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Lu Xun's stories : What power can do with people
Started by Lu Xun, Nov 02 2011 10:16 AM
27 replies to this topic
#22
XIIISwords
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Hero of Fire
Posted 02 November 2011 - 06:28 PM
Wow, great story so far. The Queen reminds me of Smeagol, but powerful.
How many chapters are you planning?
How many chapters are you planning?
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Posted 02 November 2011 - 06:31 PM
YAY! u tryed my idea 
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Posted 02 November 2011 - 06:55 PM
awesome,man......make it this story extra-vaganza! 
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Aggressive Duck
Posted 07 November 2011 - 03:09 PM
Good writing, keep it up!
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Posted 15 January 2013 - 09:03 AM
I like it so far. The execution of the family was pretty heavy, but a good way to show how far the queen would go. “Gate to Hell” Another awesome name.
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My Heart Forever Belongs To Inori.
Posted 03 March 2013 - 08:54 PM
Impressive! The Queen is very creepy, and I love how you made her so evil. I hope to see more of this story being update soon, because I want more! More, more, more, more more!
#28
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Posted 04 March 2013 - 01:50 PM
omg
this is amazing
The second chapter was definitely great and the character development in it was excellent. I guess you're not making this anymore though since this was back in 2011. Even though I hope you do one day. But still, nice work on it! It was great 
Daniel Chiuchiarelli