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Lu Xun's essays : How to have a good life

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So very true what you wrote, your so good at writing and I sure your teacher will liked it. :D

Wow, rarely when I read other peoples work(whether they be famous or not) I am at a loss of words. But by reading this, I am speechless. That is the highest compliment I can give.

I like what you wrote and it is true!

 

well done!

You are genius on writing!

So true.

cool no words for Greys anatomy!!! YEAH

i agree with the people who said its true !!:D

That was very well exspressed and put together very nice job Lu Xun.

What level of writing is this supposed to be? I mean elementary school, middle school, high school or college? Just asking for frame of reference for how well it needs to be written. Now for feedback: intro seems a bit sudden but then again you've got limited lines to work with so you don't really have a choice. Some parts could be rephrased like There’s also another thing

That could become Another aspect to consider is ...

Other sentences could be combined You must not have hatred, envy and any and every other bad feeling. Having only good feelings helps a lot.

 

Having good feelings helps a lot and try not to have any hatred, envy and any and every other bad feeling. I'm not sure if this is a problem in your native language or not; it says it was translated into English so this next bit might be unecessary based on the language. The fourth paragraph's second sentence should be Even if the person is surrounded by money, if he or she doesn’t have a friend or a family member, he or she will impossible for it to achieve happiness.

 

As for the second paragraph, just use a sentence or 2 to explain what you mean about health by showing why. And starting off the last paragraph, don't refer back to the other paragraphs like that. Refer instead into the ideas behind them. I know what I wrote sounds a bit critical; it's not personal. Anyway, it is pretty nicely written. Nice job.

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I'm in middle school... High School coming next year.

i loved it! it's... helpful lol and it's very true

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Thanks, guys!

 

I didn't know you'd like it so much :)

 

I'm sure to post every essay I do on school...

 

I still have one more on the computer, I believe... But not sure when I'm going to post it....

 

It's about freedoom ;33

I'm no teacher, but I can guarantee you got a passing grade. :) I know I couldn't have a good life without my family and friends to hold me up. It was short but very informative. Great job! :D
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Awesome vocab. I liked it, job well done.

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