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#1 The Transcendent Key

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Posted 08 June 2011 - 10:57 PM

Before reading the story, read the prologue first, which is the link you see here. :)

Chapter One: A deadly darkness approaches

Kain and Riku storm through the castle as they defeat Heartless after Heartless. They rush to retrieve the artifact before it falls to the hands of their foes. As they keep ascending the floors of the castle, they come upon a knight fighting to stay alive.
Kain: Cecil! We shall aid you!
Cecil: No, stand back. It's a trap!
Riku: Damn, wha-, what are these things!?
Kain: Such strange creatures. I can't move!
Suddenly, a hooded man appears before them coming from a dark portal.
Mysterious Figure: Well, well, well. What do we have here? I expect to find poor resistance and yet I find three formidable warriors. Hmph, at least you three will suit as my puppets, commandering my creatures, the Unborn.
Cecil: The Unborn!?
Mysterious Figure: Yes, Unborn are creatures born out of the purest of twisted souls. These beings can destroy Heartless in the blink of an eye. Hahaha, prepare to be enslaved.
All of a sudden, one of the Unborn falls instantly dead on the ground. The rest of the Unborn look around to see what is happening. Then, a quick flash of darkness kills twenty more.
Kain: What was that!?
Cecil: Whatever it was, it freed us. Let's finish them all off!
Riku: Dark Firaga!
Kain: Sky Rave!
Cecil: Paladin Force!
Mysterious Figure: NO! It cannot be!!!
One by the one, the Unborn fall by the hands of the warriors. But more keep coming as each one falls.
Voice:Let me handle this!
Riku: Huh!? Who is that!?
Then, out of thin air, another hooded man appears with dark aura eminating from him.
Hooded Man: Dark Reaper!
The hooded man is so fast that Riku, Kain and Cecil can barely see him.
Hooded Man: Go, you must get the artifact.
Heeding his words, the warriors rush to retrieve the artifact.
Mysterious Figure: It can't be! I saw you die before my very eyes! How are you alive, Dexeres!?
Dexeres: You look so surprised. The look on your face is priceless. Let's settle this. Now tell me, why is this happening? You must have broken the balance between the worlds!
Mysterious Figure: Hmph. How right you are. The worlds's chains have been broken, and now my army of darkness shall destroy everything until I obtain Kingdom Hearts!
Dexeres: No! I will stop you!
Meanwhile, Riku, Kain and Cecil finally obtain the powerfull artifact.
Kain: Wait, I sense something.
Then, in the blink of an eye, a giant Unborn appears before them, blocking their exit.
Cecil: We must defeat this creature.
Riku: Right!
The new threat has emerged, the three warriors have finally retrieved the artifact, and the mysterious figure confronts Dexeres. What will happen next? Stay tuned for Chapter Two: Escape from Baron...

Edited by Sesshomaru, 28 April 2013 - 07:27 PM.

#2 Kingdom Sora

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Posted 08 June 2011 - 11:04 PM


#3 Corrupted keyblade

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Posted 08 June 2011 - 11:26 PM

Ug cliff hangers

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Posted 08 June 2011 - 11:42 PM

Best book EVER!!!! though i dont read that much as long as if it has something to do with romance,vampires,death,or kingdom hearts!!

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Posted 09 June 2011 - 12:31 AM

I like it man. Pretty well played my an. Keep it up! And nice touch with the undead.

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Posted 09 June 2011 - 09:25 AM

You're bloody good! Try to write books or something!!! :)

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Posted 09 June 2011 - 11:46 PM

escribe mas!

#8 The Transcendent Key

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Posted 10 June 2011 - 12:15 AM

Thanks for the comments, people, here's the second chapter. :D

Chapter Two: Escape from Baron

Riku, Kain and Cecil face a formidable opponent, and so they wonder how to take down the giant Unborn.
Kain: We will have to use all of our strength to defeat this foe. Otherwise, we're done for. Cecil, Riku, we must hurry!
Riku: Let's do this!!!
Riku makes his first move and climbs quickly to the top of the Unborn's head and uses his Dark Aura attack. Kain and Cecil focus their attacks on the Unborn's legs. The beast simply shakes them off and sends a shockwave to the ground. The three warriors are barely able to dodge it's attack. Then, the giant beast unleashes a swarm of Unborn, which surrounds them in an instant.
Cecil: This thing releases more demonspawns upon us. Not to worry, I can take care of them with my darkness and light attacks, you two take care of the giant beast!
Riku: Right!
Kain: *nods*
Meanwhile, The Mysterious Figure and Dexeres are battling each other...
Dexeres: Huh, you seem to be losing your edge, my old friend! Dark Arrows!! Dark Shuriken!!!
Mysterious Figure: Hmph, do not be too overconfident. Shade Sword!!!
Dexeres: Ah, so you still have some tricks up your sleeve. This should prove amusing for the moment. You do realize your little puppets are nothing before my powers.
Mysterious Figure: So it would seem. Hmph, I don't know how you managed to stay alive, but this time I will be sure to kill you swiftly and painlessly. Hahaha, this is perfect. While we bicker here, more of my Unborn invade this castle. I should actually be thanking you...
In just moments, The Mysterious Figure opens a portal and vanishes.
Dexeres: *gasp* The others, I have to help them!
In the blink of an eye, Dexeres teleports himself to Riku, Kain and Cecil.
Cecil: Dark Flame!
Riku: Shadow Break!
Kain: Rising Dive!
Dexeres: Rise of Shadows!!!
When Dexeres utters these words, enormous pillars of darkness rise from the ground and kills the surrounding Unborn. Then he jumps to the head of the giant Unborn and uses a flurry of dark arrows to kill it. And in just moments, the giant Unborn falls to the ground dead.
Riku: Incredible, that power!
Dexeres: You must leave now, before more of them come. Take the artifact to Yen-Sid, he will know what to do. Go through this portal.
Riku: Kain, Cecil, will you be alright?
Cecil: Do not worry, we shall keep things in order here.
Kain: Cecil is right, now go!
Riku: Hey, stranger, aren't you coming?
Dexeres: I'll go soon don't worry.
After bidding farewell, Riku goes through the portal. Where has The Mysterious Figure gone? And just what is this artifact and what does Dexeres mean when he says Yen-Sid will know what to do? Find out in Chapter Three: Answers...

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Posted 10 June 2011 - 12:32 AM

i want more MF!

#10 Corrupted keyblade

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Posted 10 June 2011 - 01:01 AM

Ug cliffhangers are getting old allready lol

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Posted 10 June 2011 - 01:16 AM

This is pretty good- I like how you put the Mysterious Figure into your story. I hope you continue writing, keep your story going ^.^

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Posted 10 June 2011 - 01:57 PM

Awesome! Can't wait for the next one :D

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Posted 10 June 2011 - 02:44 PM


#14 The Transcendent Key

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Posted 10 June 2011 - 03:49 PM

I love all of your comments and i'm glad that all of you like my story. Here's chapter three!

Chapter Three: Answers

Riku enters the portal that Dexeres opened, and for a moment finds himself drifting in a vortex of darkness. After a few seconds, he appears at the door of the Mysterious Tower. He looks around to be sure that no Heartless or Unborn followed him. Then he approaches to open the door but hears voices, so he closes in on the door to listen.
Flora: Oh, I'm so worried, it's been two days since the master has been inside his chambers. He has'nt come out for even a moment.
Fauna: I'm sure it's nothing too serious. Maybe he is studying one of his books. With the war looming like a dreaded fog, he must be researching.
Merryweather: I feel something of ill omen is about to happen. This troubles my mind too much.
Suddenly, Riku enters through the door.
Riku: Excuse me, I wish to speak to Yen-Sid.
Flora: I'm afraid the master is busy at the moment.
Riku: I'm sure he has time for an old friend.
Fauna: But the master should not be-
Riku: There is no time for delays, I have to talk to him!
Merryweather: I like him, he takes action!
Riku knocks on the door-Yen-Sid, it's me, Riku.
Yen-Sid: Proceed.
Riku: Master, I've brought the artifact, what is it?
Yen-Sid: Ah, you have found it. Well done, as for what it is, I have done some research. It is called the Atarax meteor shard, an item that, if used properly, can bestow unimaginable power upon the user. But I keep reading, but i don't seem to find how must it be used.
Riku: Then what good is this for?
Yen-Sid: That is for you to find out, my friend, I am leaving the meteor shard in your care.
Riku: Master, are you sure?
Yen-Sid: Yes, Riku, your control over darkness and light ensure me that the shard is in good hands.
Then, suddenly, Dexeres appears from behind.
Yen-Sid: Ah, so you've come as well.
Riku: You know him?
Yen-Sid: Yes, Dexeres, he joined us not too long ago. An astounding ally.
Dexeres: Baron is safe for now. All the Unborn have been destroyed.
Riku: Wait, the Unborn. Yen-Sid, they appeared out of thin air when this man in a hood appeared.
Yen-Sid: This is far worse than i could have imagined.
Instantly, the troubled Yen-Sid sits to think.
Riku: Master-
Dexeres: He's fine, just troubled.
Riku: Who is the man in the hood?
Dexeres: He never revealed his name, but I've known him for a long time. He used to be my friend, but he always wanted to push the boundaries of his abilities and so he began going to the realm of darkness and back to examine and learn to utilize the darkness's true potential.
Riku: How could he go and leave to the realm of darkness as he pleased?
Dexeres: His mastery of darkness allowed him to come and go. I learned to wield the darkness by myself, in the hopes of using it for good. But then he betrayed me, and killed everything I held dear. I tried to stop him, but he released my heart. I was slowly creeping toward death's cold embrace, when I saw a faint glimmer of light. I reached out to it, and suddenly, I was reborn as a Nobody...
Riku: What!? You're a nobody!? But how do you remember your past?
Dexeres: I'm not sure, but i think the faint light had something to do with it.
Yen-Sid: You must go to Radiant Garden, I sense something is going to happen.
Riku: No, Kairi and the others, they're in danger! Dexeres, we have to go!
Dexeres: Right!
In the blink of an eye, Dexeres opens another portal.-Let's go quick!-
Riku: Wait, Master, why are the Unborn appearing?
Yen-Sid: The hooded man is the source of them, he has the soul of pure evil, more powerfull then Xehanort himself.
When Riku hears this, he rushes in to the portal along with Dexeres. They go to Radiant Garden in the hopes that they can prevent the dire event Yen-Sid forsees. What will happen? And where is Sora? Stay tuned for Chapter Four: Arrival in Radiant Garden...

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Posted 10 June 2011 - 07:35 PM


Man I just love Dexeres though he's pretty beastly and my favorite charector

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Posted 10 June 2011 - 07:55 PM

i want more MF!

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Posted 10 June 2011 - 08:26 PM

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Posted 11 June 2011 - 01:21 PM

Must read more~! :D

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Posted 11 June 2011 - 07:44 PM

a,w,e,s,o,m,e AWESOME!

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Posted 11 June 2011 - 11:54 PM

Thanks so much, everyone, for reading my story and posting your comments, here's chapter four! ;)

Chapter Four: Arrival in Radiant Garden

Now, Riku and Dexeres rush desperately to Radiant Garden, hoping they are not too late to prevent Yen-Sid's prediction. Riku thinks in his mind, what could the Mysterious Figure want in Radiant Garden? Meanwhile, Ventus is sitting in a corner of the training garden, thinkig.
Trish: Ventus, are you alright? You look sad.
Ventus: .......
Trish: Oh, I don't like seeing you like this. Hmmm, ah, wait here.
Trish goes into the garden and picks some flowers for Ventus, she thinks-maybe this will make him feel better- She knows that it's not easy for him, but she just wants to make him feel less depressive.
Trish: Here, these are for you.
Ventus:*she picked flowers for me?* Thanks, they're beautiful.
Trish: Yay, you're smiling again. That's much better. See you later.
As Trish walks away, Ventus looks at her and then looks at the flowers she gave him. -*Trish....* Suddenly, he hears a familiar voice- Hey, are you all right?-
Ventus: Aqua! You're back!
Aqua: Yeah, but hey, why the long face?
Ventus: It's.....nothing.
Aqua: Ven, I can tell something's wrong, come on, you can tell me.
Ventus: It's just that, I've been having this feeling that he might come back, and if that happens, everyone will die...
Aqua: Vanitas!
Ventus: As long as I exist, he will come back.
Aqua: Ven, please don't think that way.
But before she says anything else, the sky suddenly darkens. Then, mysterious beams of darkness descend upon the outskirts of Radiant Garden, and Unborn rise from the ground.
Ventus: What's happening!?
Aqua: Whatever it is, it can't be good!
Then, on the other side, Riku and Dexeres appear from the dark portal and arrive in the courtyard.
Dexeres: They're here already, come on, we have to hurry.
Riku: Hey,wait-
But before his eyes, Dexeres already left.
Riku: Incredible, he's so fast, I can't even see him.
Trish: Riku? Is that you?
Riku: Trish, what are you doing here?
Trish: I saw something strange and I was going to see what it was.
Riku: We have to go and protect the castle! Come on!
They hurry to reach the castle, and in the meantime, the Unborn destroy everything in sight.
Aqua: No, there are too many!!!
Suddenly Leon appears from behind.
Leon: Blasting Zone! Go, I'll take it from here, go to the library with Kairi and the others. Go now!!!
Aqua leaves with Ventus while Leon fends off the Unborn.
Dexeres: Don't worry, you're not alone. Shadow Lance!
Riku: Twilight Sharpshooter!!!
Leon: Guys, what are these things?
Riku: Unborn.
Leon: Huh, first Heartless, then Nobodies and now these things...
Dexeres: Dark Teleport!
In just moments, many of the Unborn fall dead on the ground, while more come.
Leon: There's no end to them, there are too many!
Dexeres: I sense a light approaching, a strong one...
Suddenly, a beam of light strikes all of the Unborn, a light so bright that it almost blinds Riku and the others.
Riku: Sora!
Sora: Riku, everyone, are you all right?
Riku: Barely, you made it just in time.
Dexeres: You finnaly show up? What was the delay?
Sora: Huh? Who is he?
Riku: His name is Dexeres, he is our ally.
Sora: Oh ok.
Dexeres: Where is Donald and Goofy?
Goofy: Hiya, fellas!
Donald: We came as soon as we could!
Kairi: Sora, you're here!
Kairi quickly runs to Sora and hugs him, and Sora hugs her back. Everything seems to be peacefull for now. Was the Unborn's attack on Radiant Garden what Yen-Sid foretold? Where could the Mysterious Figure be? Stay tuned for Chapter Five: Plans...

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