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#21 kirie

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Posted 02 November 2011 - 05:58 PM

intresting story

#22 XIIISwords

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Posted 02 November 2011 - 06:28 PM

Wow, great story so far. The Queen reminds me of Smeagol, but powerful.

How many chapters are you planning?

#23 FLASH45

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Posted 02 November 2011 - 06:31 PM

YAY! u tryed my idea :P

#24 Hazimie

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Posted 02 November 2011 - 06:55 PM

awesome,man......make it this story extra-vaganza! :D

#25 dusk

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Posted 07 November 2011 - 03:09 PM

Good writing, keep it up!

#26 Indecypher

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Posted 15 January 2013 - 09:03 AM

I like it so far. The execution of the family was pretty heavy, but a good way to show how far the queen would go. “Gate to Hell” Another awesome name.



#27 Shigehiko

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Posted 03 March 2013 - 08:54 PM

Impressive!  The Queen is very creepy, and I love how you made her so evil.  I hope to see more of this story being update soon, because I want more!  More, more, more, more more! :D



#28 Weiss

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Posted 04 March 2013 - 01:50 PM

omg

this is amazing

The second chapter was definitely great and the character development in it was excellent. I guess you're not making this anymore though since this was back in 2011. Even though I hope you do one day. But still, nice work on it! It was great :)







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