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[Ultimate Oblivion]

Stop killing me !

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[replika13]

Cool story ^^
i think i love this!!

[Kinode]

Nice story, horrible grammar
Roxas,
Same story, much better to read Thank you .
Ultimate, you're writing is just too... vulgar. Unclear, informal, bad in general.
: |
If you want people to enjoy reading what YOU write, you should really start to write decently. It's just uncomfortable to read horribly written texts, and this isn't (Supposed to be) a little text, it's supposed to be a story.

[Sora's Baby]

Nice story, horrible grammar
Roxas,
Same story, much better to read Thank you http://kh13.com/forum/public/style_emoti... .
Ultimate, you're writing is just too... vulgar. Unclear, informal, bad in general.
: |
If you want people to enjoy reading what YOU write, you should really start to write decently. It's just uncomfortable to read horribly written texts, and this isn't (Supposed to be) a little text, it's supposed to be a story.

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Then I died.

[Snow]

i will type next week, sorry for delay.
Roxas1432, FOOOOOOOOOOOOLLLLLLLLLLOOOOOOOOOOOOWWWWWWWWWWWW TTTTTTTTHHHHHHHHHHHHEEEEEEEEEE IIIIIIIDDDDDDDDDDEEEEEEEAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

HHHEEEEEYYY
IT CALLLEEEED IIIIIN STROOOOONGERRRR FRIEEENNDSS
IT MAKES THE STORY MORE INTERESTING

[Lu Xun]

_{Lol, you two working 'together' is fun.}

[Snow]

Well, I'll compromise.
If you have a random persom walk up to Sora, I'll make it seem like the giant cats in my interpretation are scared of that person.
SO WRITE

[Ultimate Oblivion]

sorry guys, i am gonna put this on cancel but u can read a fanfic i made in fanfiction.net. type author dudimon1

[4Everbee]

sorry guys, i am gonna put this on cancel but u can read a fanfic i made in fanfiction.net. type author dudimon1

NOOOO!!! CAN AT I LEAST TRY TO FINISH IT?!?!?! PIZZZZZ??/

[Ultimate Oblivion]

NOOOO!!! CAN AT I LEAST TRY TO FINISH IT?!?!?! PIZZZZZ??/

fine, go kill yourself if u wanted to

[4Everbee]

fine, go kill yourself if u wanted to

...OKAY XDXDXDXDXD..But Kingdom took my knife so.....Yea......I'll go buy one XDXD

[Snow]

fuuuu-
Can I continue this on my own?

[Sora's Baby]

...OKAY XDXDXDXDXD..But Kingdom took my knife so.....Yea......I'll go buy one XDXD

What!

[Ultimate Oblivion]

i am gonna start it all over again so wait for a few days

[Snow]

All over again?
So imagine this story is a book--
you're going to stop halfway to start over?
Then that confuses people.
:/

[SoraKH]

Hey Ultimate 2. Why are you gonna cancel this?

[Sora's Baby]

Dang starting over.

[Snow]

Well, more grammar correction = unrequited fun.

[Ultimate Oblivion]

just a few rough changes

[Ultimate Oblivion]

chapter 1 (again): a new journey
Scene:destiny island
Sora reads letter, think about it and then decided to continue his journey
scene:mysterious tower
"u will take mark by the mark of mastery"said yen sid
"even without taking the test, i am still INVINSIBLE"said sora while wearing a cape
"emm, sora, what is with the cape"said riku
"because all heroes need a cape and i havent got one"said sora
.....
"first, u must take this test."said yen sid
riku and sora sat on a table when a pile of paper pop out of no where
"do this 356846735678863346854534678958787339798485830 pages of essay to move on the next phase"said yen sid
"NNNNNNNNNNNOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO"Screamed sora
592595 hours later
"Finish"said the half dead sora
"about time, i t took me 5 hours to finish it"siad riku
"Now, time to go to sleep"said yen sid
"huh"said riku and sora
yen sid hit them both with a broomstick and they fell asleep