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[Snow]

Chapter 6
"I just...want to be free." said Quasimodo, his tears flowing out.
The statues mouths started moving. "Quasimodo, we've been over this. Just go pick up a girl."
Quasimodo still didn't stop crying. "But..."
"Quasimodo...Why are you talking to statues?" asked Riku.
"Oh...They're...friends of mine....?  Yeah, he should believe that."
Riku looked up at the statues. "Quasimodo..." the statues said in unison.
"But...Master..."
"Who the hell cares about that old guy? He's a tard."
Riku couldn't help chuckling.
"But..."
"GO!"
Quasimodo walked off, and Riku caught sight of Dream Eaters, and dashed off to fight them.
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Sora ran after Neku, and they entered the alleyway. He raised his hand, and the wood opened up, revealing a black void, that Neku entered. Sora followed, and there was a sign in the darkness.
Traverse Town District: --
The darkness cleared, and Sora saw a place similar to District 3.
"Wow, never saw this."
Neku stopped dead in his tracks, turned around, and punched Sora in the face.
"You IDIOT!" he yelled. "You were not supposed to follow!"
Sora rubbed his cheek. "Sorry?"
"Sorry won't cut i--" he stopped talking, and flew forward. He was slashed at the back by a giant cat Dream Eater.  "Gah! Hey!" yelled Sora, brandishing his keyblade and charging.

[Sora's Baby]

The flow is so much better.

[4Everbee]

I...Am...In....LOVE...With this story!

[Ultimate Oblivion]

nooooooooooooooooooo

[4Everbee]

the ultimate 2, on 02 November 2011 - 12:33 AM, said:

nooooooooooooooooooo

Why NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO?

[Ultimate Oblivion]

because u praised him, not me

[4Everbee]

the ultimate 2, on 02 November 2011 - 03:10 AM, said:

because u praised him, not me

I like your story,Not his lol

[Sora's Baby]

khgirl4ever, on 02 November 2011 - 04:11 PM, said:

I like your story,Not his lol

Yeah,lisen to her.

[4Everbee]

Come on make the next part of the story!

[Ultimate Oblivion]

i need ideas!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
so wait this sunday(if lucky)

[Snow]

You really shouldn't be praising me, since it's not my story.
I've just been grammar fixing and adding a little here and there to make it make sense.
So basically, everything I'm typing is really his work.

[Sora's Baby]

I'll thank both then!

Roxas1432, on 05 November 2011 - 03:45 PM, said:

You really shouldn't be praising me, since it's not my story.
I've just been grammar fixing and adding a little here and there to make it make sense.
So basically, everything I'm typing is really his work.

Thank you!

the ultimate 2, on 04 November 2011 - 12:27 AM, said:

i need ideas!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
so wait this sunday(if lucky)

Thank You!!!

[4Everbee]

the ultimate 2, on 04 November 2011 - 12:27 AM, said:

i need ideas!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
so wait this sunday(if lucky)

Your waiting  for ideas when all you have to do is.
Sit down and start writing. Sitin down waiting for ideas won't do you any good.

[Snow]

Idea for Riku arc: Quasimodo sees the girl of his dreams, and tries desperately to keep it a secret from Riku, but Riku knows better.
Idea for Sora arc: Sora fights off the giant cat when the giant cat looks like it's about to die, it calls in stronger friends.

[Ultimate Oblivion]

ok ok i will start writing
chapter 7
after sora beaten the cat, the marking on neku's hand dissappear
neku took ot a phone, dial numbers and said "hey Beat, what is the next mission?"
...
after a while, neku said "lets take a break for the day till i get my next mission"
ok" said sora

i will edit it tommorow. no time

[Snow]

Chapter 7
Sora defeated the cat, jumped back, and took deep, panting breaths. Sora looked at Neku's hand, but the mark didn't disappear. More giant cats sprung out of nowhere, lunging at Sora. "What...?" The cat he just defeated rose, yowled, and the shockwaves blew Sora back. "UGH! Damn!" said Sora, struggling to keep his feet in place. The shockwaves stopped, and then all the cats lunged at Sora.

[Ultimate Oblivion]

Roxas1432, on 07 November 2011 - 04:46 PM, said:

Chapter 7
Sora defeated the cat, jumped back, and took deep, panting breaths. Sora looked at Neku's hand, but the mark didn't disappear. More giant cats sprung out of nowhere, lunging at Sora. "What...?" The cat he just defeated rose, yowled, and the shockwaves blew Sora back. "UGH! Damn!" said Sora, struggling to keep his feet in place. The shockwaves stopped, and then all the cats lunged at Sora.

ehh, that is not what i want to type
hint:research the world ends with you

[Snow]

the ultimate 2, on 11 November 2011 - 06:18 AM, said:

ehh, that is not what i want to type
hint:research the world ends with you

Well, I'm just typing that. Like, after you beat a boss, more appear, making it harder for the main character. Then, after it's done, Neku will wake up after Midnight or something and receive his mission. So either way, the cat's are going anyway.

[Ultimate Oblivion]

i will type next week, sorry for delay.
Roxas1432, FOOOOOOOOOOOOLLLLLLLLLLOOOOOOOOOOOOWWWWWWWWWWWW TTTTTTTTHHHHHHHHHHHHEEEEEEEEEE IIIIIIIDDDDDDDDDDEEEEEEEAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[Sora's Baby]

the ultimate 2, on 04 December 2011 - 05:30 AM, said:

i will type next week, sorry for delay.
Roxas1432, FOOOOOOOOOOOOLLLLLLLLLLOOOOOOOOOOOOWWWWWWWWWWWW TTTTTTTTHHHHHHHHHHHHEEEEEEEEEE IIIIIIIDDDDDDDDDDEEEEEEEAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Roxas1432, on 13 November 2011 - 02:24 PM, said:

Well, I'm just typing that. Like, after you beat a boss, more appear, making it harder for the main character. Then, after it's done, Neku will wake up after Midnight or something and receive his mission. So either way, the cat's are going anyway.

Stop killing me !