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#1 Lu Xun

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Posted 04 January 2012 - 06:07 PM

The Future Can Be Changed

Chapter 1 - The First Important Decision

In the year of 2258, Humans had found a new planet to live. Earth had been seriously damaged, and with time, had been turned into a place where most of the life could not survive for much longer -- there were poisonous gases around the atmosphere, insects had gotten smarter, and so they knew when to attack, injure, and easily transmit diseases.

Besides that, new kinds of wild animals had started to appear -- some were like a mix of a bear with an alligator, other resembled the dinosaur, which had disappeared from Earth centuries ago. It was really hard to keep living on Earth -- and some people refused to leave it, and most of them ended up dying -- either by a disease or by being attacked by these wild animals.

In the middle of this, there was a small family, which was composed by a fifteen-years old boy, a thirty-eight years woman, and a sixty-four years old woman. They were respectively named Jason, Keyla, and Vear. They were having a hard time deciding whether they would stay here, on Earth, and have risks of being killed or dying at any second, or going to the recently discovered new planet.

Vear wanted to stay, because all of her family had lived and died here -- her mom, dad, brother, cousins and grandparents -- but Keyla did not want to, because she wanted to live for many more years. Jason was not sure what he would do -- because he liked his grandmother a lot, but also wished to live a lot more.

The people were being sent every day to the other planet -- by that year, there were about 10,5 million people on Earth, and only 500 thousand could be taken by it each day. Vear then told her daughter and grandson that she would think a bit more, and give a proper reply in the following day.

Keyla was desperate to go to the other planet -- she had heard that there was a magical powder, which could only be found in there that could give some special powers to the people. She was a bit selfish, and actually would go alone, even if the rest of her family refused to go.

Vear was still deciding, but it would be truly painful for her to leave all her memories and dead family behind. She loved them so much, and once she went to the other planet, there was no way to come back -- at least that was what they had informed the people on the TV.

Jason would follow his grandmother’s decision, even if it cost him his life -- he loved her so much -- more than his own mother. In the past, his mother had ‘abandoned’ him, because she left all the responsibility with her mother, and instead started to talk with to unknown people on her cell phone.


It was time to go to bed -- none of them could easily sleep. It took a while, because they stood a few hours thinking about what they would do in the following day. As the sun appeared, each one of them had decided what they would do now. They woke up almost at the same time, and decided to first have breakfast, before having the discussion where each one would say and defend why they thought that was better.


*If you liked the story, click 'Follow Topic' so you can know when I update!!*

Drawing of Keyla with the beautiful dress: http://kh13.com/foru...885#entry553885
Chapter 2.1 - Terrible Memories -->http://kh13.com/foru...ed/page__st__20
Chapter 2.2 - The Past --> http://kh13.com/foru...post__p__529908
Chapter 3.1 - The Decision --> http://kh13.com/foru...819#entry531819
Chapter 3.2 - Deceptions --> http://kh13.com/foru...990#entry531990
Chapter 3.3 - Everything for Survival --> http://kh13.com/foru...d/page__st__120
Chapter 3.4 - A successful escape --> http://kh13.com/foru...609#entry542609

Chapter 4.1 - The new planet --> http://kh13.com/foru...371#entry546371
Chapter 4.2 - The right thing to do --> http://kh13.com/foru...008#entry547008
Chapter 4.3 - A new goal --> http://kh13.com/foru...639#entry552639
Chapter 4.4 - The truth --> http://kh13.com/foru...479#entry553479

Chapter 4.5 - Break of trust --> http://kh13.com/foru...479#entry553479

#2 Sora's Baby

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Posted 04 January 2012 - 06:13 PM

I like this story.

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Posted 04 January 2012 - 06:16 PM

Nice , I like it . continue writing new historys.

year 2258 , that means the world doesn't end in 2012 , yujuuuuu

#4 Tails

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Posted 04 January 2012 - 06:27 PM

The story is very good. (:

#5 Obi-wan

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Posted 04 January 2012 - 06:36 PM

Pretty good so far

#6 Kingroxas

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Posted 04 January 2012 - 06:44 PM

i like this story its awsome 1:awsome the world is not going to end at 2012 2:where did you hear this 3:write more of this and make your own book about this

#7 inori

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Posted 04 January 2012 - 06:53 PM

wow!!! 2258 is like the future!!!! =o

#8 rikunobodyxiii

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Posted 04 January 2012 - 06:58 PM

Hmm. The setting is interesting. This sounds cool.

#9 Dehmon

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Posted 04 January 2012 - 06:58 PM

I'm reading it ^^
I'm curious about it :P Wait till i finish reading.

#10 Dehmon

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Posted 04 January 2012 - 07:01 PM

I Loved it a lot. u should add more dramatic moments in the future of the future chapters

#11 Luna☆

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Posted 04 January 2012 - 07:02 PM

I love the story it's great, can't wait for more! :D

#12 Shana09

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Posted 04 January 2012 - 07:09 PM

Love the story xD nice beginning but since this is chapter 1.... the characters should have been explained a little before maybe by dialogue or something else, makes it kind of interesting, this sounds like an summary from the back of the book ^_^ but really amazing i don't hate it at all

#13 Lu Xun

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Posted 04 January 2012 - 07:21 PM

Thank you all ^^ I'll post more tomorrow :)

Love the story xD nice beginning but since this is chapter 1.... the characters should have been explained a little before maybe by dialogue or something else, makes it kind of interesting, this sounds like an summary from the back of the book http://kh13.com/forum/public/style_emoti... but really amazing i don't hate it at all


Yeah, you're right. I should name this the Prologue or Something, but don't worry, the next chapter will be explaining a lot ;)

#14 VENROXAS

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Posted 04 January 2012 - 07:21 PM

A very interesting story so far, Please continue on

#15 Shana09

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Posted 04 January 2012 - 07:28 PM

Thank you all ^^ I'll post more tomorrow http://kh13.com/forum/public/style_emoti...


Yeah, you're right. I should name this the Prologue or Something, but don't worry, the next chapter will be explaining a lot http://kh13.com/forum/public/style_emoti...


lol alright ^_^ so your going to add this weekly or what?

#16 Lu Xun

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Posted 04 January 2012 - 07:29 PM

lol alright http://kh13.com/forum/public/style_emoti... so your going to add this weekly or what?


Nah, only when I feel like writing more and have good ideas on my mind =D

#17 Shana09

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Posted 04 January 2012 - 07:30 PM

Nah, only when I feel like writing more and have good ideas on my mind =D


lol xD alright good luck then

#18 Cinder Fall

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Posted 04 January 2012 - 07:56 PM

I gotta say this is pretty damn good, way to go and keep writing this is perfect!

#19 darkchaser

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Posted 04 January 2012 - 08:02 PM

not bad. I'll keep an eye out for this :D

#20 SparxofFlame

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Posted 04 January 2012 - 08:34 PM

Very nice, very nice.

....What, did you think there was a 'but' in that sentence? You make me laugh.





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