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Kingdom Hearts Anthology Part IV: Darkness of the XIII.

Kingdom Hearts Anthology Organization XIII

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#21 Iamkingdomhearts1000

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Posted 15 March 2018 - 10:53 PM

Oh wow, that's very interesting! I'm intrigued by how you came upon the idea of Fryee. He sounds like a character with potential, and I can see why you'd want him to have shape-shited into Ventus, but as you said, it would've conflicted with Axel and retconned what would happen later on, ya know?  But that's interesting, though, about him being able to pass and obtain traits from others! That's a pretty dang awesome power! :D

 

Also, as for this chapter, it was awesome, and I just love how you nailed Xigbar's sarcastic personality and Xaldin's uncaring attitude! You managed to put them in conversation in a way that was believable to fans of the series and the Organization! Impressive work, man!

 

Also, Dume Initiative. Did you get Dume from Star Wars Rebels, perchance? ;)

 

Both Star Wars Rebels and Bionicle, since the latter also had a character named Dume and by realizing that Dume isn't a franchise exclusive name, i decided to use that to my advantage, know what i mean?



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Posted 15 March 2018 - 11:03 PM

Both Star Wars Rebels and Bionicle, since the latter also had a character named Dume and by realizing that Dume isn't a franchise exclusive name, i decided to use that to my advantage, know what i mean?

 

Ooh, that's right! Turaga Dume from the Metru Nui Arc of the Bionicle storyline, the one where Vakama and his friends were Toa before becoming the Turaga of Mata Nui! Dang, how did I not remember that reference as well!? You sly dog!  And yay, you watch Star Wars Rebels! Did you see the finale!?

 

But yes, glad that you used the name Dume. It's just badass to read and hear. :)



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Posted 15 March 2018 - 11:40 PM

Ooh, that's right! Turaga Dume from the Metru Nui Arc of the Bionicle storyline, the one where Vakama and his friends were Toa before becoming the Turaga of Mata Nui! Dang, how did I not remember that reference as well!? You sly dog!  And yay, you watch Star Wars Rebels! Did you see the finale!?

 

But yes, glad that you used the name Dume. It's just badass to read and hear. :)

 

I hope they make a sequel or at least have the cast of Rebels star in Star Wars Episode IX.



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Posted 16 March 2018 - 01:39 AM

The Crow's Nest-???:

 

Axel: "...Huff...puff...only, only one more...left...ga! tch, dammit, my magic, is completely running dry by the minute, at this rate, this Heartless will eat me before i can kill it, Isa, i hope you're holding up..."

 

said Axel, worried for Saix, as not too far away, Saix was seen both completely and utterly defeated by the giant bird Heartless, leaving Demyx to cower behind a tree in fear of being killed, Saix thought to himself, as he was about to be eaten by the giant bird Heartless:

 

Saix: "...L-Lea..."

 

Flashback:

 

Isa: "Huh!? say what now!?"

 

Lea: "You heard me Isa! come on! it will be fun!"

 

Isa: "Nuh uh! no way, no how! forget it!"

 

Lea: "Tch, party pooper."

 

Isa: "Lea think about it, if we try to sneak into the castle, who knows what kind of punishment they'll dish out on us."

 

Lea: "But don't you see Isa? that's part of the fun!"

 

Isa: "...I'm not following."

 

Lea: "Ugh, just use your imagination and think for a moment instead of being all stoic on me like you usually are, just think, if we sneak into the castle and then sneak out, we'll be famous! all the other kids our age will bow down and respect us! plus i think we might even get popular with the ladies, don't you think so Isa?"

 

Isa: "...Not interested."

 

Lea: "WHA!? oh COME ON!"

 

The Crow's Nest-???:

 

Saix: "We...we made..."

 

Flashback:

 

Isa: "Hey did you hear?"

 

Lea: "Huh? what?"

 

Isa: "A new kid is joining our class today."

 

Lea: "Really? who?"

 

Isa: "I think his name is-"

 

Fryee: "MY name is Fryee."

 

Isa and Lea: "!?"

 

Fryee: "Heh, pleasure to meet you both."

 

Isa and Lea: "..."

 

Lea: "...Sup."

 

The Crow's Nest-???:

 

Saix: "...We made...a..."

 

Flashback:

 

Isa: "...Why didn't you come?"

 

Lea: "...I don't do funerals, you know that."

 

Isa: "Stupid idiot, don't you remember? the promise we all made."

 

Lea: "...I forgot."

 

Isa: "...Then let me remind you knucklehead."

 

Lea: "Oh yeah!? you want to go a few rounds!? fine by me! bring it!"

 

Isa: "...The promise..."

 

Lea: "Huh?"

 

Isa: "...The promise me, you and...and him made, all three of us, together..."

 

The Crow's Nest-???:

 

Saix stood up.

 

Saix: "The promise...we made, a promise, all three, of us..."

 

Saix summons his claymore.

 

Saix: "Our promise...the one that can never be broken...surely you haven't forgotten, Lea?"

 

meanwhile, Axel was seen fighting the last hatch-ling Heartless.

 

Axel: "...!? Huh? why is, why is THAT suddenly popping up inside my mind?"

 

Flashback:

 

Fryee: "Hey Lea."

 

Lea: "Huh?"

 

Fryee: "If i...ever go away, promise me something."

 

Lea: "Go away? what are you talking about?"

 

Fryee: "Look just promise me this, i went over it with Isa, promise me..."

 

Lea: "...Huh?"

 

Fryee: "...That you will always be there...to bring each other back, even if your far apart from one another, whether in the Realm of Light or even the Realm of the Dark, always remember, the best of friends, the bond that can never, ever be broken...find that connection and bring it back, no matter what happens, never give up, on your friends, that you'll always be there, to bring them back, got it...memorized? Lea?"

 

Lea: "...You've totally lost me."

 

Fryee: "Sigh, okay, okay, just eat your ice cream..."

 

The Crow's Nest-???:

 

Axel: "...!? Isa...Fryee...heh, well what do you know...i remember, i remember, the promise...and that promise was, that i would always be there...to...BRING MY FRIENDS BACK!"

 

shouted out Axel, as he had unleashed all of his flames burning buried deep within all at once, looking like they are all dancing all at once in one huge flurry, using this amount of fire all at once, he sets the final hatch-ling Heartless on fire, completely burning it to a crisp, the giant bird Heartless can sense the last of their children having been destroyed nearby, as Saix starts to build up energy buried deep within himself, as well...

 

The World That Never Was-The Castle That Never Was-Where Nothing Gathers:

 

Xemnas: "...! ? ..."

 

a both strange and mysterious hooded figure appears in Where Nothing Gathers sitting on one of the thrones.

 

???: "..."

 

Xemnas: "..."

 

???: "..."

 

Xemnas: "...So it shall be."

 

The Crow's Nest-???:

 

Saix: "...RUN, RUN...IF YOU WANT TO LIVE, OTHERWISE...ALL...SHALL-BE-LOST-TO-YOU! GWAAAHHHH!!!!"

 

Suddenly the moon appeared within the sky above Saix, breaking the dark misty cloud barrier that was covering the World and Saix had transformed, he had transformed into a glowing green eyed monster like person, it was though he was an entirely different person altogether, the moon's Light shined upon him and the more luna energy it gave Saix, the more full of rage he became, using that rage to his advantage, he attacked the giant bird Heartless like a wild beast, attacking them with his claymore over and over again, one of the giant bird Heartlesses' heads was smashed straight into the ground whilst the other, reacting in fear, accidentally strikes Saix on his face with the claws on its feet.

 

"GRRRAAAGGGHHH!?!?"

 

Saix felt the deep pain the slash across his face gave him, as the scared giant bird Heartless tries to fly away in fear of Saix, however before it could escape, it was then that Luxord had appeared and using all of his playing cards all at once, he pinned down the fleeing Heartless before saying to Saix:

 

Luxord: "...All yours."

 

Saix looked into Luxord's eyes, as he looked back, scared by Saix's berserker change in personality, Saix was left with a bleeding X shaped scar across his face but nevertheless, the pain had now dulled by this point and using the last of his energy, Saix had shockingly transformed his claymore into a larger version of itself and with it, in a off-screen moment, he slices off the terrified bird Heartless' head, causing Luxord to look away in grim, Saix finally gave a large roar out into the sky for all to hear, Axel especially.

 

Axel: "!? I-Isa? ..."

 

Xeyfer meanwhile is seen walking into a Corridor of Darkness, lastly saying to himself:

 

"...This World...has been disconnected and now...so too has the person..."

 

after walking into the corridor, Xeyfer closes the portal behind him, as the endless roar could still be heard throughout all of the Crow's Nest.

 

(To be continued.).


Edited by Iamkingdomhearts1000, 16 March 2018 - 06:35 PM.


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Posted 16 March 2018 - 06:30 PM

The World That Never Was-The Castle That Never Was-Where Nothing Gathers:

 

Xemnas was now seen all by himself again until Xigbar appears.

 

Xigbar: "Heh heh, looks like, they finally did it, they killed not just one Xzu but actually a whole flock of them! pretty rare to see Xzu huddle up like that if you ask me-"

 

Xemnas: "The test...is over."

 

Xigbar: "Huh?"

 

Xemnas: "Xigbar, go find Xaldin again and tell him to call back the recruits, their test is over, they will all be judged upon returning..."

 

Xigbar: "OH-COME-ON! seriously!? i just got a kick out of mocking the guy after seeing his "expression"! ...sigh, fine, fine, whatever you say, LORD Xemnas...so...i take it?"

 

Xemnas: "...Indeed."

 

Xigbar: "...Heh, this should be fun."

 

Xigbar disappears, in his place appears Vexen.

 

Vexen: "L-LORD XEMNAS!!!!"

 

Xemnas: "What is it? Vexen?"

 

Vexen: "T-THE DATA I RECEIVED FROM THE CROW'S NEST! IT'S! IT'S!"

 

Xemnas: "I know what you are trying to say and it has exceeded previous intended results?"

 

Vexen: "Gulp! Y-YES!"

 

Xemnas: "Excellent, with the data received, we will now kill two birds with one stone."

 

Vexen: "My-my lord?"

 

Xemnas: "Vexen, i am ordering you to begin construction on a new project."

 

Vexen: "A new...project!? but my lord! my hands are currently tied up, as is-!?!?"

 

Xemnas gave a very evil glare towards Vexen, enough to frighten him entirely.

 

Vexen: "Y-Y-Y-Y-Y-YES! LORD XEMNAS! IT SHALL BE DONE!!!!"

 

Xemnas: "...Good...as for the name of this project, i will call it..."The Dio Initiative"."

 

Vexen: ..."Dio" my lord? gulp."

 

Xemnas: "Of course, my dear Vexen, for we are now about to ascend...into "Godhood" and it should only be fitting that we should start by calling ourselves "Gods" to begin with, don't you...agree?"

 

said Xemnas, tightly clutching a fist, as Vexen looked on completely horrified, only fearing for his own safety should he disobey his Superior's ideals.

 

(To be continued.).



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Posted 17 March 2018 - 08:35 PM

Yeah, it would be cool if the cast of Rebels was at least referenced in Episode IX! Who knows, maybe Ezra and Ahsoka could even appear! :D

 

Dang, these chapters were awesome, what a thrilling battle! I love how you also explained how Axel got his "I'll always be there to bring my friends back" promise, and the origin of Saix's scar! Gahhh, so much hype and epicness! :D



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Posted 18 March 2018 - 05:13 AM

Yeah, it would be cool if the cast of Rebels was at least referenced in Episode IX! Who knows, maybe Ezra and Ahsoka could even appear! :D

 

Dang, these chapters were awesome, what a thrilling battle! I love how you also explained how Axel got his "I'll always be there to bring my friends back" promise, and the origin of Saix's scar! Gahhh, so much hype and epicness! :D

 

Yeah, to be honest though, i'm feeling a little bit ill at the moment so i probably won't be posting, as much, as i want to, i'll let you know when a new chapter has been updated once i'm feeling a bit more better.


The Crow's Nest-???:

 

-7 Minutes Later-

 

7 minutes had passed before Saix had finally stopped roaring and had fell towards the ground unconscious, during those minutes did Luxord watch over Saix, as both Demyx and especially Axel had appeared where the former two were with Axel watching over his best friend, wondering what had happened to him, Luxord explain the whole situation to Axel with Demyx also explaining his own part in Saix's battle against the giant bird Heartless that they did not know yet were actually the Xzu Heartless that they were looking for.

 

During those slow minutes, Axel got into a fight with Demyx about how he simply cowered behind a tree before thanking Luxord for helping Saix when he did, though Luxord claims he only did so, as to both continue and complete the mission with everyone's help, realizing he could not do so alone whilst thinking to himself about having encountered Xeyfer previously, not revealing that most crucial part to both Axel and Demyx, as everyone sat around Saix, waiting for him to wake up, it was then that a Corridor of Darkness had appeared, walking from inside of it was none other then Xaldin, ordering everyone back to RTC, he explains that they had already killed the Xzus and that, as for Saix, the Dusks will carry him on a stretcher back to the medical bay of The Castle That Never Was known, as "Where Wounds Never Heal", despite being hesitant about replying to Xaldin's orders, upon his enforcement of them, Demyx quickly rushed inside the Corridor, Luxord places a hand on Axel's shoulder before following after Demyx, as Axel lastly decides to put his black coat's hood on, of which was very rare for him to ever do so, refusing to take it down until knowing that Saix was better or at the very least was up and running, Axel walked through the Corridor and with everyone now present and accounted for, Xaldin proceeds to head on into the Corridor himself but not before saying to himself the words:

 

Xaldin: "...Damn you Xigbar...you played me like a violin, i won't forget this..."

 

said Xaldin, as he then recalled a short flashback of what happened between both him and Xigbar just before the former came to collect the new recruits at the Crow's Nest.

 

(To be continued.).



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Posted 18 March 2018 - 03:12 PM

Flashback:

 

The World That Never Was-The Castle That Never Was-Twilight's View:

 

Xigbar: "Yo Xaldy, the boss man has called it in, he wants the recruits back asap, so what do you say?"

 

Xaldin looks on with anger at Xigbar.

 

Xaldin: "Xigbar...don't...ever call me "Xaldy", ever again...you...you played me for a straight and utter fool, you had me set up the test and what's worse, the Superior decided to let it proceed...why? what was your gain in all of this?"

 

Xigbar: "Gain? what "gain"? what could you possibly be talking about? "XALD-Y"?"

 

said Xigbar in a very mocking tone, as without sudden warning, Xaldin summoned one of his six lances and had pointed the tip of the spear straight at Xigbar's throat, of whom was still smirking evilly despite being threatened.

 

Xaldin: "DON'T TEST MY PATIENCE, XIGBAR, YOU MAY BE NUMBER 2 BUT THAT DOESN'T MEAN YOU HOLD COMPLETE AND ABSOLUTE AUTHORITY OVER ME."

 

said Xaldin in a very serious tone, not standing for Xigbar's "comedic acts" any longer, as he replied with the following words:

 

Xigbar: "Your right, your right, i'm sorry..."

 

Xigbar moved the spear's tip away from his neck.

 

Xigbar: "Sorry...that you are a complete and utter sucker!"

 

Xigbar summoned one of his Arrowguns and had aimed it directly at Xaldin's forehead, Xaldin proceeded to jump backwards and defend himself in a sphere of wind, covered by three of his lances whilst the other three were being used to combat Xigbar.

 

Xigbar: "Let's go over facts, shall we? ..."Dilan"? first and foremost, I was the one who found Xehanort when he first appeared in Radiant Garden, that makes ME his official number 2, numero secondo, the big 2nd in command of the Organization, i mean yeah sure, i may not look or act the part but i still carry out my duties willingly, Xaldin, unlike some others i know of in the Organization, the point is, the only reason our lord and master Superior, Xehanort, A-K-A Xemnas only keeps around those that have failed him more then once is because he still thinks they can be of use to the Organization, that's why none of them have been turned into a Dusk or outright destroyed, we all have a part to play in this grand scheme of things, so i suggest we lay down our weapons like the "gentlemen" that we are and try to make a good impression in front of lord Xemnas, don't you agree? "LORD XEMNAS"?"

 

Xaldin: "What? ? ! !?!?"

 

Just then, Xaldin notices at the top of the stairs both shockingly and surprisingly Xemnas himself! Xaldin dis-summons his weapons before immediately bowing towards Xemnas with Xigbar also dis-summoning his weapons, however, unlike the former, he does not bow, instead only evilly smirking at this sudden turn of events.

 

Xaldin: "MY-MY LORD XEMNAS! forgive me! i was-"

 

Xemnas: "..."

 

Xemnas merely turned his back and had left the premise, as Xigbar lastly says towards Xaldin:

 

Xigbar: "...Ta ta for now Xaldy, keep up the good work."

 

said Xigbar, following right behind Xemnas, as Xaldin still bowing lastly says to himself in anger:

 

Xaldin: "...Tch! XIGBAR!! ..."

 

(To be continued.).


Edited by Iamkingdomhearts1000, 18 March 2018 - 03:32 PM.


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Posted 18 March 2018 - 11:07 PM

Oh wow, I hope that you feel better as soon as possible, man! I'll have you in my prayers, I hope you have a swift recovery! :)

 

And wow, Xigbar really loves to just play around with other people's emotions and nerves, eh? Lol, that's what makes his character so interesting and irritating at the same time! You never do know what Xigbar has in his head, ya know? Great chapters, as always! :D



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Posted 18 March 2018 - 11:09 PM

Oh wow, I hope that you feel better as soon as possible, man! I'll have you in my prayers, I hope you have a swift recovery! :)

 

And wow, Xigbar really loves to just play around with other people's emotions and nerves, eh? Lol, that's what makes his character so interesting and irritating at the same time! You never do know what Xigbar has in his head, ya know? Great chapters, as always! :D

 

Thanks, next upcoming chapters we'll see golden eyed, pointy eared Saix.



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Posted 19 March 2018 - 11:39 PM

Thanks, next upcoming chapters we'll see golden eyed, pointy eared Saix.

 

Ooh, awesome! I can't wait to see that! :D



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Posted 22 March 2018 - 02:09 PM

Ooh, awesome! I can't wait to see that! :D

 

Sorry i haven't been writing lately, been playing Final Fantasy VII on the PS4, on the bit where they are about to ram Cid's Rocket into Meteor.



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Posted 23 March 2018 - 08:35 PM

Sorry i haven't been writing lately, been playing Final Fantasy VII on the PS4, on the bit where they are about to ram Cid's Rocket into Meteor.

 

It's alright, no need to apologize! Just take your time! Ooh, so you're playing FFVII, then? That's awesome! I'm playing through it as well, though I'm still on the beginning hours! It's a great game so far! :)



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Posted 25 March 2018 - 02:34 PM

It's alright, no need to apologize! Just take your time! Ooh, so you're playing FFVII, then? That's awesome! I'm playing through it as well, though I'm still on the beginning hours! It's a great game so far! :)

 

I'm now playing FFVII and FFIX on the PS4 simultaneously, i'm stuck on the final boss for VII so i'm doing IX in the meantime until i figure out a way to beat Safer Sephiroth.



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Posted 25 March 2018 - 08:53 PM

I'm now playing FFVII and FFIX on the PS4 simultaneously, i'm stuck on the final boss for VII so i'm doing IX in the meantime until i figure out a way to beat Safer Sephiroth.

 

Ah, I see! Ooh, and Final Fantasy IX! That's my second favorite FF after FFIV! Trust me, you'll love the game, it's soooo good, it's really in the vein of the first Final Fantasies in the sense that the characters and setting are in a medieval style, as opposed to VII And VIII's steampunk style, ya know?



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Posted 25 March 2018 - 09:11 PM

Ah, I see! Ooh, and Final Fantasy IX! That's my second favorite FF after FFIV! Trust me, you'll love the game, it's soooo good, it's really in the vein of the first Final Fantasies in the sense that the characters and setting are in a medieval style, as opposed to VII And VIII's steampunk style, ya know?

 

Yeah, i know what you mean, by the way, i've started a Manga/Anime Dissidia styled story in case your interested in reading it, i think its turned out good, i know i'm doing multiple stories all at once but to be honest, i like to write about what i feel in a certain moment of time, know what i mean?



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Posted 26 March 2018 - 08:30 PM

Yeah, i know what you mean, by the way, i've started a Manga/Anime Dissidia styled story in case your interested in reading it, i think its turned out good, i know i'm doing multiple stories all at once but to be honest, i like to write about what i feel in a certain moment of time, know what i mean?

 

Ooh, sweet! I'll get to reading it as soon as I'm able! I have to catch up to your other two KH Anthology works first, and then I'll get to Dissidia! :3