012 Ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh! Me likey. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Kirie 3,489 Posted January 25, 2012 nice story Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
coolwings 1,546 Posted January 25, 2012 This is awesome....... I really like it, keep up the good work Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Silvia Kuroi 1,480 Posted January 25, 2012 I like how the story is spreading out so far. It's very interesting and I think your characters (Especially Keyla) really have a good personaity. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Lu Xun 2,069 Posted January 25, 2012 Hey guys! As I won't be on for a while -- until Monday, I decided to do this for you (: Enjoy! Chapter 4.2 - The right thing to do On Earth, it was really late, at least in where Vear and Jason lived. So, they went to bed. But Vear could not help but be worried about what might have happened with Keyla. And hiding it from Jason did not seem to be the right thing -- but the boy’s been through so much -- he has now been ‘abandoned’ by his mother... The possibility of knowing that she might be dead, or worse, that she turned into a murdered would be too much for him. But Jason was no fool. He knew that something was wrong. Vear had been really strange lately. In that night, he could not sleep well, and at 3:00a.m, Vear came and tried to make him sleep. Worried, she sang a son she used to sing to Keyla. http-~~-//www.youtube.com/watch?v=oxBL-Djs2Js&feature=related My beloved baby, Sleep, Sleep, Leave this world of pain, and go to your own world, where you can be anywhere, you can be happy, and no one can take anything from you. Even if just for a few hours, may you rest peacefully, after another day in this place. May the angels take care of you, and not let any harm befalls you. There’s no limit in this world that exists on your head. Don’t worry, I will be here, watching carefully you, my dear. After singing the song, Vear noticed that Jason finally feel asleep. She cried a lot while returning to her room. It was painful, and sad, to remember how Keyla was a cute, kind kid. The memories of she singing to her came over her head, and so she kept crying alone in her room. “My dear.... I will find you.... I promise.... We will be together.... I’ll save you from this darkness that has entered on you.... Don’t worry.... We’re coming.. Everything will be just as it was when you were a kid.” Vear said while crying. In the next day, Jason was still wondering what was wrong. He stood even more suspicious when Vear said she was going to the cemetery later, to see all of her dead family members once again. “I want to go, too.” he said. “No... Cemeteries aren’t place for fifteen years old boys... unless it’s absolutely necessary, one should stay out of it... It’s the saddest place in this world.... And we know we’ll end up in there one day.” Vear replied. “But grandmother... I don’t want to see you sad... I know you’ll return sad... Maybe if I go with you...” he said. “What? There’s nothing you can do. We’re humans. We have feelings. And of course I’ll be sad, and probably cry -- they were all part of my family... You’ll pass through this one day, too... It’s best to wait until that day.” she replied. “Grandmother...” Jason whispered. Then, some hour later, Vear left Jason alone, and asked him to take care of the home, and also not to open the door to strangers. Meanwhile, in the new planet, Keyla found a small place, where a few people that had gone there before her were living. She used her knife to hurt herself a bit, and to pretend she was just a victim. “Ahahaha. More fools -- Amazing!” Keyla said. “Now, to start the show....” “ Awwwwwwwww... It hurts..... Damn you, wild beasts.... I could be dead now.... aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaarghhhhhhhhhhh” Keyla screamed. Then, a young man appeared and asked her what had happened. “Are you alright, lady?” the man asked. “Of course I’m not you idi---- Aaarrrghhh... Help me, pleaseeee!" Keyla screamed. “Okay, I’ll take you to the small hospital we have here. Follow me.” the man said. “Yes, it worked. Ahaahahahahahaha! Let’s go, baby. Today we’ll have fun...” she thought to herself. 12 rikunobodyxiii, Static15, Leaxel and 9 others reacted to this Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Akihiko 1,628 Posted January 25, 2012 “Of course I’m not you idi---- Aaarrrghhh... Help me, pleaseeee! “ LOOOOOL 1 Dehmon reacted to this Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
rikunobodyxiii 700 Posted January 25, 2012 Vear and Jason better hurry before Keyla tires of the idiots. 1 Lu Xun reacted to this Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Hunter Hawk 392 Posted January 25, 2012 Awww I just love the song! Did you write yourself or copy it from somwhere else. And Keyla you better not do anything stupid or I'll personaly come here and kick your evil ass!!!! 1 coolwings reacted to this Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
coolwings 1,546 Posted January 25, 2012 Wow awesome story I loved it.......... I really can't wait for next chapter........ You are very talented Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Robbie the Wise 5,050 Posted January 25, 2012 another winner dude Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Lu Xun 2,069 Posted January 25, 2012 Awww I just love the song! Did you write yourself or copy it from somwhere else. And Keyla you better not do anything stupid or I'll personaly come here and kick your evil ass!!!! Yes, hawk, I created it myself ~~ ----------------------- And once again, thank you all who have read/commented/liked the story. I really appreciate it. That's what makes me want to write more and more! For now, I'll be off, my dear readers. I'll post more on Monday, probably. See you then. Take care Again, thank for your support ~~ 2 Hunter Hawk and rikunobodyxiii reacted to this Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Axtwyt 500 Posted January 25, 2012 She's crazy... Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Leaxel 178 Posted January 25, 2012 Keyla has seriously gone mad I mean HOLY SH*T! Another good chapter! See you on Monday! Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Sora's Baby 729 Posted January 25, 2012 I'm gald my mother isn't Keyla. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites