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#21 Anthony17

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Posted 16 January 2012 - 01:47 PM

I'm just worried about what will happen next to zach the most

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Posted 17 January 2012 - 08:35 AM

Very interesting! : epic... >:3 !!!

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Posted 21 February 2012 - 08:29 AM

Very interesting! http://kh13.com/forum/public/style_emoti... epic... >:3 !!!


Awwwwww Thanks ^_^

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Posted 21 February 2012 - 09:18 AM

Chapter 7
Bring them back…

Guard: Move it!
Yvaine: You can’t make me move!
Tristan: I won’t move too!
Guard: How about now? *summons a dark ball*

Yvaine and Tristan without any other choice continued following the guard. They entered a big room where a man with a hood was sitting on a throne. The man stood up revealing his self. He was tall and he had red eyes.

Tristan: Who are you?
???: Let me introduce… I’m Delio
Yvaine: What do you want from us?
Delio: Oh honey…. You really I think you know what I want…
Tristan: You are never getting our powers!
Delio: Watch me! *claps hands* Take them to the dungeon. I’ll deal with them later… Right now I need to inform the master…
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Zack opened his eyes. He was on some leaves in a forest. The sky was dark and from there, he could see on a mountain, a big dark castle. He stood up and looked around. He saw his shoe and his medal next to it. He picked it up and wore it. He immediately got his energy back and his entire wounds were healed. He continued walking in the forest searching for an exit.
Suddenly a monster appeared. It had red eyes and fire on its back. It started chasing Zack and he started running. Zack jumped over a rock and a branch. He summoned his fireblade and he tried to attack the monster. But this only caused the monster more anger and more fire appeared on its back.

???: Be careful! A man with a hood shouted.
Zack: Wha- ?

The man jumped in front of Zack an attacked the monster. He used blizzard and some other spells that stunned the monster.

???: Go hide!
Zack: Okay.

Zack ran behind a tree and watched the whole fight. The man jumped on the monster. He said some words and the blade of the sword that he was holding became icy. Quickly the man stabbed the monster right into his heart. The monster exploded and vanished.

???: You okay?
Zack: Yeah… I guess.. Thank you for saving me
???: No problem. My name is Selk. I’m a spell explorer
Zack: I’m Zack… Um a Wizard.
Selk: Well… What are you doing here? It’s really dangerous.
Zack: Well… My friends were kidnapped…. I need to save them
Selk: You know where are did they go?
Zack: No… But… Let me just think…

Zack closed his eyes. An image flashed into his head. It was a castle in a dark place. He opened his eyes and pointed at the castle on the mountain.

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Master: Flynn…? Are you okay?
Flynn: Yeah… Did we defeat everyone?
Master: Yes…
Flynn: Well… Now I need to find them. I’m sure they are in danger
Master: Off you go Flynn… Bring them safe back…
Flynn: I will…

Flynn jumped in a portal and he vanished.


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Posted 24 February 2012 - 08:48 AM

Awesome new chapter. Can't wait for next chapter, I hope it wont take as long as this one.

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Posted 24 February 2012 - 09:07 AM

good work there ^^

#27 SoraKH

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Posted 24 February 2012 - 11:38 AM

Awesome new chapter. Can't wait for next chapter, I hope it wont take as long as this one.

good work there ^^


Aww thank youuuu :))

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Posted 01 March 2012 - 09:25 PM

good job!

#29 SoraKH

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Posted 02 March 2012 - 07:40 AM

good job!


^_^ Thaaanks!!!! :)

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Posted 07 April 2012 - 01:36 PM

Chapter 8

Selk and Zack were following the path of the forest being careful of monsters.

Zack: So… Selk what is a spell explorer?
Selk: Oh well… Spell explorers don’t have an inner power or something. They are born normal people and they study magic because they have a charisma at learning spells.
Zack: Wow… And… What do you know about… The chosen ones?
Selk: The chosen ones? They are special people that have a secret inne power that is waiting to be revealed. When they reveal their powers they will save the “Kingdom Of Elements”

Zack looked in front of him and continue walking . He thought the things that Hope told to him. He wasn’t sure if he could trust Selk and tell him that he was a chosen one. Suddenly some monsters appeared out of nowhere. This time they had more fire on their back and a ruby on their head.

Selk: Run! Hide!!! *points at tree*
Zack: But…
Selk: Just Go!!

Zack hid behind the tree and watched Selk fighting. The monsters were increasing their amount. Zack summoned his fireblade and run toward a monster.

Selk: What are you doing?!?!
Zack: I’m… I’m a chosen one!!!
Selk: What the-
Zack: Right now we need to focus fight!!
Selk: Um… Uhhh okay
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Yvaine and Tristan were closed into a dark dungeon.

Yvaine: We need to get out of here!
Tristan: Ok Columbus how do we do that?
Yvaine: I know! Try to use your powers!
Tristan: For what?
Yvaine: Just do it!

Tristan waved his hands and a small plant came out of the ground. Then Yvaine cast a water spell that caused the plant to grow very big and tied their hands and legs.

Tristan: Now what?
Yvaine: Well… Not as I planned…
Tristan: Really? What was your plan?!
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Flynn was flying to the lanes between with a spell he learned from the Master. He saw something link an orb not really far from him. He approached the mysterious object. It was a world, a new world! He tried to land on the ground but he lost his balance and he fall down a hill landing into a pile of water.

???: Oh what a surprise! Take him away!
Flynn: No , No , NO!!!!!
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After the fight was over Zack fell on the ground and started breathing heavily with Selk at his side.

Selk: You- a- Chosen- Fire- huh?
Zack: I’m a chosen one. Hard to believe huh?
Selk: Yes eh I mean no um how?
Zack: Well I don’t know. And now the organization of dark has two chosen ones. I need to save them!
Selk: Wow! Sorry kid but I can’t help you. There is no way I’m stepping my leg in that castle
Zack: Okay then. I guess I’ll go on my on *starts walking towards the village*
Selk: No! Stop! Eh come with me.

Zack and Selk walked for five minutes and they stopped in front of a bush. Selk moved the bush revealing a deep hole.
Selk: Come on! Follow me.

Selk jumped into the hole and then Zack. It was like going down a water park slide. The hole was now a tunnel going down down and down. Zack thought that he was going towards the center of earth. But then… What if Selk wanted to do something to him..? After all he was a Spell Hunter. Maybe he wanted Zack’s powers. Zack was feeling scared and betrayed. At last he saw light coming towards him. It was the end of the tunnel. Only a few seconds until he would land on the floor of who-knows-where. He thought how he could escape, all the possible ways that he could take down Selk and escape. He closed his eyes and fell on the ground. He was officially out of the tunnel. With his eyes still shut he touched the ground. I was wood. Warm a wood. He opened his eyes. He was in a huge room. It had machines and computers with elves working on the computers and others reading a ton of books.
Zack: Oh my Gosh! We are at Santa’s workshop!

But looking with a closer look the machines Zack started panicking.

Zack: You are going to suck the powers out of me and then bury me at the center of earth and oh my god you are a jerk and-
Selk:What are you talking about? Welcome to the Formation Center!
Zack:F-Formation what?

An elf approached them. It looked like the head elf because dhe was the only woman around.

Head Elf:Formation Center. Citizens of light and magic can own their inner formation with our help and our machines. Inner formations are usually animals like different kind of birds, quadrupeds or reptiles. Formations will help you move faster from place to place or even crawl through tiny holes etc. Are you ready to get your Inner Formation?

Zack: How do you remember all this?
Elf: Kid! I made this speech 14567832846124 times.
Selk: So are you ready
Zack: Your asking?!? Ready as I’ll EVER be!

Edited by SoraKH, 07 April 2012 - 01:37 PM.


#31 coolwings

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Posted 08 April 2012 - 01:04 AM

Awesome! Please keep writing, this is an awesome story!

#32 SoraKH

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Posted 08 April 2012 - 03:32 AM

Awesome! Please keep writing, this is an awesome story!


Thank you Coolwings BFF!!!!!

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Posted 08 April 2012 - 03:59 AM

Wow, this getting really interesting. Good job!

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Posted 08 April 2012 - 10:46 AM

Wow, this getting really interesting. Good job!


Thank you Hawki!

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Posted 06 September 2012 - 05:05 AM

Chapter 9

Zack followed the head Elf. They stopped in front of a huge machine. It was something like a capsule. A glass capsule. Around the capsule there were a lot of computers and other strange machines. The Head Elf sat on a chair with a big computer screen in front of her. She pressed a button and the capsule opened.

Head Elf: Zack, May you please enter the capsule.

Zack slipped into the capsule and it closed. He could not hear a thing from outside. Suddenly he heard a voice coming from the top of the capsule.

Head Elf: Okay Zack. I need you to clear your mind
Zack: But, How am I supposed to do that?
Head Elf: Just think about your favorite animal.

Zack tried to “clear” his mind and think about an animal. He remembered one time when he was with Lenny, They talked about animals… Lenny’s favorite animal was the Hawk. A beautiful bird with big wings… Zack thought of the Hawk… Beautiful feathers, Big eyes and sharp nails. Suddenly something started burning his wrist. Something like a mark. Then the machine got crazy and the capsule opened. Selk helped Zack to get out of the capsule and stand up.

Selk: Are you okay?
Zack: Yes well… I think so… What is this?

Zack showed Selk the mark that appeared on his wrist. It was a hawk, it looked just how he imagined it!

Selk: Well this is your animal formation.. whenever you want to transform into a hawk you just have to touch the mark and you will become a hawk!

Zack: Wow! Can I try?
Head Elf: Yes go ahead.

Zack brought his left hand to his right wrist. He gently touched the hawk mark and it started glowing. Then it started shining and the light covered Zack. He felt his body become smaller and something furry coming out of his skin. He felt his mouth growing and becoming harder and his eyes bigger. When the light vanished Zack was no longer a boy he was a Hawk!

Zack: WOW!! This is so cool!!

He moved up and down his wings and started flying. Selk touched his ankle too and he transformed into a wolf.

Selk: So. Are we going to save your friends or what?
They exited the secret hideout and head towards the big dark castle.

Edited by SoraKH, 06 September 2012 - 05:06 AM.


#36 coolwings

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Posted 06 September 2012 - 05:14 AM

I want moreeeeee! xD

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Posted 06 September 2012 - 02:25 PM

Awwww he turned into a hawk!!! How nice! Keep writing!!!

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Posted 22 September 2012 - 04:37 AM

Chapter 10

Yvaine: Tristan what the heck are you doing?
Tristan: Shut up I need to concentrate…


Tristan and Yvaine were locked inside a cage and their hand were tied with big and heavy chains.


Tristan: I’ll try to open hole with my magic. But these chains…
Yvaine: They are Fireblade chains. Only fire can break them.
Tristan: So what do we do now?
Yvaine: I don’t know…

Suddenly the cage door opened and Delio came in.

Delio: Oh hello again!have your minds made up?
Yvaine: No! We will never give you our powers!
Delio: I’ll give you some time to re think it…

Delio snapped his fingers and a spark flew towards Yvaine.

Tristan: Yvaine?! Are you okay?


But it was too late, Yvaine was already unconscious


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Flynn was walking through the dark forest.. It was really cold and it looked that it will rain. He was exhausted and weak from the fight he had. He walked with heavy steps heading to the unknown. Suddenly he heard someone talking and he hid into some bushes. They were two cloaked mans from the organization of dark. He carefully tried to hear what they were talking about…

???: So Vix did you hear the news?
Vix: What?
???: Delio caught them! Well two of them…
???: What?! We have to hurry! Come on Sint! Quickly he will call a meeting! We don’t have to miss it!

Flynn tried to figure out a plan. Suddenly it came to him. He continued following them but he remained hidden. He was trying to focus for an air spell but he didn’t have to lose them either. When he focused enough to figure out the spell he aimed to one of the men. He released an aura that sucked the man into the bushes.


Sint: Vix are you okay?

A cloaked man came out of the bushes.

Sint: Oh good. What was that? Anyway we have to hurry! Come on!


Only this time the cloaked man was no other than Flynn.


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Zack landed on a tree and transformed into a human again.

Zack: WOW!! Man this is so cool!
Selk: I know right?
Zack: Hahaha yeah!

Zack jumped off the tree and continued walking with hims human form next to Selk.

Selk: Hmp… So how did you discover that you were the chosen one?
Zack: Well Hope… Hope!? Oh no I almost forgot about her!
Selk: What who is hope?
Zack: Maybe Yvaine will know…
Selk: Zack!? Hello?
Zack: What? Oh.. Um we have to go to the castle quick!

Zack touched his wrist transformed again into a Hawk and flew towards the castle.

Edited by SoraKH, 22 September 2012 - 04:38 AM.


#39 coolwings

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Posted 22 September 2012 - 01:46 PM

Coolwings approves of this awesome chapter and hopes for more xD





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