This story is officialy mine. It's my second story and it's talking about...wait a minute you gotta read the story first ;p. Well whoever was reading my story, Namine's diary, the final chapters are coming soon!
Chapter 1
One Sky, One Destiny
Noise was coming from the loft. Destiny was practising.
- TAKE THAT, TRAINING DUMMY! She said
She was training for her MOM exam. She was sixteen. When she was training she wore her armor. A blue armor with silver tracks on it. Destiny had blue eyes and hair. She was very beautifull and tall.
-Destiny dear, you are late for the royal dinner! Said Mary, her personal advicor.
Mary was short and stuffy. She wore a blue dress and she was an aunt for Destiny
- Oh no! Dad is gonna kill me! Destiny said while she took her keyblade and her other things and hid them in her silver magic bag.
See Destiny was the Royal princess of Galaxia-The world of Stars. She started running towards her room. She saw some guests from the dinner going to the dining room. Destiny hid behind a wall and waited until the guests left the room. She ran towards her room. She went to have a shower. She was sweaty from her training. When she finished she opened her walkin closet and she took a dress. It was long and blue. It was strapless and it had diamonds on it. She took her brush and she brushed her hair. She forgot to take off her bag!
- Are you ready Destinyella? Her mum asked while she was opening the door.
-Mum, my name is not Destinyella! it's Destiny! She said
- Okay whatever you say. Come quick downstairs, your father and the guests are waitng, her mum said.
When Destiny's mum left, Destiny started looking for her stardog. His name was Starry and he could use tha magic of the stars.
-Starry i will do it! I'm gonna tell my dad that i want to be a keyblade master!
Starry was like "Are you kidding, he's gonna kill you" But Destiny was determined.
Destiny started going down the red stairs. The royal recitation called,
-Princess Destenyella Kanabes Star!
Everyone started clapping and cheering. Destiny sat on the chair.
-Dinner is served , said the royal servant.
They first served the famous Fish of the sky. A rare fish that can only be caght from the sky fishers. Later they served sugarweed that could only be found in Mysteria. A dangerous world that is overwhelmed from darkness. This food was Destiny's favorite. After that they served golden eggs and then star of the north sky. When everyone finshed they went to the ballrom. They started drinking starhito and while chatting. Then it was time for Desteny to say her royal recitation. She started.
- I wanna be a..She looked at her dad. Um i wanna be an-an - she looked again at her dad. I wanna be a keyblade master! She said
-What the hell? You a keyblade master Destenyella you know that i don't like jokes!!! Said King Rupert XIV, Destiny's father
- My name is not Destenyella and i want to be a keyblade master! Destiny said
- Silence! said her father. You are going to be a queen.
Suddenly her keyblade fell out of her magic bag.
-A keyblade! A KEYBLADE!! WHAT THE HECK IS A KEYBLADE DOING HERE!!! DESTENYELLA..YOU WILL NEVER BE A KEYBLADE MASTER...NEVER! Her father said as he destroyed her keyblad with a spell.
Desteny ran twoards her room. She sat on her bed and started crying.
-Noone understands me...She whispered
Hope you liked Chapter one. Stay tuned for our next Chapter that is talking about our other protagonist that comes from Mysteria!!
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One Sky, One Destiny
Started by SoraKH, Sep 23 2011 11:56 AM
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The Hypest!!
Posted 23 September 2011 - 12:19 PM
ohhhhhhhhh wait she wants to be a mom?
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Posted 23 September 2011 - 12:24 PM
Huh a mom?
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Posted 23 September 2011 - 12:25 PM
ohhhhhhhhh wait she wants to be a mom?
Huh a mom?
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Posted 23 September 2011 - 12:28 PM
yea it says shes traneing for the mom exam ohhh mark of mastery
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Posted 23 September 2011 - 12:29 PM
yea it says shes traneing for the mom exam ohhh mark of mastery
hahahaha lol
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Posted 23 September 2011 - 12:51 PM
yea lol
hahahaha lol
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I love you, TH <3
Posted 23 September 2011 - 01:48 PM
Very cool!!!
I hope next comes soon!!
I hope next comes soon!!
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Posted 23 September 2011 - 01:54 PM
Very cool!!!
I hope next comes soon!!
Next chapter coming soon ;p
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Posted 23 September 2011 - 03:22 PM
Chapter 2
The Boy Who Fought The Darkness..
-Run!!! Darkness creatures! cried Henry to Taio.
Taio was a 16 year old boy with spiky golden hair. He had blue eyes. He was very handsome. Henry was his best friend. He had straight brown hair and blue eyes. They were warriors of the light.
- Be careful they are shooting nets! Said Taio to Henry
-Run to the forest! We will be safe there.
The two friends went and hid into the forest, behind some bushes. The darkness creatures continued running and got lost in the endless forest of Mysteria.
-That was close!, said Henry, as he was trying to catch his breath.
-We gotta be careful..Henry? Heyy Henry?? Taio started shouting.
Henry got lost! Taio started searching everywhere. Suddenly a big Heartless came out of nowhere.
-Creepy creatures and now heartless! Taio cried.
He took his keyblade that was made out of metal and he launched a ball of light onto the heartless.
-Taio over here! Said Suki. THE DARKNESS WARRIORS ARE COMING!
-Thanks Suki! Said Taio, as they hid behind some bushes.
Suki was a very friendly girl. She was a warrior of Light too and she was very strong. She was petite and short. Suddenly the sky became dark, the birds hid in the trees, the flowers closed their petals and the light of the sun vanished. The forest became dark. The only thing you could hear was he wind whispering for help. Suddenly out of nowhere warriors of darkness attacked in the forest. Taio saw Henry in a cage that the army of Darkness was holding. He bravely took his keyblade and he ran to save Henry. Suki tried to stop him but he was already standing in front of the Army. Their leader Darkous laughed histerically and he cast a spell on Taio. Two black hands came out of Darkous. He picked Taio with the magic hands and he started screaming.
-Such terible darkness! Taio cried
-So Taio you think that you can defeat me...Ha watch me while i defeat you! Darkous said as he squeezed Taio even more.
-How do you know my name you...Taio said
-Let me remind you some things Taio..Darkous said, and he launched a ball of darkness onto Taio
Taio felt dizzy and weak. He couldnt speak and he couldn't breathe.
-Attack! Suki yelled.
An army of hundereds of warriors of light came out of the bushes. The trees became alive and the flowers opened their petals. Darkous took Taio and the two armies started fighting. Darkous threw Taio on the floor and he got ready to cast a killing spell. Taio took his keyblade and blocked the spell. Taio used heal on hima and he attacked Darkous. Darkous launched a ball of darkness but Taio blocked it again. Darkous whispered: You are the boy who fought the darkness but this is not over you are the one who will unlock the true DARKNESS!..i will return! And he vanished. Suki came and announced to Taio that they defeated the dark army and they saved Henry. But Taio was confused. He will unlock the darkness? He was seeking some answers. He went to the Royal Academy Of Fighting. He said to the teachers and the president of Mysteria what happened with Darkous.
-I'm seeking some answers and i know where to find them. I can find them at Seaside-The World Of Water. But first i need you to give me a vechile. We are in danger. Said Taio
-I understsand your request. And i accept it. But in order for you to go to other worlds you will need the RAOF(Royal Academy Of Fighting) certificate to make shure you are ready for the dangers ou there. You have to take a Mark Of Mastery exam..
The Boy Who Fought The Darkness..
-Run!!! Darkness creatures! cried Henry to Taio.
Taio was a 16 year old boy with spiky golden hair. He had blue eyes. He was very handsome. Henry was his best friend. He had straight brown hair and blue eyes. They were warriors of the light.
- Be careful they are shooting nets! Said Taio to Henry
-Run to the forest! We will be safe there.
The two friends went and hid into the forest, behind some bushes. The darkness creatures continued running and got lost in the endless forest of Mysteria.
-That was close!, said Henry, as he was trying to catch his breath.
-We gotta be careful..Henry? Heyy Henry?? Taio started shouting.
Henry got lost! Taio started searching everywhere. Suddenly a big Heartless came out of nowhere.
-Creepy creatures and now heartless! Taio cried.
He took his keyblade that was made out of metal and he launched a ball of light onto the heartless.
-Taio over here! Said Suki. THE DARKNESS WARRIORS ARE COMING!
-Thanks Suki! Said Taio, as they hid behind some bushes.
Suki was a very friendly girl. She was a warrior of Light too and she was very strong. She was petite and short. Suddenly the sky became dark, the birds hid in the trees, the flowers closed their petals and the light of the sun vanished. The forest became dark. The only thing you could hear was he wind whispering for help. Suddenly out of nowhere warriors of darkness attacked in the forest. Taio saw Henry in a cage that the army of Darkness was holding. He bravely took his keyblade and he ran to save Henry. Suki tried to stop him but he was already standing in front of the Army. Their leader Darkous laughed histerically and he cast a spell on Taio. Two black hands came out of Darkous. He picked Taio with the magic hands and he started screaming.
-Such terible darkness! Taio cried
-So Taio you think that you can defeat me...Ha watch me while i defeat you! Darkous said as he squeezed Taio even more.
-How do you know my name you...Taio said
-Let me remind you some things Taio..Darkous said, and he launched a ball of darkness onto Taio
Taio felt dizzy and weak. He couldnt speak and he couldn't breathe.
-Attack! Suki yelled.
An army of hundereds of warriors of light came out of the bushes. The trees became alive and the flowers opened their petals. Darkous took Taio and the two armies started fighting. Darkous threw Taio on the floor and he got ready to cast a killing spell. Taio took his keyblade and blocked the spell. Taio used heal on hima and he attacked Darkous. Darkous launched a ball of darkness but Taio blocked it again. Darkous whispered: You are the boy who fought the darkness but this is not over you are the one who will unlock the true DARKNESS!..i will return! And he vanished. Suki came and announced to Taio that they defeated the dark army and they saved Henry. But Taio was confused. He will unlock the darkness? He was seeking some answers. He went to the Royal Academy Of Fighting. He said to the teachers and the president of Mysteria what happened with Darkous.
-I'm seeking some answers and i know where to find them. I can find them at Seaside-The World Of Water. But first i need you to give me a vechile. We are in danger. Said Taio
-I understsand your request. And i accept it. But in order for you to go to other worlds you will need the RAOF(Royal Academy Of Fighting) certificate to make shure you are ready for the dangers ou there. You have to take a Mark Of Mastery exam..
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Posted 23 September 2011 - 03:45 PM
this is a great piece of work keep it up
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No. Try not. Do. Or do not. There is no try.
Posted 23 September 2011 - 03:54 PM
LOVE the story so far! Can't wait for chapter 3
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Posted 23 September 2011 - 04:55 PM
Chapter 3
The choice
The big clock in the hall was showing midnight. Destiny was in her room and she was repairing her keyblade. She was thinking about the events that got held that night. She was angry and sad. She wanted to show what she was made for. She wanted to show that she was strong. Suddenly she had an idea.The next morning when she woke up she wore her clothes and she went to the School Of Fighting Skills. She asked to see Master Suqare. He was a strong keyblade master. He was teaching kids with talenst on the wielding on the keyblade. Destiny called him to a friendly dual. Suqare started with launching a ball of light. Destiny took control of it and she threw it back but Suqare blocked it. Destiny continued with spinnng her keyblade and throwing it towards Suqare. Then she used 3 types of blizzard and the 2 types of fire. At that moment the battle ended.
-Bravo! You are preety good! But aren't you a prinsess? Suqare answerd. Hasnt your father declined your dream of being a keyblade master?
Destiny was ready to talk when her father came inside. He started pulling her from her hand. But she remained at her same place. Suqare said that he wanted to have a moment with my dad. She left the office and she sat outside. A few minutes later her father and the master came. They announced her that she was gonna team up with a boy named Taio and they will both defeat Darkus.They said that Darkous was an evil keyblade master. He was on the side of darkness and he is very dangerous. At first she felt kinda strange. she asked my dad if it was okay with him and he answerd back that he didnt got any other choices.
-You are one of our best wariors. Suqare said. You are going to meet me here tommorow and you will tale the mark of mastery exam. If you past it you will go and defeat Darkous and Save our world if not you will stay here and be a prinsess forever....
The choice
The big clock in the hall was showing midnight. Destiny was in her room and she was repairing her keyblade. She was thinking about the events that got held that night. She was angry and sad. She wanted to show what she was made for. She wanted to show that she was strong. Suddenly she had an idea.The next morning when she woke up she wore her clothes and she went to the School Of Fighting Skills. She asked to see Master Suqare. He was a strong keyblade master. He was teaching kids with talenst on the wielding on the keyblade. Destiny called him to a friendly dual. Suqare started with launching a ball of light. Destiny took control of it and she threw it back but Suqare blocked it. Destiny continued with spinnng her keyblade and throwing it towards Suqare. Then she used 3 types of blizzard and the 2 types of fire. At that moment the battle ended.
-Bravo! You are preety good! But aren't you a prinsess? Suqare answerd. Hasnt your father declined your dream of being a keyblade master?
Destiny was ready to talk when her father came inside. He started pulling her from her hand. But she remained at her same place. Suqare said that he wanted to have a moment with my dad. She left the office and she sat outside. A few minutes later her father and the master came. They announced her that she was gonna team up with a boy named Taio and they will both defeat Darkus.They said that Darkous was an evil keyblade master. He was on the side of darkness and he is very dangerous. At first she felt kinda strange. she asked my dad if it was okay with him and he answerd back that he didnt got any other choices.
-You are one of our best wariors. Suqare said. You are going to meet me here tommorow and you will tale the mark of mastery exam. If you past it you will go and defeat Darkous and Save our world if not you will stay here and be a prinsess forever....
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Posted 23 September 2011 - 05:01 PM
Nozzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz.
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Posted 23 September 2011 - 05:14 PM
This is cool, but you should try not to abbreviate things like hasn't, and if you do, put the " ' " and not hasnt, and look a bit more for your grammar, but it's readable. Good story, though 
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Posted 24 September 2011 - 12:55 AM
This is cool, but you should try not to abbreviate things like hasn't, and if you do, put the " ' " and not hasnt, and look a bit more for your grammar, but it's readable. Good story, though http://kh13.com/forum/public/style_emoti...
Thanks. It's just..english is my second language ;p
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Posted 24 September 2011 - 03:23 AM
Chapter 4
The things that matter most
Destiny was standing at the balcony of her room. With view the sea and the sunset she was thinking about the journey she was going to start. She was excited but scared. Suddenly her dad came in he room and he took out a keyblade. It was made out of metal and ice that couldnt melt. It was beautiful
-Destenyella..If this is what matters the most. If this is what you want...Then do it. I'm not the one who will tell you what to do. Follow your dreams. Destiny's dad said and he gave her the keyblade
-Dad...Thanks!!! Desteny said and they sat and watched the sunset together
Back at Mysteria Taio was entering the Royal School Of Fighting with his friend. Suki and Henry where going to take the exam too. When they entered the tower they all wished good luck and the went to different rooms. Taio was going to battle with some of the best pupils of the school. "If i can handle Darkous..I can handle this too" He thought.There master Sara (one of the few female keyblade masters) welcomed the pupils. She said that they had 5 mnutes to get ready. Taio went and sat on a chair. He tied his shoes and he wore his leather black gloves. He took he's keyblade and he went to his position. Then the oter pupils went to their positions. Sara explained the first part of the exam. Each pupil had to launch a ball of light. They were four. The first one Foli she launched a ball of light but she lost control . Next was Zeku. He launched a perfect ball of light and he succesfully had finished the first part. When Taios turn came he took his keyblade and he launched a big ball of light. It was perfect like Zeku's. Then they made teams. Taio was with Zeku and Foli was with Lenos. The both started the fight. Suki and Henry were watching from the window. Taio saw them. He got happy and he started fighting. Zeku and Taio casted firaga the same time. The two fire balls touched and there was an explosion. Foli and Lenos lost the battle. Master Sara a announced that in five minutes Zeku abd Taio were going to battle and they were going to see the winner. Taio ran to his friends. The hugged eachother and wished him good luck. Meanwhile at Galaxia Destiny was practising for the last time her battle moves and her spells. Then she entered the office where Suqare was. She was ready to battle. Suqare called three more pupils. They all went together at the big hall. All the pupils casted spells. Destiny and Lorens had the best teqniques. The battled eachother. Taio casted thunder on Zeku. Zeku used ragning storm but tailo avoied it with reflega. Back to Destiny she used twisting keyblade and twisted hours. Lorens blocked her attacks and he used fire. Destiny god control of the fire and she threw at the boy together with her keyblade. Back to Taio used thunder surge and he throw his keyblade at Zeku. Lorens and Zeku collapsed and Taio and Desteny won. They were keyblade masters. Destiny felt deep in her heart that someone was happy like she was. Taio felt the same.
-Dad i did it!! I'm a keyblade master! Destiny said
-Destiny you are the one! er dad repleyed.
-Now that you are a full master you will go on a very dangerous task. You will heave to go at The District Of The Stars. An island that was Galaxias but now it's lost in darkness. You will go there and you will meat your team. Taio.
Taio heard the same thing from master Sara,
-I will get ready and i will meat you at the transporting station. Taio said
-I will met you there.. Sara said and she left her room!
-I did it i'm a full keyblade master! Taio started telling to his friends. What about you are you masters?
-They need us to the army. And we are going to remain. Now go Sara is waiting. Suki answerd
-Okay see you there! Taio said while he was leaving the room
The things that matter most
Destiny was standing at the balcony of her room. With view the sea and the sunset she was thinking about the journey she was going to start. She was excited but scared. Suddenly her dad came in he room and he took out a keyblade. It was made out of metal and ice that couldnt melt. It was beautiful
-Destenyella..If this is what matters the most. If this is what you want...Then do it. I'm not the one who will tell you what to do. Follow your dreams. Destiny's dad said and he gave her the keyblade
-Dad...Thanks!!! Desteny said and they sat and watched the sunset together
Back at Mysteria Taio was entering the Royal School Of Fighting with his friend. Suki and Henry where going to take the exam too. When they entered the tower they all wished good luck and the went to different rooms. Taio was going to battle with some of the best pupils of the school. "If i can handle Darkous..I can handle this too" He thought.There master Sara (one of the few female keyblade masters) welcomed the pupils. She said that they had 5 mnutes to get ready. Taio went and sat on a chair. He tied his shoes and he wore his leather black gloves. He took he's keyblade and he went to his position. Then the oter pupils went to their positions. Sara explained the first part of the exam. Each pupil had to launch a ball of light. They were four. The first one Foli she launched a ball of light but she lost control . Next was Zeku. He launched a perfect ball of light and he succesfully had finished the first part. When Taios turn came he took his keyblade and he launched a big ball of light. It was perfect like Zeku's. Then they made teams. Taio was with Zeku and Foli was with Lenos. The both started the fight. Suki and Henry were watching from the window. Taio saw them. He got happy and he started fighting. Zeku and Taio casted firaga the same time. The two fire balls touched and there was an explosion. Foli and Lenos lost the battle. Master Sara a announced that in five minutes Zeku abd Taio were going to battle and they were going to see the winner. Taio ran to his friends. The hugged eachother and wished him good luck. Meanwhile at Galaxia Destiny was practising for the last time her battle moves and her spells. Then she entered the office where Suqare was. She was ready to battle. Suqare called three more pupils. They all went together at the big hall. All the pupils casted spells. Destiny and Lorens had the best teqniques. The battled eachother. Taio casted thunder on Zeku. Zeku used ragning storm but tailo avoied it with reflega. Back to Destiny she used twisting keyblade and twisted hours. Lorens blocked her attacks and he used fire. Destiny god control of the fire and she threw at the boy together with her keyblade. Back to Taio used thunder surge and he throw his keyblade at Zeku. Lorens and Zeku collapsed and Taio and Desteny won. They were keyblade masters. Destiny felt deep in her heart that someone was happy like she was. Taio felt the same.
-Dad i did it!! I'm a keyblade master! Destiny said
-Destiny you are the one! er dad repleyed.
-Now that you are a full master you will go on a very dangerous task. You will heave to go at The District Of The Stars. An island that was Galaxias but now it's lost in darkness. You will go there and you will meat your team. Taio.
Taio heard the same thing from master Sara,
-I will get ready and i will meat you at the transporting station. Taio said
-I will met you there.. Sara said and she left her room!
-I did it i'm a full keyblade master! Taio started telling to his friends. What about you are you masters?
-They need us to the army. And we are going to remain. Now go Sara is waiting. Suki answerd
-Okay see you there! Taio said while he was leaving the room
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Posted 24 September 2011 - 03:51 AM
This story is soo cool! Please continue it!
Daniel Chiuchiarelli